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Shatteredstar

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The scene just when Aya realizes that she is locked in a room and is unable to escape; Luca says 'The door can only be locked/unlocked with a key, sweetheart. Kinda logical when you think about it. Don't want a bunch of kids lockin' themselves in and havin' sex like animals.' That's true, so why have the lock in the first place? It's a violation of fire code.

There is very little logical about staff (or anyone with the key) being able to lock patrons in rooms via key, or any other tool. A fire marshal would likely shut this club down till it's fixed. Heck, there is code on the height limits in witch locks' point of operation need to be within. Preventing egress is all that lock's functionally does, endangering lives. Luca's reasoning would not win over in a fire code inspection.

There is the criminal element of the story, but the way Luca words it, 'Kinda logical' seems to indicate that he thinks that it's normal. This time Aya wanted to leave due to trying to avoid getting raped, another reason to have no locks, but if it where a fire alarm going off, what then? Making less logical sense?

Don't get me wrong the scene is great, just a little rewrite of what Luca said and work it in would fix the scene. Keep in mind these doors and any lock on them would be inspected, not everyday mind you, so something could potentially slip by. The door would still need to be locked due to Aya's position during her magic dicking to the stars. Wouldn't want that changed even if it could be, Aya artwork is soo good.

Edit; I did want to mention I'm not an expert on the matter.
 

desmosome

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I just played through most of the other routes and bonus scenes that came after the Normal Laura routes. I'm once again reminded that this dev writes the best NTR shit. I can't think of any other NTR writer that interweaves the psychological makeup of the characters into the NTR arcs this perfectly. The characters being explored are certainly pornified representations of believable peronas molded to fit the NTR themes, but it's really rare to see this type of depth in NTR characters.

I mean, I still fap to all the cliche NTR plots with retarded characters, and the broad strokes of this story is as cliche as the rest (tbf, that cliche is what "true" NTR fans want anyways), but the finer details are what sets this apart.
 

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The scene just when Aya realizes that she is locked in a room and is unable to escape; Luca says 'The door can only be locked/unlocked with a key, sweetheart. Kinda logical when you think about it. Don't want a bunch of kids lockin' themselves in and havin' sex like animals.' That's true, so why have the lock in the first place? It's a violation of fire code.

There is very little logical about staff (or anyone with the key) being able to lock patrons in rooms via key, or any other tool. A fire marshal would likely shut this club down till it's fixed. Heck, there is code on the height limits in witch locks' point of operation need to be within. Preventing egress is all that lock's functionally does, endangering lives. Luca's reasoning would not win over in a fire code inspection.

There is the criminal element of the story, but the way Luca words it, 'Kinda logical' seems to indicate that he thinks that it's normal. This time Aya wanted to leave due to trying to avoid getting raped, another reason to have no locks, but if it where a fire alarm going off, what then? Making less logical sense?

Don't get me wrong the scene is great, just a little rewrite of what Luca said and work it in would fix the scene. Keep in mind these doors and any lock on them would be inspected, not everyday mind you, so something could potentially slip by. The door would still need to be locked due to Aya's position during her magic dicking to the stars. Wouldn't want that changed even if it could be, Aya artwork is soo good.

Edit; I did want to mention I'm not an expert on the matter.
have to ask, but can you send me the spoilers of the new update through dm? I have no intention of playing the game, but spoilers are something interesting
 

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A Promise Best Left Unkept [v0.9.0] [Hangover Cat Purrroduction] - Update only

The patch may break your game, use at your own risk.
There maybe a script change that makes this patch incompatible. If you get an error, after using this patch you've to download the full game again, sorry :(
If you missed it you can find the old Update only patch HERE.

Universal: v0.8.6 -> v0.9.0 [74,1 MB]
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Please @ me or quote this post if there is a new version that doesn't show up on the "Latest Updates" page.
 
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Shatteredstar

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have to ask, but can you send me the spoilers of the new update through dm? I have no intention of playing the game, but spoilers are something interesting
Idk if you're not able to download the game or play somehow, but the simple spoiler is Luca magic dicks every character with two legs. If you look at the spoilers in my post I did spoil that scene kinda.

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