I paid for it and instantly regreted it lol sadly I deleted it but it's really short, felt rushed af
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Oh man, I was so hopeful for it to be really good. The game so far is 10/10 in build-up but 5/10 in satisfactory conclusion. Was hoping that the bonus scenes would at least partially substitute for the weak endings of the main game.
The author said he wasn’t a big fan of the fan scene that was voted so he wasn’t the most excited to write about it. I don’t remember the choices for the bonus scene but I was disappointed in the one that got chosen
Laura keeps cheating on MC while wearing a mask and colored hair so Harry doesnt recognize her. She is groped in front of Harry while talking to Luca in his office because he's going to start working for him... thats all I remember from the start, then there's a cum sandwich that was funny for some people I suppose.
I dont find the attractive of using covid masks lol and that was the whole point of the scene (it gives you the option to turn the mask off)
Actually, the original prompt was for no mask - the dev added the mask because he thought it would make it a bit more believable than just a wig.
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Interesting. The author was excited about the first bonus scene that was without Harry completely. Seems to somewhat confirm the theory around here that the author does not much care about Harry or Harry's viewpoint. That's unfortunate as I think the "loser's" story is very important in an NTR story.
I see. A random account with only a few comments trying to create a narrative around what I think of my story and what is 'exciting' to me. But sure, do point out any instance of me showing excitement over the first bonus scene.
Also, the first bonus scene isn't without Harry completely.
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The bonus scene sare literally fetish focused, some just won't do for everyone, i am a fan of the whole oblivious ntr and cheating on plain side too so i think i will like it when it finally shows here xD
I remember seeing a couple of comments that said that hc hate harry with a passion, and the more that I think about it, my brain started thinking of illicit love on how the writer had a hard on the blond guy cucking the mc. Not throwing shade, or anything, just find it funny on the resemblance of the situation when it comes to writers and their "mc" getting cucked left and right for x reason.
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I haven't seen much of the game lately but it's all well written, man.
Please don't get fucked off by randos trying to "write" for you. I think it's sexy AND compelling. Good ol' fashioned porny, character driven, corporate intrigue smut.
Interesting story and gives me a boner.
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Phew finally finished all thats avaliable, what a ride.
The completed version of this game is gonna be GOAT, if theres as much Aya content as there is Laura then holy.
And no doubt theres gonna be flashback of what happened with Maya, is she dead tho? One of those goons alluded to it... shame.
Wasnt a fan of when Laura cut and dyed her hair, but it got better once her hair grew back.
"That" death scene totally caught me off guard, shame it ruined one of the best cg sequences lmao
One thing I wasnt a fan of is the potraits that show on the left of dialogue boxes, wish there was an option to remove that, dont like seeing Luca on the left a lot during some wank
The completed version of this game is gonna be GOAT, if theres as much Aya content as there is Laura then holy.
And no doubt theres gonna be flashback of what happened with Maya, is she dead tho? One of those goons alluded to it... shame.
Wasnt a fan of when Laura cut and dyed her hair, but it got better once her hair grew back.
"That" death scene totally caught me off guard, shame it ruined one of the best cg sequences lmao
One thing I wasnt a fan of is the potraits that show on the left of dialogue boxes, wish there was an option to remove that, dont like seeing Luca on the left a lot during some wank
Is the first (and second) bonus scene avaliable separate or what? I got confused reading the thread.
I remembered you saying somewhere that you wrote more words for the first bonus scene than you anticipated because you enjoyed writing it.
I suppose I went too far insinuating what you like and what not.
The reason I am writing here at all is because I genuinely think that this game is very good.
It is very much possible that the fact that I am more critical of the recent content is because I am now waiting for it and not experiencing it all at once like I did for the first 2/3 of the story.
I just wanted to vent here my frustrations at the story and its recent developments. I won’t post here about this again.
While I wrote more words than anticipated for the first bonus scene, I never said that it was because I was excited about it. In fact, I said that I wasn't fully satisfied with my work. And I wrote more words than anticipated for the second bonus scene also. It's even lengthier than the first bonus scene.
I don't care for people sharing their dissatisfaction with my game. The game is not for everybody. In fact, it is meant to not be liked by everyone. You don't like what I do or the direction that I'm taking with my work? Then I don't want your business. That's all there is to it.
What I do not appreciate is people putting words in my mouth.
i like ntr scenes where the heroine is with bully behind mc back, but it's even better when the mc is aware and try to stop it/ hide it from other people, for example, in the conference room harry can give some kind of lecture while he notice Laura going under the table to suck Luca's dick.
he tries to get attention on hime while they make noises, and cover up for laura absence so people won't notice, of course it's only possible if harry thinks she is being blackmailed and he trusts her judgment.
i hope for a similar scene maybe with aya, in the current route it doesn't seem possible, laura already presents herself as luca slut so it won't matter that much if someone finds out, and luca claims she is not being blackmailed anymore, and harry doesn't seem to trust her judgment
he tries to get attention on hime while they make noises, and cover up for laura absence so people won't notice, of course it's only possible if harry thinks she is being blackmailed and he trusts her judgment.
i hope for a similar scene maybe with aya, in the current route it doesn't seem possible, laura already presents herself as luca slut so it won't matter that much if someone finds out, and luca claims she is not being blackmailed anymore, and harry doesn't seem to trust her judgment
I dont like that, that goes more for the literally cuck route, pretty sure most of us are not here for CUCK stories, we're here for the cheating NTR
not really what i meant, i didn't mean netorase, when harry wants laura to cheat on him, i meant a situation when harry is aware, and somehow forced to let it happen on his watch, same as laura at the beginning at least was not a cheating slut, she was forced to have sex with luca because she cared about harry, luca manipulated her, so he might be capable of doing this to harry.
in the current route harry is aware but he tries to avoid seeing laura with luca, and when he does he goes crazy, luca has no grip on Harry's behavior, but apparently there is nothing harry can do
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