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jojogeo

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Do you even like NTR? What do you like in it ? what is your favorite? What you are complaining about is essentially what many look for in NTR - the humiliation of husband, the fall of the girl willing to just about do anything for bigger dick.
I think he just doesn't like lazy writting.
Be careful, I didn't say the game is bad.
 
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AL.d

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I knew HC would write one like this, after playing 'The Edge of.' Laura became comically evil and cruel to Harry, in the family route. To the point of why the heck did she defend him? Why did she try to build a life with him? I understand the narrative objective of this route is to get Harry to unknowingly raise Luca's kids.

However, Laura somehow, with comical levels of evil, devoid of all love she has for him, over a sex game with Luca's big penis, wreaks everything in Harry's life; his love life, his marriage, his family, possibly criminally sinks the company he works for, gets him a new doomed job under clearly sick Luca has his plaything, tricks him into drinking Luca's semen mixed coffee everyday, all the while planing to tell Harry his kids are not 'his' when they hit 20 years old. Lying to her children and Harry for all those years, just because it gets her vagina wet to cruelly ruin his life?

That's the weakest, most quick fix, forced, porn game writing I've read in this game. That's not even close to the quality of the believable start of the blackmail story. A wildly more logical ending would be, Laura births a few of Luca's children, then runs off with him leaving Harry to take care of his 'family.' Maybe Harry finds a AV staring Laura later as a big finish letting him know the truth, or something to that effect.

The normal future ending is far superior, Laura just gets taken, then moves on. Even if it still had to hit the very flashy 'cheating video' big reveal check box. Not that it's bad, there has to be something big at the end, it is a porn game after all. The animation added to the older scene in this update is great. Though I still don't understand why there wasn't a CG for Aya topless once she was drugged.

Please note, I intended this to be constructive feedback and put way more work into it than I should have.

Edit: forgot to add that she tricked Harry into drinking semen, grammar
Although most porn games dealing with ntr/corruption fail miserably in portraying that, sexual pleasure can definitely change a person to become unrecognizable. Just like any other addiction like drugs, pills etc sex wielded as a weapon from a really manipulative person, can do just that. Fucking with someone's mind so much that they start blaming others to disassociate from their own guilt and weakness. Especially if it's also linked to related past trauma that a sociopath can exploit.

Of course most western games don't dig that deep because that would result in even more dark and depressing games than the usual ntr. So they just scratch the surface like "big dick gets my pussy going, so now I'm fine humiliating hubby". This one actually tries harder than most by western standards.
 

jxd

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The truth is that I am not interested in NTR games because most of them are triggered by very silly things, but I spent about 1 hour reading the debate of previous pages and I even wanted to try it, I want to see if you can handle the one that generates the trap or only the one who is being deceived? Personally, although he considers his own "sacrifice" in favor of another without understanding what the other will suffer. Unless as I read previous pages this implies that in advance you are going to end the relationship in the end it would make some sense. The other thing I don't quite understand is why they take childhood/platonic friends as NTR. Someone explain it to me? In order for them to take away from you, you must first have... they cannot take away what was never yours... it could make you uncomfortable, but it is nonsense to say that you can hold a grudge against them or feel betrayed when you never had a chance...
 

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I waiting for aya hary route and revenge route on luca and Laura at the end of normal ending I m literary hating Laura and in all the other route like hero and aya i will leave her I m of course playing for sex game but i also like story and my choice of story end it so i will go that route hoping it will be there
 

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Is the abrupt ending much worse than the 2 normal endings??? PLEASE ANSWER MEe

any ntr ending is fine except if the MC suicide or die, but seems bulliying make such a turn off to my dick. I really like it if the female protag do slutty things with the chad but if she helps the chad to make the life of mc more miserable that does a fking turn off lol
 

jajangnoel

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is there any aya sex scene yet? I want to fap to a new corruption segs? I love corruption by ntr, but I despise continuous bullying, post nut felt so bad

btw thanks for your hard work author
 

XerxesM_

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can u guys share the new CGs? doesn't have the time to play the update so it would be appreciated if someone share it here
 

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is there any aya sex scene yet? I want to fap to a new corruption segs? I love corruption by ntr, but I despise continuous bullying, post nut felt so bad

btw thanks for your hard work author
yeah, i think everyone feel the same. bulying somehow make the game bad lol but it's the only reason that luca can NTR the girls which is good and better hehe
 

RukuYa

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Finished reading through the new content. I liked this ending more than the first one. Personally I like the corruption process more than the end result. The past few updates (Normal End 1 and first half of Normal End 2) were less appealing to me but this most recent one was pretty good. Laura seems to retain some agency, in the sense that she is cheating on Harry with full knowledge and consent, and she still manages to tease Luca in a bratty way, so that's a plus. The CG and animations looked great especially the final scene in the kitchen. I also particularly liked the "naked dogeza" shot but I think it could have looked better if she had her clothes folded on the floor to the side (as per the kink/tag, look it up if you're interested).

Looking forward to seeing the other routes in the coming months!
 

snowman97

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is there any aya sex scene yet? I want to fap to a new corruption segs? I love corruption by ntr, but I despise continuous bullying, post nut felt so bad

btw thanks for your hard work author
No, the Aya routes will come after all Laura endings have been finished
 
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mzer0

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Oh, look. It's Bob again.

Hi, Bob.


The aspect of ex-cheater trying to be faithful is not really a corruption case but a failed redemption. It doesn't really sound like good comparison to Laura case.
I wasn't comparing it to Laura, Bob. If you read what I typed you'll see that I was deliberately creating extreme examples for simplicity's sake.

But whatever. I respect your diversity.




It wasn't virus, it was loophole in the code. How would Maya have access to the files? I don't think Luca has access either.
Laura was corrupted then, the scene in Karaoke is still during the app development. It is rather easy to imagine that Luca forced her to put that in there via rule. Also Laura knew what was the problem despite not listening to Harry.
... However, I cannot respect your diversity here.

In fact, I'm 85 to 90 percent sure that you're wrong.

Welcome to my TED Talk on the subject.

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But, of course, we'll have to wait and see. Thank you for coming to my Ted Talk. :D

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desmosome

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I knew HC would write one like this, after playing 'The Edge of.' Laura became comically evil and cruel to Harry, in the family route. To the point of why the heck did she defend him? Why did she try to build a life with him? I understand the narrative objective of this route is to get Harry to unknowingly raise Luca's kids.

However, Laura somehow, with comical levels of evil, devoid of all love she has for him, over a sex game with Luca's big penis, wreaks everything in Harry's life; his love life, his marriage, his family, possibly criminally sinks the company he works for, gets him a new doomed job under clearly sick Luca has his plaything, tricks him into drinking Luca's semen mixed coffee everyday, all the while planing to tell Harry his kids are not 'his' when they hit 20 years old. Lying to her children and Harry for all those years, just because it gets her vagina wet to cruelly ruin his life?

That's the weakest, most quick fix, forced, porn game writing I've read in this game. That's not even close to the quality of the believable start of the blackmail story. A wildly more logical ending would be, Laura births a few of Luca's children, then runs off with him leaving Harry to take care of his 'family.' Maybe Harry finds a AV staring Laura later as a big finish letting him know the truth, or something to that effect.

The normal future ending is far superior, Laura just gets taken, then moves on. Even if it still had to hit the very flashy 'cheating video' big reveal check box. Not that it's bad, there has to be something big at the end, it is a porn game after all. The animation added to the older scene in this update is great. Though I still don't understand why there wasn't a CG for Aya topless once she was drugged.

Please note, I intended this to be constructive feedback and put way more work into it than I should have.

Edit: forgot to add that she tricked Harry into drinking semen, grammar
I mean, the first ending on normal route was kinda what you wanted then. She does the NTR reveal. They obviously divorce after that. It's more likely that Harry ends up as a traumatized shut in or something rather than moving on and recovering fully, but that was the route with the kamikaze NTR reveal. I'm still going through the new ending, but it looks like the classic secret NTR.

Normal route was gonna be fucked up either way. It's checking off 2 of the common NTR endings. As for how evil she became, I mean, that's the point. Moral degeneration and NTR go hand in hand.

Based on what people are saying, there will only be like 2 endings that has anything "good" happening for Harry. We're obviously eyeing the good and hero endings here. Still, it's been said that it's not gonna be some super chad happy endings. I'm guessing the Hero ending will see Harry retain Laura's love after her NTR ordeal, and the good ending will be where Harry moves on after losing Laura and ends on a slightly more hopeful note.

I'm guessing one of the abrupt endings will see Harry turn the tables or not fall for Luca's trick with the USB. Like one of those routes in NTR games where the game says, "Congrats, you just avoided the whole story and lived happily ever after."

Aya route is gonna be Aya NTR. It makes no sense for the game to suddenly do a full Harry x Aya route based on what HC has said in the thread. At best, you might get a version in the Aya route where Harry ends up with her after she goes through all the NTR stuff with Luca.

So basically, the ending you want (where Harry moves on and recovers after NTR) is probably coming in the good route. The first ending on normal route was also kinda what you wanted. There is 0 chance they are staying together after that. If you read too many NTR doujins, you will see the writing on the wall for Harry's psyche lol. But it's still technically an open ending where he could move on.
 
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