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Fair question.
For now, there are elements of the story on my path that I like; I just don't see any characters right now with any redeeming qualities. I'm not expecting Mother Theresa but I can't say that I enjoy or am intrigued by any of the characters here.
At the moment, I like that none of the characters' plots succeeded yet (no one failed, but they aren't getting the outcomes they wanted [yet]):
-No one other than David (one time) has had sex of any sort with Anna
-In spite of all the deception Janet has given to Anna, Anna still has not fully swallowed the bait
-Janet's conspiracy is showing cracks as Jake and Marvin appear to be wavering in their support of her
-Other than feeling up Anna, Chris has failed to make significant progress with her
I like that the story is teasing, at least that:
-David is beginning to "wake up" at least a little to what's going on around him; I could like this character if he just weren't so gullible and clueless
-Exculpatory evidence is known (Leonard's testimony) even though David-Anna don't know that yet
-Janet's conspiracy is showing risk of falling apart as Jake (and, perhaps, Marvin) begin to consider blowing the whistle on her
-Janet is becoming more delusional the longer she remains unmedicated; she is beginning to risk exposing herself
-Anna appears to "want" to believe David but still needs a "push" of some sort to get past Janet's fake news
-Some of the men are beginning to look for ways to turn on each other in competition for Anna (Chris v. Leonard, for example)
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This is a pretty good post, though I'll have to answer it does not quiet you are looking for:
1) David... It's not that David has done anything wrong but the mistakes he has made and weakness of his character (not as game character, but character as personality). First (and the story doesn't say what the facts are) how much of his dating Anna then marrying Anna more an ego boost? What is mentioned he was intimidated and not thinking himself enough to win Anna; how much did he overlook about Anna lost in a beautiful woman showing interest in him? Just how much is Anna a trophy as much as a mate? If he knew Anna was vulnerable to men's attention, did he plan to spend the rest of his life mate guarding Anna...?
Ok we know David is innocent, so does David. What does he do about it? He looks for Alexia--what if he found her was, he going to make her confess? And if someone went through all the trouble of planting a condom, took pictures, and had a stranger show up to confront Anna, what thought process did David go through? He couldn't even find a reasonable motive for someone to be out there to destroy him, a little bookkeeper in a nothing family own business--but did he ever think that Anna being an attorney would have rivals looking to distract Anna from an important case but messing with her marriage... and now he's talking to a PI
2) Anna... It's one thing to be the victim but it's another to play the victim card. You can't justify your bad actions because of another's (David). It's just a matter of honesty with oneself. Anna has done far worst then betrayed David physically but has emotionally.
3) Chris... When you stand with someone and promise your loyalty as BF, best man and maybe even godfather (don't think Chris is a godfather), you have a special obligation. In this case Chris is betraying a brother and a sister because that is how tight such relationships are supposed to be.
4) Leonard, Robinson, Timothy/Dale, Hank, Jake, Grant... The world is full of creeps, but these creeps are opportunist. Would make no difference if Anna was single or married.
5) Marcel... You missed that one, LOL! Sure he's not in the picture at the moment and maybe just have some bit part, but it's his motives I find questionable. HE's looking for a sugar momma if you recall the scene.
6) Marvin... All things being equal he should have no chance with Anna; however, things are not equal. A life spent in the shadows living a pathetic existence, but now he is lost in the chase of something he's always desired and has a chance at it. Marvin is blinded.
7) Kendra... she gets the insanity defense because she is batshit crazy and in some ways a lot like Marvin, singularly driven
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Davids downfall is Anna. He tells Anna too much, he revealed he was going to get a PI. Anna knowing she is dirty. Is going to derail it to protect herself. She is aware what she is doing is wrong even if she monologues, she is doing nothing wrong. David needs to stop talking and just do.
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I agree with you but I would add Chris to the mix, too.
When what you're doing doesn't work, you need to do something differently ("Trying the same thing while expecting different results...").
At some point, David must realize the correlation between what fails to work and what he tells Chris and/or Anna, right?
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Out of a hundred wise decisions, David makes maybe two that are good, the rest are all bad. And he rarely draws conclusions. Instead of keeping an eye on the yard, because the fox is in the henhouse, he focuses on the office, where a whole pack of wolves is.
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Yes I agree with a lot of points you made there. David KNOWS Chris has the hots for his wife and he is usually very perceptive towards the men who is eyeing his wife. But when he seeks Chris's help, he should have at least pondered on the chances of Chris burning their friendship to get into his wife's pants. Both Anna & David are guilty of this by the way with trusting Chris in having their best interests at heart. Anna of all people should know that Chris has ulterior motives but seemed to be absolutely oblivious or tolerant to it. MP could have written that part better.
I'm not sure you read the original novel of this story, David will uncover the truth on its own towards the end of story but by that time, Anna has already been unfaithful and thus sends David to a breaking point in their relationship. Instead of proving himself as a loyal husband, he has to find ways to accept that his wife has been unfaithful because of her distrust in her husband.
Anna having so little faith and easily being manipulated by people she knew for less than 1 week is a bit of a stretch in terms of writing by MP but it is what is now. I'm just hoping the faithful path would really set everything right in the end and make those evil conspirators pay for what they've done.
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I haven't read the literotica piece in full but I did see parts of it. After the reviews I saw here I decided not to read it. A story where a man is framed then his wife cheats then he agrees to keep her... ...would just make me angry so I didn't read it.
I agree with you for the outcome but the vibe I keep getting from these NTR games is that the MC always gets screwed over in the end and it absolutely never ends well for him. We'll see how this turns out, I suppose.
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Don't compare this original story to the game. The creator has repeatedly stated that this story will be different from the game. Yes, the story has some similarities, but that's all they have in common. One of my friends in this thread insists the story will be the same, despite countless others explaining to him that the original story will be different. Until he slowly realizes that the game won't follow the original. As for Anna, she knows exactly what Fake Fried (Chris) wants. Even during their first meeting, without even knowing her, he proposed sex in his home's jacuzzi while David went out to get drinks for them. Anna turned him down, saying she wouldn't feel comfortable with David. There's also some interesting dialogue when Kendra asks Anna if she'd fuck Fake Friend (Chris). "Anna could do it anytime, but it's too boring and predictable." As you can see, Anna is aware of Fake Friend's (Chris) desires.
Knowing and not acting on it are 2 different things and she is constantly contradicting herself in her reasoning for 'helping' Chris. She wants to fix her marriage but she trusts Chris would help her cock-blocking himself? Doesn't make any sense to me why would Anna think Chris would even side with David at all. She could've used her sexuality to lure Chris to give her more info on David without succumbing to her own hypocrisy.
On to the literoica version, I wouldn't say they are just similar, it is almost an adapted version and MP expanded on it by introducing more characters and thus the plot, that's where they are different. But the gist of it is almost a carbon copy IMO.
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Ok. And, knowing all that:
(Loyal path) She doesn't act nearly strongly enough to shut him down when he flirts, grabs her ass, enters her bathroom while she's showering, etc. It's true that she doesn't reciprocate in any way and she tells him "no" but sneaking out to the garage in your sleepwear to meet with him in the middle of the night? Sending him lingerie photos? Texting him from her bed in the middle of the night while refusing to talk to her husband? Having intimate discussions about sexual problems with Chris while she refuses to even consider talking to her husband? David really needs to abandon this dumpster fire and get on with his life (and, of course, he won't).
I understand she craves attention (which she rejects from her husband) but she's not doing nearly enough to keep Chris at arm's length. If she found that David had lingerie photos of another woman on his phone, she would crucify him. If she found him at the sink in the bathroom while another woman showered behind him and they casually talked... ...she would have an aneurism.
When you play with snakes you get bitten.
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Anna's nature has shaped her in various situations. She naively always says, "All guys are the same, they always want the same things, and I can defend myself against them." Which, I know, isn't true. Her greatest weakness is her extreme hunger for compliments from strangers and being the center of attention. When she receives them, she becomes vulnerable, her defenses weaken, and she's easily captured. Then anyone can do whatever they want to her, and everyone takes advantage of her and everyone exploits her if they discover her weaknesses.
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Agree with you so much on this. That's why I make the comparison to Asuna from NTR Online, she's a hypocritical cheater. Her internal monologues and her actions contradict themselves so much in both faithful and naughty/submissive path.
Really unbelievable on how did she get through 2 years of law school without being exploited or taken advantage of in any shape or form.
Obviously that didn't work when the black athlete from the bar was hitting on her hard.
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Her secret is that she
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