VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

[subaru_dono]

I get a lot more enjoyment out of these stories when multiple paths exist, where "How could someone make ALL the wrong choices!?!" is just one of several paths. I recognize that it's dysfunctional to become too emotionally invested in fictional characters (YMMV) despite sometimes doing so, but I prefer when there's an excuse to say, "Well, that's not actually what happened."

This story struck a deep, emotional chord with me based on the titular premise. I delayed proposing to my wife (spoiler for how it all worked out in the end) until I felt more established and secure professionally, but it wound up causing problems and multiple arguments. Heck, I busted out the ring DURING an argument because I refused to risk any harm to our relationship. So seeing it play out tragically while ALSO in an erotically enjoyable format would give me some harsh anxiety.
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Hopefully, the endings will all feel compelling and make enough sense logistically. Preferably not like some of the "Alansya Chronicles ~ Fleeting Iris" endings (though I got a huge kick out of the Hero Ending from that game's NTR path).

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

What is added with the new update?

 

[matsuy]

What is added with the new update?

Take a look over here.

 

[Deleted member 398727]

This game is legit top quality, and right now amount/time-in-between ratio updates is just right. Let's hope that it continues that way. The dev creates everything by hand instead of using shitty prefabricated 3D assets. And also did you notice the effects? Like there is proper zoom-in & zoom-out, screen shake, character sliding and fading out of the screen. It legit feels like a proper visual novel with right aesthetics from a Japanese studio.

11/10. Would fap again.

 

[SpecterX]

Except some people are seeing this all wrong.

Harry isn't losing out on anything, he's still young, good looking enough to get girls and reasonably successful. Sooner or later things will work out for him.

Laura on the other hand. She had a man that loved her and would have given her the world. She gave that up to become the plaything of a man that will only ever see her as a hole to empty himself into. Sure, corrupted she'll be content with that but one day, when her looks start fading and the cum flow starts to trickle she'll just be a sad and lonely old woman.

Same for Aya.

Luca will likely pick the wrong conquest one day and end up some meatheads punch bag.

So people can relax, watch this game of 2 girls that could have had everything, lose it all while Harry goes all Matrix like and dodges those bullets.

In the end, Pornhub will never betray him.

To be honest we need to follow ntr logic here where therapists and good endings never exist.
So Harry will probably end up heartbroken, lose his job, become homeless and will leave in the street near Luca's apartment where he'll see Laura and Aya come and go with their daughters (daughters that Luca will also "train")
Or he'll just kill them when Luca will dump them

Sorry, I got carried, I read like 3/4 different stories yesterday that all got these endings.

I actually don't know harry's , if he is dominant/submissive/shy/sigma since I play this game through the reviews of you guys, I'm really interested in good stories/games but I have a hard time enjoying netorare for the moment.

 

[The_fallen_dragon]

Take a look over here.

Thanks

 

[Animefan_09]

To be honest we need to follow ntr logic here where therapists and good endings never exist.
So Harry will probably end up heartbroken, lose his job, become homeless and will leave in the street near Luca's apartment where he'll see Laura and Aya come and go with their daughters (daughters that Luca will also "train")
Or he'll just kill them when Luca will dump them

Sorry, I got carried, I read like 3/4 different stories yesterday that all got these endings.

I actually don't know harry's , if he is dominant/submissive/shy/sigma since I play this game through the reviews of you guys, I'm really interested in good stories/games but I have a hard time enjoying netorare for the moment.

Where did you read then? Pm me them, they sound interesting.

Also all those ending are still better than what the previous MC got, seriously mindbroken and brainwashed, that and half of what you said too lol

 

[Shatteredstar]

Can someone clarify the Asian question?

 

[beoroa21123]

Yeah, it's funny but new animations lack that impact those 2 frame ones have. Yes, they look more professional and fluid, but they don't give the same vibe/feeling of Luca absolutely destroying Laura's pussy.

You know what we really miss, the GRIP on scenes, new animation doesn't really have that. Damn we all thirsty

The Story for me still good, though if I can ask for more I would love to have more of laura perspective story
Still I support d dev will all of my extra money
I <3 you

 

[Chorizoow]

are we playing the girl in this game ? or the cuck ? or both ?

 

[DXzeed]

To be honest we need to follow ntr logic here where therapists and good endings never exist.
So Harry will probably end up heartbroken, lose his job, become homeless and will leave in the street near Luca's apartment where he'll see Laura and Aya come and go with their daughters (daughters that Luca will also "train")
Or he'll just kill them when Luca will dump them

Sorry, I got carried, I read like 3/4 different stories yesterday that all got these endings.

I actually don't know harry's , if he is dominant/submissive/shy/sigma since I play this game through the reviews of you guys, I'm really interested in good stories/games but I have a hard time enjoying netorare for the moment.

Hold your tits cuck

 

[Sumatra 3D]

Except some people are seeing this all wrong.

Harry isn't losing out on anything, he's still young, good looking enough to get girls and reasonably successful. Sooner or later things will work out for him.

Laura on the other hand. She had a man that loved her and would have given her the world. She gave that up to become the plaything of a man that will only ever see her as a hole to empty himself into. Sure, corrupted she'll be content with that but one day, when her looks start fading and the cum flow starts to trickle she'll just be a sad and lonely old woman.

Same for Aya.

Luca will likely pick the wrong conquest one day and end up some meatheads punch bag.

So people can relax, watch this game of 2 girls that could have had everything, lose it all while Harry goes all Matrix like and dodges those bullets.

In the end, Pornhub will never betray him.

In real life, Harry would not be losing out on anything. He is attractive, successful and great enough for hot women to fall for and chase while Luca relies on blackmail to get laid. Laura on the other hand just gave up a great guy and is possibly pregnant for a douche.

I know people like Harry, Luca and Laura in real life. The real life Harry went on to live a comfy and happy life (makes a lot of money as a pilot) and even has a kid (unfortunately, kid's mom died in childbirth). The real life Laura got passed around, became a single mom and ended up realizing that all that mind-blowing sex didn't mean shit. She's now single and 'looking for a real connection'. The real life Luca is still sniffing around for pussy which has gotten harder because being a sleazebag helps when you're a young attractive man but not so much when you're a middle aged man who isn't so attractive.

In the end, this story is fiction and is exaggerated for the sake of the plot otherwise we wouldn't have a story. I mean if Laura had opened up to Harry about the usb thing, they could've worked together to nail Luca or hell she could've played the rape victim angle after her first hook up with Luca. People may well just believe that the usb thing is his attempt to save face for raping her. Harry could also have found out a lot sooner or Aya could've blown the whistle immediately. Either way, we wouldn't have much of a story or a story at all if any of these things happened. Even if the story continued ins pite of all these, it would not be netorare.

NTR logic dictates that Harry has to be borderline retarded to not notice things, Laura has to be a dumbass who falls in love with cock and Luca has to have writer induced cheat mode so he can win. It's kind of why a lot of NTR comes off as silly. The genre falls apart when you apply the slightest bit of logic to it.

 

[Deleted member 4914405]

she could've played the rape victim angle after her first hook up with Luca. People may well just believe that the usb thing is his attempt to save face for raping her.

You don't understand the story. It's not about Luca raping/not raping Laura. It doesn't matter what people think of Luca.
If Laura disobeyed him - he would release the content of usb stick to competitors and make the company potentially lose fuckton of money. They would investigate how did that happen and everything would point to Harry since there is video evidence. It would end in his career getting destroyed and criminal charges as well. Luca would be fine because yes - even if anything would be proven against him - he has a mafia daddy and "no fucks given" attitude.

I think there is going to be some kind of "let's fuck Luca up" plotline on "Hero" route, but everything that happened on the beginning of the game after Harry took that usb stick was pretty much unavoidable. Even if Laura told him, he couldn't do shit unless he would get some really serious dirt on Luca.

 

[Sumatra 3D]

You don't understand the story. It's not about Luca raping/not raping Laura. It doesn't matter what people think of Luca.
If Laura disobeyed him - he would release the content of usb stick to competitors and make the company potentially lose fuckton of money. They would investigate how did that happen and everything would point to Harry since there is video evidence. It would end in his career getting destroyed and criminal charges as well. Luca would be fine because yes - even if anything would be proven against him - he has a mafia daddy and "no fucks given" attitude.

I think there is going to be some kind of "let's fuck Luca up" plotline on "Hero" route, but everything that happened on the beginning of the game after Harry took that usb stick was pretty much unavoidable. Even if Laura told him, he couldn't do shit unless he would get some really serious dirt on Luca.

Welp, then Laura was doomed from the start I guess. Wait, Luca has a Mafia daddy?

 

[Terix3]

In real life, Harry would not be losing out on anything. He is attractive, successful and great enough for hot women to fall for and chase while Luca relies on blackmail to get laid. Laura on the other hand just gave up a great guy and is possibly pregnant for a douche.

I know people like Harry, Luca and Laura in real life. The real life Harry went on to live a comfy and happy life (makes a lot of money as a pilot) and even has a kid (unfortunately, kid's mom died in childbirth). The real life Laura got passed around, became a single mom and ended up realizing that all that mind-blowing sex didn't mean shit. She's now single and 'looking for a real connection'. The real life Luca is still sniffing around for pussy which has gotten harder because being a sleazebag helps when you're a young attractive man but not so much when you're a middle aged man who isn't so attractive.

In the end, this story is fiction and is exaggerated for the sake of the plot otherwise we wouldn't have a story. I mean if Laura had opened up to Harry about the usb thing, they could've worked together to nail Luca or hell she could've played the rape victim angle after her first hook up with Luca. People may well just believe that the usb thing is his attempt to save face for raping her. Harry could also have found out a lot sooner or Aya could've blown the whistle immediately. Either way, we wouldn't have much of a story or a story at all if any of these things happened. Even if the story continued ins pite of all these, it would not be netorare.

NTR logic dictates that Harry has to be borderline retarded to not notice things, Laura has to be a dumbass who falls in love with cock and Luca has to have writer induced cheat mode so he can win. It's kind of why a lot of NTR comes off as silly. The genre falls apart when you apply the slightest bit of logic to it.

The author does pretty good job in providing reasons for the NTR logic tho. Like Luca has mafia background and it is known fact for the others. It is not specifically said but it is likely they have control over police. In such situation If you assume Laura can't go to police then what choice does she really have? Confine with Harry ? What he could do other then going to jail which Laura wants to prevent ? Another thing is that women selling body to help loved ones is nothing unthinkable and that is what essentially is Laura doing.

Now for the corruption part , yes it is kinda required by NTR. But it is also akin to mental breakdown, hard to say what a person would do trapped between guilt, stress of everything going to hell and devil's whispers. I personally think that suicide would be most probable outcome but that would be no story. We know that crazy people do have the tendency to blame others for bad things happening to them, right? I think it is plausible for Laura to become partially insane in that regard that in attempt to shield herself from the guilt towards Harry she now blames him for everything. Harry mistakes just fuels into that.

 

[NewTricks]

Welp, then Laura was doomed from the start I guess. Wait, Luca has a Mafia daddy?

Laura wasn't doomed from the start but like in most tragedies she has that tragic flaw of hubris. She thought that she could handle everything on her own, but she had options that she discarded. The most important being that she could have just called Luca's bluff. Let Harry suffer the consequences of his actions if necessary. Or go right to HR and the police and let the chips fall where they may. Or she could have just told Harry about Luca's indecent proposal before going through with it and let him decide what was more important to him. Or just break up with Harry and give Luca the finger. Or make a deal with Aya to share Harry in a throuple in return for fucking over Luca. Or go straight to Luca's father and offer him a better deal to reign in his spoiled son. Heck, in that one NTR could have still happened, only with double the cucks and oldman to boot. Or she could have pulled a Lorena Bobbit and just cut off Luca's dick. She had many chess moves, but she decided to play checkers. This was, of course, so the story could happen. But oh the stories we could have had.

 

[Sumatra 3D]

Laura wasn't doomed from the start but like in most tragedies she has that tragic flaw of hubris. She thought that she could handle everything on her own, but she had options that she discarded. The most important being that she could have just called Luca's bluff. Let Harry suffer the consequences of his actions if necessary. Or go right to HR and the police and let the chips fall where they may. Or she could have just told Harry about Luca's indecent proposal before going through with it and let him decide what was more important to him. Or just break up with Harry and give Luca the finger. Or make a deal with Aya to share Harry in a throuple in return for fucking over Luca. Or go straight to Luca's father and offer him a better deal to reign in his spoiled son. Heck, in that one NTR could have still happened, only with double the cucks and oldman to boot. Or she could have pulled a Lorena Bobbit and just cut off Luca's dick. She had many chess moves, but she decided to play checkers. This was, of course, so the story could happen. But oh the stories we could have had.

Yeah but like I said, we wouldn't have a ntr story if any of that had happened. It also reinforces my opinion that Luca will get bored of her and toss her aside like trash when he's done.

 

[NewTricks]

Yeah but like I said, we wouldn't have a ntr story if any of that had happened. It also reinforces my opinion that Luca will get bored of her and toss her aside like trash when he's done.

Oh, that outcome is never in doubt. The only question is when he will finally feel that he is done.

 

[Sumatra 3D]

We know that crazy people do have the tendency to blame others for bad things happening to them, right? I think it is plausible for Laura to become partially insane in that regard that in attempt to shield herself from the guilt towards Harry she now blames him for everything.

Yeah I believe Laura has been mind-broken and is partially insane at this point. She knows blaming Harry for all of this is kind of stupid but it kind of keeps her sane and lets her sleep at night. This is further reinforced by the fact that by screwing over Harry, she is acting like her mother who she hates (hence the panic attack she had when she visited Sandra). She can't come to terms with this so blaming it all on Harry is the easy way out.

 

[Rcylans]

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