VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

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And by the way, if Laura is so smart why didn't she exploit the rules system in her favor? Even though she is at a disadvantage because women can have multiple orgasms whereas men have a refractory period, it's way easier to make a man cum, and she had many options where she could make Luca cum with minimal chance of her cumming herself (e.g. handjob, blowjob, titjob, footjob ,etc.) therefore she could easily stacked rules against him very quickly.
 
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NTR Sommelier said:
And by the way, if Laura is so smart why didn't she exploit the rules system in her favor? Even though she is at a disadvantage because women can have multiple orgasms whereas men have a refractory period, it's way easier to make a man cum, and she had many options where she could make Luca cum with minimal chance of her cumming herself (e.g. handjob, blowjob, titjob, footjob ,etc.) therefore she could easily stacked rules against him very quickly.
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Luca is equipped with Mythic Plot Armor+100 (most of the time). :LOL:

This has been known for quite a while.
 
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Because the only one who followed the rules was Laura. Luca cheated left and right and got away with it because porn logic/plot armor. Problems i had with the rule system as presented.

Whenever Laura made a rule Luca didn't accept the rule as made and tweaked it so it could be exploited. However whatever rule Luca made was exactly what he stated without Laura being given the same privilege.

On top of that there were scenes where Laura should have received countless rules but came out with basically nothing if not less than she had going in. If you look at the end of some of the long sessions they had there are countless used condoms spread across the room. Each one of those should represent a rule Laura earned yet she didn't get all those rules.

Finally when Luca breaks any of the rules Laura is supposed to get 3 days off yet with the amount of times Luca broke the rules Laura should have been done with the month long before breaking. But that would go against the ntr porn logic story be damned.
 
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The rules system was brought up so i gave my honest opinion on it. Just because my thoughts on it differ from yours shouldn't discount fair criticism. The rule system was a great mechanic that failed because it wasn't taken seriously. Just saying its a porn game relax is a cop out for the massive amounts of plot holes created by the issues with following what the rules should have meant. The story should matter yet when it comes down to it the story always comes second to porn logic. There are a lot of people that care about what comes in between the fap content yet people continuously attack those who do care because of different opinions. I'm not condemning the fap content so why should i be ridiculed for liking what comes in between. There is room for both porn/story yet those who like the story part are wrong because it conflicts with others beliefs.
 
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well i agree with you as long as the creator doesn't want a realistic approach in his work
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It is people that don't want realism. Realism is brought up as criticism when people don't agree with something. They don't complain that harem MC got plot armor. In this story none complains how Harry being deeply in love with Laura can't push away Aya, then is infatuated by Sandra.
 
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Terix3 said:

also stop expecting realism in porn games.
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If we wanted realism Harry is fucked because even if he does somethign to Luca Luca would just have him killed, or his family would out of pride.

Hell he would jusy pump Laura full of drugs and have be raped until she is broken down, shit like that does happen in RL
 
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Honestly, just my opinion Im just tryna see someone get cuck in a story but why has it got down deeper now lmao. its ruining the game for me. its an ntr game not some novel shit
Im just tryna reccommend some good ntr scenes thats hot
we got people feeling bad for harry, we got laura supporters, we got luca haters that bring so many deeper meaning to another level of what the characters feel, why not just enjoy the game if you like this category. like get a life lmao no offense to you people :alien:
 
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Honestly, just my opinion Im just tryna see someone get cuck in a story but why has it got down deeper now lmao. its ruining the game for me. its an ntr game not some novel shit
Im just tryna reccommend some good ntr scenes thats hot
we got people feeling bad for harry, we got laura supporters, we got luca haters that bring so many deeper meaning to another level of what the characters feel, why not just enjoy the game if you like this category. like get a life lmao no offense to you people :alien:
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Its an ntr visual novel, of course its "some novel shit"
 
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NTR Sommelier said:
And by the way, if Laura is so smart why didn't she exploit the rules system in her favor? Even though she is at a disadvantage because women can have multiple orgasms whereas men have a refractory period, it's way easier to make a man cum, and she had many options where she could make Luca cum with minimal chance of her cumming herself (e.g. handjob, blowjob, titjob, footjob ,etc.) therefore she could easily stacked rules against him very quickly.
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I assume because it's not an "What If?" RPG with 1001 choice, but a mostly kinetic novel with a little choices, and it tells the story. Story like if it could happen like that and not in another way, because if it was in another way it would be a completely different story, that's all. There is such thing like a plot armor in any movie/media product, because if main hero will dive or won't make this or another move the story won't work in the way it was writen.
 
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rhcp725 said:
I'm not condemning the fap content so why should i be ridiculed for liking what comes in between. There is room for both porn/story yet those who like the story part are wrong because it conflicts with others beliefs.
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What comes in between is part of the fap content. Exploring sexual themes through storytelling is how a context dependent fetish like NTR is delivered. Even the rule based system is an elaborate way to maintain a reason for the disconnect between Laura's mind and actions.

Separating eroticism from storytelling in an erotic visual novel like this 1 doesn't make sense to me. Ideally people will enjoy the sex scenes because of the bits that connect them and the scenes themselves will progress the story. I think more valid criticisms would target how to keep the narrative stimulating instead.
 
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