I knew HC would write one like this, after playing 'The Edge of.' Laura became comically evil and cruel to Harry, in the family route. To the point of why the heck did she defend him? Why did she try to build a life with him? I understand the narrative objective of this route is to get Harry to unknowingly raise Luca's kids.
However, Laura somehow, with comical levels of evil, devoid of all love she has for him, over a sex game with Luca's big penis, wreaks everything in Harry's life; his love life, his marriage, his family, possibly criminally sinks the company he works for, gets him a new doomed job under clearly sick Luca has his plaything, tricks him into drinking Luca's semen mixed coffee everyday, all the while planing to tell Harry his kids are not 'his' when they hit 20 years old. Lying to her children and Harry for all those years, just because it gets her vagina wet to cruelly ruin his life?
That's the weakest, most quick fix, forced, porn game writing I've read in this game. That's not even close to the quality of the believable start of the blackmail story. A wildly more logical ending would be, Laura births a few of Luca's children, then runs off with him leaving Harry to take care of his 'family.' Maybe Harry finds a AV staring Laura later as a big finish letting him know the truth, or something to that effect.
The normal future ending is far superior, Laura just gets taken, then moves on. Even if it still had to hit the very flashy 'cheating video' big reveal check box. Not that it's bad, there has to be something big at the end, it is a porn game after all. The animation added to the older scene in this update is great. Though I still don't understand why there wasn't a CG for Aya topless once she was drugged.
Please note, I intended this to be constructive feedback and put way more work into it than I should have.
Edit: forgot to add that she tricked Harry into drinking semen, grammar