VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

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João Maria

João Maria

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Y.Gromov said:
This is very bad! I have nothing against about NTR, but in this game NTR is Too Dark (for me). I would prefer a plot where there would be two vectors - Love and Ntr, and it would be possible to add a branch with Cheating path - where not only Laura would cheat on Harry, but Harry could cheat on Laura and ect.!
So it turns out that he loves her, and the worst thing is that she loves him Too! But lust and affection make her character just a complete whore! Harry is a stupid and blind! He's a simpl and a good man, he has a normal penis, gets tired at work and lacks the energy to satisfy Laura, but that's the whole point! - she was supposed to push and guide him, how to be and what to do - so that everything would be fine with them.
But...:cry:


This is just my subjective opinion.
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Hello! I agree with you, but unfortunately it's not that kind of plot that this dev does.

btw, do you know games with this idea? "Love and Ntr, and it would be possible to add a branch with Cheating path"
 
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Y.Gromov

Y.Gromov

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João Maria said:
Hello! I agree with you, but unfortunately it's not that kind of plot that this dev does.

btw, do you know games with this idea? "Love and Ntr, and it would be possible to add a branch with Cheating path"
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There are many games where there is an opportunity to avoid NTR and cheating.
 
random_user91

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damn, by far... this is the ultimate ntr game that all ntr lovers ever hoped for. To be fair, this can't even be considered pure netorare anymore... for the normal ending, it's clear that it's netori/cheating for both options of normal ending. Even abrupt ending is actually netori. It's clear that the main characters are the douche Luca and Laura.
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It's crazy that the developer team really made so many expositions when we switched to her perspective. It's like they are trying so hard to justify her character and even those three available themes have the same message:
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This ntr storyline can't be considered mindbreak with those many expositions from her. To be fair, the mc is the typical dumb oblivious ntr cucked mc but what else can we expect from ntr stories. My nagging for his character is he's just written to be too 'stereotypical saint oblivious fool who always praise and worship his lover' kind of guy. Too one dimensional for me at least in a first half even near third half of the current storyline.

I just wanted to see how the developer team deal with the 'good ending' routes and 'hero ending' routes. Even abrupt ending is still unfinished. By far, the 3 available endings are the epitome of NTR. At the very least, I hope we can see some satisfying repercussion to the both main characters Laura and douche of this story Luca in either good or hero ending, but knowing the developer team's previous work, I think it is just a fool's dream.

Even in typical 'alpha male douchebag' standard, Luca's dialogues are very degrading. Like even amongst the worst kinds of homewrecker, this dude is factually the worst, and a bully on top of that. I thought Japanese/Korean ntr artists/authors are the most dramatic and twisted in writing this kind of hardcore NTR, but apparently western developer's imagination can go even more twisted. Again, for ntr lovers, these two main characters, Laura and Luca surely can make them jizz all day.
 
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The game doesn't launch for some reason? Well, it shows a window, but everything is black and the game doesn't respond. Same happened with a similar Ren'Py game after this one.

Is there some solution to that?
 
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NobodyLovesMeLikeYou said:
The game doesn't launch for some reason? Well, it shows a window, but everything is black and the game doesn't respond. Same happened with a similar Ren'Py game after this one.

Is there some solution to that?
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Anti virus, sometimes antivirus block the games when they try to alter the save files in a folder for example, is a costant problem with renpy games
 
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DeniedCreampie

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I'm curious to what perspective did you guys play in, Harry's or everyone's perspective? I at first chose Harry's perspective only cause I like a lil mystery, but quickly switch to everyone because I wanted to see the scenes and didn't want to miss out. Which do you think is better for a first playthrough?
 
Evalone

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BBCinyourass said:
Give some BBC for Laura :)
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Wrong, should be:
Give some BBC for Luca :)

Volturemount said:
Yes. Harry needs to bring a BBC friend to smash Laura.
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Yes. Harry needs to bring a BBC friend to smash Luca.

taragrey204 said:
I had this sudden image of a BBC cucking both Harry and Luca lol
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Wrong, should be:
I had this sudden image of a BBC fucking Luca lol

REVENGE done RIGHT:
Turn Luca into a sissy, who completely loses his prided ability to perform on girls.
Switch Luca's role from the hunter, into the hunted.

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bernidevil said:
This. I agree with you. Am I the only one here who can enjoy NTR but still want to see some justice to the homewrecker/douche, especially the likes of this douche Luca? From the plot, it's clear that he's the most extreme kind of d-bag 'alpha male' stereotype. Laura's dialogues and expositions in the middle to the end of normal/abrupt/hero ending routes did become more twisted and disgusting, but Luca's 'strong alpha male' stereotype is over exaggerated in almost any dialogue near the end of those routes because I think the developer team just wanted to go haywire with his character.

I do also think it doesn't have to be a 'direct' revenge from the mc, because from the writing perspective, Harry himself is written by the developer to be too generic as a ntr mc/protagonist (oblivious/naive/worship his girlfriend/partner too much). Seeing the progression of the story, it's almost totally impossible for him to do any kind of 'payback/revenge' on his bully.

My point is, I just hope good ending route would show us some sort of repercussion in the aftermath of this story. Developer can still make Harry lost Laura and Aya to Luca, but at least let Luca got schooled by other stronger alpha male considering that's his whole shtick. Laura can get what she deserves, but what I define to be 'good end' in this kind of ntr is not Harry and Laura keep their relationship, but the destruction of Luca's over exaggerated 'strong alpha male' identity.
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Precisely.

An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth.
The biggest form of payback, is completely crushing Luca's pride and ability in "hunting as an alpha male".

That would be a fitting end for Luca; be it as a form of revenge, or retribution.
 
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