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bamachine
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OK, I was going to give this game a real shot. Even used urm to rename the best friend after myself, planning on making it so he was the only one to get to fuck her. I slogged all the way through the first two chapters but the game has way too many damn creeps trying to get with her. Not to mention the crazy bitch behind it all. The MC seems like a stand up dude, if he was more of a loser, I might not feel for him. The last straws for me was the old fuck talking about possibly giving her roofies at a bar, then the ugly fucking bowl cut head planning something with Rob. It all just got too goddamned much.
Why can't any dev just write a simple, loser husband/boyfriend with one actual cheating interest that isn't scum of the earth? Hell, even have multiple guys but don't make them detestable.
Why can't any dev just write a simple, loser husband/boyfriend with one actual cheating interest that isn't scum of the earth? Hell, even have multiple guys but don't make them detestable.
xert13
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I believe it is based on or partially on a story in literotica. So, it is not exactly an original story. Dev just brought it to life.
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I like your honesty even though I disagree with you in spirit, but at least I see your point.
And no, I'm not going to try and change your mind, but I hope to give you a few perspectives to at least think about. First of all, this isn't a corruption story, the MC, Anna, is already corrupted but honest. She honestly wanted to be a good wife and wanted to be faithful--not so much from an inner moral compass but what society expects of her and even to that point she even fooled herself. But... Anna was/is easily aroused, she is naturally very sexual, and she has too many issues from her past. Plus without it loudly being said is just to frustrated how slow her life is progressing... throw in some personal vanity and over sense of self-worth. That is the plot device that even makes the Marvin path plausible
The other aspect is in real life if a very pretty woman is willing to accept attention and at least appear to invite more, scumbags are going to circle around her... I've seen it too many times myself
But then there are the industry realities of these games. You have the problem of the time it takes to produce the material and keep it interesting for a majority to follow the project. And that is the truth of it, numbers. More people now are howling that someone hasn't already nailed Anna or asking when does it happen. Those of us that loves a good story and plot are rather few compared to the rest. But even taken all that into account... what one path do you want if there was just one?
Marvin? Hank? Chris?... etc.... then who besides just yourself would want to play the game? I'll be honest. The only reason I support the game is because of Marvin. Not because some old man gets it on with a goddess because it's the most implausible plot that is working.
Now if Mr. Palmer did the updates as I would have them done, it would be a year between update
bamachine
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I have no issues with the FMC, or her sexuality, other than for someone of her supposed intelligence, she is awfully "blonde" at times. I can look past that though. I get that she is a freak trying to fit into an image society and her father had pushed her into.
My main issues is just how every other person in her life, except her husband, her daughter and maybe her mom(wouldn't put it past them to turn her into a witch) is a total POS.
Yes, I know the realities of people being garbage humans. Just don't make every other character that way. Maybe give her a "safe" option. I was hoping that the Chris character really was in love with her and not just trying to fuck her. But he just seems like the least sleazy, at moments he actually seems to care about her but then he goes back to being an asshat.
As I mentioned in another reply, I don't believe in cheating but in a game, I am fine with it, if it is a great story. This is not a great story, it is the same collection of monsters, the creepy old guy, the fatass power tripping boss, the office Lothario, the pervy neighbor, the husband's friends who are anything but, add in a psychopath trying to ruin her life. It is just too much.
To me, it would be so much better with a bit more likeable characters. As it is, there are only two and they are both being targeted by every other character in the game.
I did play this all the way thru, I even replayed it in a desparity manner, thus choosing all negative options to see how far she would go into the negative and how that would effect her psych. Despite not liking how the FMC dealt with things I could see the brilliance in how another person behind the scenes is manipulating these events going on in their lives.
As the story progress's, I can only hope the Dev puts in perhaps a recovery option , I would like to think that if one person did hold the line in Truth and Honesty, That would get rewarded. lol Yeah... right.
Some of the code should be changed, if you select that you want nothing to do with this old guy? it really removes him from the equation. Some of it did not make sense from the stand point of his or her's options. Like the Equation does not add up. They would not! allow some stranger or old guy to touch them at all? without getting upset. I get some things have to happen for the story to develop and move in the direction you want! I think it can still be done.
This is horrible but as an example, it shows someone did roofie her drink without her knowledge and thus your making the FMC or MC drink something they would never take with full awarness. This will open up the introduction to the old guys and others really. Guilt and self loathing would then begin playing on their moral core.
This is a good Erotic Perilous story brought to life . I just wanted it to be longer! more chapters! More variables involved. Maybe that comes down the road? we just have to stay tuned. Same Bat Channel! Same Bat Time! Thats a joke for those who get it.
As the story progress's, I can only hope the Dev puts in perhaps a recovery option , I would like to think that if one person did hold the line in Truth and Honesty, That would get rewarded. lol Yeah... right.
Some of the code should be changed, if you select that you want nothing to do with this old guy? it really removes him from the equation. Some of it did not make sense from the stand point of his or her's options. Like the Equation does not add up. They would not! allow some stranger or old guy to touch them at all? without getting upset. I get some things have to happen for the story to develop and move in the direction you want! I think it can still be done.
This is horrible but as an example, it shows someone did roofie her drink without her knowledge and thus your making the FMC or MC drink something they would never take with full awarness. This will open up the introduction to the old guys and others really. Guilt and self loathing would then begin playing on their moral core.
This is a good Erotic Perilous story brought to life . I just wanted it to be longer! more chapters! More variables involved. Maybe that comes down the road? we just have to stay tuned. Same Bat Channel! Same Bat Time! Thats a joke for those who get it.
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To be honest, I think you're in the wrong aisle, maybe even the wrong store. This is an NTR story. At its core, NTR is about corruption, it's not about love or cheating or kinks (they can exist but are secondary).
That's why Chris is also my favourite. His slow corruption of his best friend's wife through words while leveraging his position as a trusted friend is absolutely delectable.
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I have the same sad feeling that we will have to wait a year or more for some bolder action.
Sadowdark
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The NTR path with only corruption and no other choices is just incredibly boring and predictable. There's no point in playing it unless you're a fan of that sort of thing. I prefer to balance it. I can have different saves on different paths. Or, in this game, I'm more interested in the story than the corruption. That doesn't mean I won't play one of the other paths. There are three paths, to be precise.
NTR corruption games with vanilla route is the best, sadly its rare.
This game definitely has vanilla route.
I agree here.
I like NTR, but mostly those that have a single cheating interest. He can be scummy, but not super unrealistic.
Like ugly old bastards, it's just too unrealistic for me.
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All of them are bastard, but Chris is the bastard among bastards, the only thing that made you can't really see that fact is because of his appearance, just imagine if you swap his face with Marvin, peoples will want him die from day 1. In prison peoples like him will get stab for being a snake and a snitch.
The worst is Jake, he may just want to fuck her like all the others but he knows full well that Kendra will use it to destroy Anna's marriage and life, so my question is, how can you possibly like this asshole, he is no better than anyone else,he is even worse,
his charming appearance is a lie
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He's not David's best friend.
I never said I like Jake, just re-read my post carefully.
Agreed that he's an asshole, what I was saying is there's a spectrum of assholeness to the point that among assholes there's an asshole, and that's Chris.
Irl this fairly common. You get backstabbed by people you share your deepest secrets. Chris might b shown lustful towards Anna but underneath lies a deep sated envy for someone with whom he grew up, who got better things in life and who is overall a much better human being than him. Chris doesn’t want to just fuck Anna, he literally wants to make Davids life miserable. Sadly David deserves it for not recognising the snake Chris is.
Naah jakes just confused with what he wants. It’s just the way his character is sketched. For better or worse, Jake got cucked by Marvin in second to last update.
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Each male character has their own motives and yes, most just want Anna a plaything. Now can there be some variations sure. Marvin if he could possess Anna, he surely wouldn't just have a one-and-done with Anna. Grant's bio says he'd love to keep Anna.... Robinson is just your average man whore... Chris, is just toxic through and through as a person because he's willing to get what he wants even though it hurts Anna (whom he as a friendship with) and his best friend, David--and burn the bridges to those relationships
So, is the game just a long list of hopefuls? No not really--and mas the game gets to the end, motivations may change, and the developer can throw a few surprises at us along the way