VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept - Aya Edition [v1.0.0s] [Hangover Cat]

[FoutL]

I really enjoyed the original game, but the pacing on this is wildly poor and conversations have been repeated, almost word for word, for many patches in a row.

My thoughts exactly, it feels like the dialogue between aya and harry is always the same, and even more so when we talk about aya and luca.

The usual depravation so far. Aya decides to get closer to Luca for her "goals" but we all know that will go backwards. I hope that this character will get a role that will actually suit her, altought she is not really the same one from the original Game.

The aya from the original game had plans and executed them but here she just goes with whatever happens with no plan and she doesnt even try to win since she can make up easy lies and cheat like luca but doesnt.

 

[Flojerazul20]

My thoughts exactly, it feels like the dialogue between aya and harry is always the same, and even more so when we talk about aya and luca.


The aya from the original game had plans and executed them but here she just goes with whatever happens with no plan and she doesnt even try to win since she can make up easy lies and cheat like luca but doesnt.

Because it's forced, it's so forced that you don't even believe it's aya, that's why the original aya is better, the only good thing is the cg

 

[abirvg]

Speaking of CG didnt the developer take a break to catch up on animations and the content? This update felt like just another normal update after the long break so what changed?

Animators that work with him were doing 'catching up', not him.

 

[Ghost'Xo]

This game easily has some of the most braindead retarded characters ever written, not a single braincell between them.

 

[FoutL]

It is disappointing that this game ended up just being a straight copy of the original, Aya is supposed to be a different character from Laura but the plot has gone the exact same way as the original.

 

[BL45T]

There is a reason why he said he can't write anything other than NTR. Because he is limited to what he can write. And that is obvious even when he writes NTR. Dude cannot think differently. He only added the Aya endings in the original route after the less abrupt ending came out in literotica which instantly got popular(relatively) and he inspired those endings from that and even then it was worse than that. Yep a fanfiction was better than his own writing.

 

[xcalibar4]

There is a reason why he said he can't write anything other than NTR. Because he is limited to what he can write. And that is obvious even when he writes NTR. Dude cannot think differently. He only added the Aya endings in the original route after the less abrupt ending came out in literotica which instantly got popular(relatively) and he inspired those endings from that and even then it was worse than that. Yep a fanfiction was better than his own writing.

Do you have the link for the fanfiction?

 

[HangoverCat]

You guys can keep whining, but it won't stop Aya's pussy from being filled up by Luca. And the best part: you can't do anything about it.

 

[ButterscotchJackson]

You guys can keep whining, but it won't stop Aya's pussy from being filled up by Luca. And the best part: you can't do anything about it.

Even though I like the character model of Laura much more, I think you've done much better with the Aya version, for what it's worth. I just hope you continue to provide multiple endings so everyone is satisfied. Like even if it's not the true ending, there needs to be at least one ending where Harry demonstrably gets the upper hand on Luca. Of course, I'm actually hoping we're not close to the end, as I need to see Aya actively rubbing her downfall in Harry's face.

 

[Kizeki]

You guys can keep whining, but it won't stop Aya's pussy from being filled up by Luca. And the best part: you can't do anything about it.

This what makes me subscribe him in patreon

 

[dean_athallah]

You guys can keep whining, but it won't stop Aya's pussy from being filled up by Luca. And the best part: you can't do anything about it.

Legend right here lads.

 

[desmosome]

Mother fuckers, wasn't the Aya endings in the original game all about her winning? And the entire purpose of this spin off was to write the alternate scenario where she gets NTRed? Why would you cry about Aya turning into typical NTR bitch when that's the entire point of this spinoff?

 

[rangabang]

You guys can keep whining, but it won't stop Aya's pussy from being filled up by Luca. And the best part: you can't do anything about it.

Let the cucks cry

 

[FoutL]

No problem with her losing, but it is just too similar to the OG game I was hoping it would go about slightly differently.

 

[Lara Snow]

You guys can keep whining, but it won't stop Aya's pussy from being filled up by Luca. And the best part: you can't do anything about it.

Please don't stop <3.

If anything be more cruel and make Harry suffer more and more and more. (Like a Route where he keeps both close and both cheat on him ♥♥)

 

[BBCinyourass]

Andrioid version please

 

[John Hentai1102]

You guys can keep whining, but it won't stop Aya's pussy from being filled up by Luca. And the best part: you can't do anything about it.

this too is also NTR

 

[Shintoru]

Can anyone upload an android version?

 

[Galentein]

Is this one gonna be a straight line to the end or are we gonna have some choice at some point?
It bother me since the first update but unlike the previous game we didn't have any choice.

I am not a fan of game with too many useless choice, i prefer less but more impactful one.

 

[FoutL]

Is this one gonna be a straight line to the end or are we gonna have some choice at some point?
It bother me since the first update but unlike the previous game we didn't have any choice.

I am not a fan of game with too many useless choice, i prefer less but more impactful one.

I'm predicting a choice at the end or near the end of this 5 days section, but I do wish there was atleast 1 choice before this point.