Story should have been kept simple. Like here Kendra is main villian. Now he added many possibilities on how kendra could be caught. Via detective, kendra making video of Ana and give it to David, somebody tell about kendra 's motivation like Jake, Someone find alexia, catch the guy who did scam David's father, Ana can get info from Marcel/Leonard after giving them bj/hj etc...And one of the possibility in the end may come true.
Kendra has so many loose end and she could get caught easily. She can be main villian but not the smart one for sure...MP doesn't want to follow original VN, so he made it so much complex with so many side storylines that everything will remain stuck until Ana becomes fully corrupt. Maybe because MP doesn't know how take the story/scene forward once David confronts kendra. I don't think MP can continue Ana's corruption after David finds out Kendra and Ana cheating on him. It will be simple decision making to stay together or get separated. So whatever corruption or scenes MP wanna show, he's doing it before David/Kendra meeting. I was hoping for the corruption to continue even after the David/Ana confrontation with marriage consular involvement but the way MP is doing, I guess this VN will wrap up quickly within 2/3 updates after David will find out about Kendra. Whenever David will confront Ana about her cheating....I would definitely wanted to see whether Ana will continue to enjoy being physical with others openly or not. but I don't think we will see this.