sslovoe

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Hi, I never read your stories. Could you please tell me where to find them?
i agree his story most creative for anna with novel detail make anna fell look real than game
and cant look all part story he make in post here
he most make page in literotica page
and collect his story chapter for not lost and can read all one place
 
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My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.
 

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no old people
in either option you choose to play she is a hoe. she wants to be bred. its a slow burn either way. either she will just leave an become a full fledged hoe or she will just cheat on him.. this isnt an ntr or nts game , its just which way will she decide to cheat on him VN
 
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My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.
Youngest at the bottom oldest at the top. Letting them get a shot before they die. Making sure they get a..happy ending.:ROFLMAO:
 
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andromeda421

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My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.

While not sure about No. 3 (they had to little interaction with Anna), Chris could be her blowjob trainer and Robinson her anal trainer)
 
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While not sure about No. 3 (they had to little interaction with Anna), Chris could be her blowjob trainer and Robinson her annal trainer)
The anal trainer will be a penguin if it is added to the game and if the creator finds time for it.:eek::ROFLMAO:
 

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My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.
I just noticed number 11 nope
 

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Hi guys. You must have noticed that there is no blackmail in the version I wrote. This story is about Anna's mental transformation at a time when her life was turned upside down. The feeling of revenge she felt for David's betrayal and Keandra's malicious encouragement bring out a dark side that is already in her nature. This situation unexpectedly creates a chance for the old fish who is normally way out of her league. And the old pervert who had been dying for such an opportunity all his life, uses some of his congenital physical and hormonal abnormalities to gives the hot lawyer experience physical and mental pleasures beyond her belief. As a result, no matter how hard Anna tries to resist, she completely surrenders to the dark impulses that are repressed somewhere inside her. So there is no blackmail or coercion. There is just a relentless war between the two of them. Dark-Light, Virtue-Corruption, Quality-Sleazy, Wisdom - Ignorance, Beauty-Ugliness...
I'm writing a new chapter but I'm undecided about publishing. This may seem a bit extreme for some types. :)
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Awh the infamous Jess2001... Sadly, it's only of late that I've become familiar with your thoughts and work Nevertheless, I'd like to pick your thoughts and get your take


Hi guys. You must have noticed that there is no blackmail in the version I wrote. This story is about Anna's mental transformation at a time when her life was turned upside down. I'd like to ask you with in the story's canon if you think Anna's desire for revenge is more an excuse to allow herself to tread on the dark path or is a tool she uses to make herself feel better. It's clear Anna "knows" David has cheated(sic) but holds out some hope David is guiltless. Still, I've always thought Anna was more invested in being married and the concept of marriage then being invested in David. As a side note, unrelated I've always held one can be married without the legal papers that says you are married and, legally married but not be married in spirit.
The feeling of revenge she felt for David's betrayal and Keandra's malicious encouragement bring out a dark side that is already in her nature. Excellent in my view that you are taking Mr. Palmer's outline of Anna's character and it's not others corrupting her but she herself is otherwise corrupted and flawed. It's a huge difference when you are discussing a character's motivation.
This situation unexpectedly creates a chance for the old fish who is normally way out of her league. And the old pervert who had been dying for such an opportunity all his life, uses some of his congenital physical and hormonal abnormalities to gives the hot lawyer experience physical and mental pleasures beyond her belief. How much of a plot problem might that be? Everyone knows that Chris and Jake make the most sense and is the most logical paths. I've always held there has to be a darker more insidious reasons with any old fossil would have a possibility with her. It's easy to see how Hank has a path toward Anna (being a boss, influencer to her future, a threat to her financial situation), but and I can be wrong, Mr. Palmer isn't going to go down that route by itself. So, that said would it be more a hidden kink in Anna's fantasies to be used and exploited like some bondage play?

As a result, no matter how hard Anna tries to resist, she completely surrenders to the dark impulses that are repressed somewhere inside her. So there is no blackmail or coercion. There is just a relentless war between the two of them. Dark-Light, Virtue-Corruption, Quality-Sleazy, Wisdom - Ignorance, Beauty-Ugliness... A past of repressed exploration and unfulfilled desires?


I'm writing a new chapter but I'm undecided about publishing. This may seem a bit extreme for some types
 

Sadowdark

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In the original story, her experiences with Mr. Stenstromberstein and Marvin give us hints of Anna's dark side. No woman would allow someone, especially an old pervert, to touch her body just because she feels sorry for him. And no woman licks a banana while fantasizing about an old pervert just because she feels sorry for him :) So there's enough evidence to suggest that she has a fetish for horny old man.
In fact, her husband's betrayal creates an environment for her to get to know herself again Kendra's plays rekindle some urges that she had completely forgotten and repressed. These are all excuses for her to reflect her true nature. The story tells of her inner battles, her mental transformation and her gradual degeneration.
It was known that she liked old geezers and immediately subordinated herself to them because of her strict father.
 

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It was known that she liked old geezers and immediately subordinated herself to them because of her strict father.
The problem was not just her father was strict...The problem was she tried to make her father proud and happy but he didn't appreciated her success or whatever she has achieved, he was never proud or happy about it. That's where she got a habit to please old people to make them happy. It makes her happy if she gets compliment or praised by old guys. A kind of itch to be happy or to get compliment from old guys by pleasing them kind of feeling which she never get from her own father.
 

DarthSpitz717

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The problem was not just her father was strict...The problem was she tried to make her father proud and happy but he didn't appreciated her success or whatever she has achieved, he was never proud or happy about it. That's where she got a habit to please old people to make them happy. It makes her happy if she gets compliment or praised by old guys. A kind of itch to be happy or to get compliment from old guys by pleasing them kind of feeling which she never get from her own father.
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I like your theories because they follow classic Daddy Issues problems. Perhaps not the mythical "daddy issues" most think of, especially when it comes to sexual interests.

In the game we get a taste of what Anna and her father's hangup was. But if we think of Anna growing up stemming from what we know, Anna's issues come from emotional neglect. Anna strove for any warm emotional connects with her father, but suspect those moments were too few and far in between. To get her father's admiration and attention, she worked to succeed to get those warm responses from her father. But it sounds like he would give her so much and kept pushing her to do more.

You're bound to get a whole kitchen sink of phycological quirks. Resentment on Anna's part for not having her achievements not fully recognized. Rebellion from Anna when she has to sacrifice too much to get what positive attention gets, and from her father's harsh rules. The need for a loving connection with her father. And then there is that desire for attention Anna would want for her success and to be praised.

Something I've noticed in the last update was a lot of second guessing on Anna's part for deciding to marry David using her father's appraisal of David. It's possible it's one more "excuse" Anna is using to move herself forward and justifying some of her current actions. "Daddy was right," is a lot of Anna's thinking. Maybe am reading too much into it, but it seems she is realizing why it was she chose David because he was so unlike her father, but now like her father David is making demands of her, even though she being an adult can make her own decisions.

We are already getting Anna doing compare and contrast of the males around her verses David. And it's looking on Anna's score card David is falling behind... just saying. I wish the next release was already out to see if all this tracks. But I suspect and am likely wrong, but I think we are going to get too much Marvin and not enough of Anna soul searching.
 
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