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The first sex scene with Harry and Laura? None of the NTR yet?The first sex scene is being animated
The first sex scene with Harry and Laura? None of the NTR yet?The first sex scene is being animated
Although most porn games dealing with ntr/corruption fail miserably in portraying that, sexual pleasure can definitely change a person to become unrecognizable. Just like any other addiction like drugs, pills etc sex wielded as a weapon from a really manipulative person, can do just that. Fucking with someone's mind so much that they start blaming others to disassociate from their own guilt and weakness. Especially if it's also linked to related past trauma that a sociopath can exploit.I knew HC would write one like this, after playing 'The Edge of.' Laura became comically evil and cruel to Harry, in the family route. To the point of why the heck did she defend him? Why did she try to build a life with him? I understand the narrative objective of this route is to get Harry to unknowingly raise Luca's kids.
However, Laura somehow, with comical levels of evil, devoid of all love she has for him, over a sex game with Luca's big penis, wreaks everything in Harry's life; his love life, his marriage, his family, possibly criminally sinks the company he works for, gets him a new doomed job under clearly sick Luca has his plaything, tricks him into drinking Luca's semen mixed coffee everyday, all the while planing to tell Harry his kids are not 'his' when they hit 20 years old. Lying to her children and Harry for all those years, just because it gets her vagina wet to cruelly ruin his life?
That's the weakest, most quick fix, forced, porn game writing I've read in this game. That's not even close to the quality of the believable start of the blackmail story. A wildly more logical ending would be, Laura births a few of Luca's children, then runs off with him leaving Harry to take care of his 'family.' Maybe Harry finds a AV staring Laura later as a big finish letting him know the truth, or something to that effect.
The normal future ending is far superior, Laura just gets taken, then moves on. Even if it still had to hit the very flashy 'cheating video' big reveal check box. Not that it's bad, there has to be something big at the end, it is a porn game after all. The animation added to the older scene in this update is great. Though I still don't understand why there wasn't a CG for Aya topless once she was drugged.
Please note, I intended this to be constructive feedback and put way more work into it than I should have.
Edit: forgot to add that she tricked Harry into drinking semen, grammar
I want to see it too, she's with Lucca on the main artstyle + she's not that important atm so obviously there's gonna be a NTR route for herI don't know about you, but I want to see a unique corruption route of Aya, secretly having sex with Lucca just like Laura did, we'll be seeing that in the near future right?
yeah, i think everyone feel the same. bulying somehow make the game bad lol but it's the only reason that luca can NTR the girls which is good and better heheis there any aya sex scene yet? I want to fap to a new corruption segs? I love corruption by ntr, but I despise continuous bullying, post nut felt so bad
btw thanks for your hard work author
No, the Aya routes will come after all Laura endings have been finishedis there any aya sex scene yet? I want to fap to a new corruption segs? I love corruption by ntr, but I despise continuous bullying, post nut felt so bad
btw thanks for your hard work author
I wasn't comparing it to Laura, Bob. If you read what I typed you'll see that I was deliberately creating extreme examples for simplicity's sake.The aspect of ex-cheater trying to be faithful is not really a corruption case but a failed redemption. It doesn't really sound like good comparison to Laura case.
... However, I cannot respect your diversity here.
It wasn't virus, it was loophole in the code. How would Maya have access to the files? I don't think Luca has access either.
Laura was corrupted then, the scene in Karaoke is still during the app development. It is rather easy to imagine that Luca forced her to put that in there via rule. Also Laura knew what was the problem despite not listening to Harry.
Agreed.I don't know about you, but I want to see a unique corruption route of Aya, secretly having sex with Lucca just like Laura did, we'll be seeing that in the near future right?
You know there are various type of ntr and I hate bully types.
I mean, the first ending on normal route was kinda what you wanted then. She does the NTR reveal. They obviously divorce after that. It's more likely that Harry ends up as a traumatized shut in or something rather than moving on and recovering fully, but that was the route with the kamikaze NTR reveal. I'm still going through the new ending, but it looks like the classic secret NTR.I knew HC would write one like this, after playing 'The Edge of.' Laura became comically evil and cruel to Harry, in the family route. To the point of why the heck did she defend him? Why did she try to build a life with him? I understand the narrative objective of this route is to get Harry to unknowingly raise Luca's kids.
However, Laura somehow, with comical levels of evil, devoid of all love she has for him, over a sex game with Luca's big penis, wreaks everything in Harry's life; his love life, his marriage, his family, possibly criminally sinks the company he works for, gets him a new doomed job under clearly sick Luca has his plaything, tricks him into drinking Luca's semen mixed coffee everyday, all the while planing to tell Harry his kids are not 'his' when they hit 20 years old. Lying to her children and Harry for all those years, just because it gets her vagina wet to cruelly ruin his life?
That's the weakest, most quick fix, forced, porn game writing I've read in this game. That's not even close to the quality of the believable start of the blackmail story. A wildly more logical ending would be, Laura births a few of Luca's children, then runs off with him leaving Harry to take care of his 'family.' Maybe Harry finds a AV staring Laura later as a big finish letting him know the truth, or something to that effect.
The normal future ending is far superior, Laura just gets taken, then moves on. Even if it still had to hit the very flashy 'cheating video' big reveal check box. Not that it's bad, there has to be something big at the end, it is a porn game after all. The animation added to the older scene in this update is great. Though I still don't understand why there wasn't a CG for Aya topless once she was drugged.
Please note, I intended this to be constructive feedback and put way more work into it than I should have.
Edit: forgot to add that she tricked Harry into drinking semen, grammar
Actually we don't know if she is corrupted, or rather if she remains because the little info we got from Harrya nd Luca about their past indicates Luca got her, and the level of trauma tells us it must have been mean, really hardcore, etc.Why would Aya do that? She is not corrupted. She also didn't look like a spiteful person. Obviously everything can put on her disorder but i think it would be ... lame ?
Also would Aya do it then Luca/ Laura wouldn't know about it. Laura didn't listen to Harry explaining the issue but knew exactly what is the problem and how serious it is. They had it already planned beforehand.