VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

[anon948P]

When will the 0.8.6 version be released here ?

 

[ZUBiDAM]

You sound like you've played the update. If so, how does Aya end up getting fucked? I'm curious.

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[NewTricks]

Luca's dick remains undefeated? You don't say. Couldn't have seen that one coming

 

[SharkVampire]

The way Aya's route is developing feels rushed to be honest. 90% of what there is of it got written 1 year ago and no new development was made until recently. In all the old content there's no indication she will get fucked by mr chad thundercock (unless we apply meta knowledge), but then suddenly, in just a single update after the long wait, they are already fucking. The way it happened is also far dumber and more contrived than how the situation with Laura got constructed.

Anyone who ever started writing something, stopped midway, then attempted to pick up again years later knows how hard it is to recover the spark. The priorities, mood, mindset and level of interest in that particular story which you had at the time might be totally different from now.

Although I could be wrong, I do get the impression the developer is simply getting this over with at this point. That maybe at first he had something meticulous planned for the Aya route, but over time lost interest in it, and now is finishing by ''obligation''.
Would be understandable but unfortunate.

So I was right, I'm not the only one who had this feeling. I was really eager to see Aya content, and I was hoping, that someday HC will make proper ending for all my decisions that I made along my run. Because, none of them were implemented at that moment. It's kinda weird yeah, but I like dark stories, but with opportunity to have a happy ending, if you played your cards right. But I feel like this new routes only becoming worse from this point. Maybe I really should forget about this game and wait for the new one, I hope HC will come up with some fresh ideas and it would be really good, if he reflects about some feedback, that players give him.

 

[Flojerazul20]

So I was right, I'm not the only one who had this feeling. I was really eager to see Aya content, and I was hoping, that someday HC will make proper ending for all my decisions that I made along my run. Because, none of them were implemented at that moment. It's kinda weird yeah, but I like dark stories, but with opportunity to have a happy ending, if you played your cards right. But I feel like this new routes only becoming worse from this point. Maybe I really should forget about this game and wait for the new one, I hope HC will come up with some fresh ideas and it would be really good, if he reflects about some feedback, that players give him.

That's why it's boring, seeing the same thing but worse, I don't think we're the only ones to notice it

 

[lkjhgfdfghjkl]

Maybe I really should forget about this game and wait for the new one, I hope HC will come up with some fresh ideas and it would be really good, if he reflects about some feedback, that players give him.

Aya's route, which begins in a few months, is meant to feel like the second part of this game. All of the choices that you've made up to now will not exist there and it will be comparable in length to the game so far.

This dev is already releasing updates for another project with a lighter style so you might be waiting a while for a "new" game.

 

[SharkVampire]

Aya's route, which begins in a few months, is meant to feel like the second part of this game. All of the choices that you've made up to now will not exist there and it will be comparable in length to the game so far.

This dev is already releasing updates for another project with a lighter style so you might be waiting a while for a "new" game.

You're talking about NTR'ed by clumsiness? I read the description and thought it some joke-like game. Wasn't really interested in such scenario. As for waiting, well, there are a lot of games out there, which can brighten the waiting time. Also, I wanted to add to my previous post about the dark stories. I really liked "Hero party must fall" even though it's netori, I really felt a deep connection with other characters and empathized with them. And the dev promised that there will different ending depending on your actions.

 

[Y.Gromov]

That's why it's boring, seeing the same thing but worse, I don't think we're the only ones to notice it

I wrote a long time ago that this game is "eight circles of hell" for Harry! And nothing more!

If at the first two endings, i personally, felt the fact that this is a very interesting and good ntr game, but very dark. After the next two endings, I finally just wanted to see Harry come out of the situation with dignity, but it's ntr - no obvious choice!
The "hero" ending left very bad-mixed feelings! This update was not exciting, it was just disgusting!
And the update with Sandra was very predictable and uninteresting!
The same thing is happening now with the update with Aya!

"Sandra - Leave Laura behind, she doesn't love you anymore, choose me!"
"Harry - I can't do this."
-Sandra gives herself completely to Luka!-

"Aya - Harry choose me, make your choice or I'll do something..."
"Harry - I can't do this."
-Aya gives herself completely to Luka!-

Doesn't it remind you of anything?

This game has become Santa Barbara! Everything is too obvious and predictable!

 

[mzer0]

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On a scale of 1 to 10 - 1 being Laura letting herself get blackmailed and 10 being Harry getting an erection - how ridiculous is it?

 

[ZUBiDAM]

On a scale of 1 to 10 - 1 being Laura letting herself get blackmailed and 10 being Harry getting an erection - how ridiculous is it?

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everyone has different standards, i personally didn't find Laura blackmail ridiculous in porn game standards, so between the two scenarios I'll give it a 4.

 

[Terix3]

I have very mixed fillings about the update, it is not an easy one to absorb so I advice patience and playing it yourself rather than absorbing information from spoilers. Like I know what HC is selling I'm just not sure if I'm buying it so I'm curious how people will take it.

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[NewTricks]

Yeah, people are looking for logic in a game that has none. Well, except for Japanese Hentai NTR logic. I watched one today where a guy moves in with his sister only to find out that she is always gone so he spends all of his time jerking off to videos of a girl that looks like her. Sees her in the bookstore with a guy who looks like Luca. Suddenly the videos stop and his sister seduces him one night after saying she saw his browser history but is disappointed with how small his pecker is. She disappears again the next morning and he gets a video directly from her of her fucking the wish.com version of Luca and says the videos were her the whole time and she made a bet with the dude that sex with her wimpy brother would be better than sex with him. So she didn't have sex for a week and was rolling on molly but the sex was still disappointing so now she is dude's slave or something. Not only that, if her brother wants to stay in the house he has to pretend to be her husband and raise her baby with Luca's lost cousin. Also, he must dress like a girl and let a fat gangster fuck him in the ass while his sister is out prostituting herself. So yeah. This is the logical framework we are working with. Anybody that thinks that the Aya ending is anything else than discount pain shopping needs to give me a call because I've got the deed to the London bridge and they can have it cheap.

 

[Y.Gromov]

Yeah, people are looking for logic in a game that has none. Well, except for Japanese Hentai NTR logic. I watched one today where a guy moves in with his sister only to find out that she is always gone so he spends all of his time jerking off to videos of a girl that looks like her. Sees her in the bookstore with a guy who looks like Luca. Suddenly the videos stop and his sister seduces him one night after saying she saw his browser history but is disappointed with how small his pecker is. She disappears again the next morning and he gets a video directly from her of her fucking the wish.com version of Luca and says the videos were her the whole time and she made a bet with the dude that sex with her wimpy brother would be better than sex with him. So she didn't have sex for a week and was rolling on molly but the sex was still disappointing so now she is dude's slave or something. Not only that, if her brother wants to stay in the house he has to pretend to be her husband and raise her baby with Luca's lost cousin. Also, he must dress like a girl and let a fat gangster fuck him in the ass while his sister is out prostituting herself. So yeah. This is the logical framework we are working with. Anybody that thinks that the Aya ending is anything else than discount pain shopping needs to give me a call because I've got the deed to the London bridge and they can have it cheap.

Its just A Santa Barbara!

 

[Terix3]

Yeah, people are looking for logic in a game that has none. Well, except for Japanese Hentai NTR logic. I watched one today where a guy moves in with his sister only to find out that she is always gone so he spends all of his time jerking off to videos of a girl that looks like her. Sees her in the bookstore with a guy who looks like Luca. Suddenly the videos stop and his sister seduces him one night after saying she saw his browser history but is disappointed with how small his pecker is. She disappears again the next morning and he gets a video directly from her of her fucking the wish.com version of Luca and says the videos were her the whole time and she made a bet with the dude that sex with her wimpy brother would be better than sex with him. So she didn't have sex for a week and was rolling on molly but the sex was still disappointing so now she is dude's slave or something. Not only that, if her brother wants to stay in the house he has to pretend to be her husband and raise her baby with Luca's lost cousin. Also, he must dress like a girl and let a fat gangster fuck him in the ass while his sister is out prostituting herself. So yeah. This is the logical framework we are working with. Anybody that thinks that the Aya ending is anything else than discount pain shopping needs to give me a call because I've got the deed to the London bridge and they can have it cheap.

The logic is that there is no logic in insanity. What all four of the main characters have in common ?

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[Traveroro]

Yeah, people are looking for logic in a game that has none. Well, except for Japanese Hentai NTR logic. I watched one today where a guy moves in with his sister only to find out that she is always gone so he spends all of his time jerking off to videos of a girl that looks like her. Sees her in the bookstore with a guy who looks like Luca. Suddenly the videos stop and his sister seduces him one night after saying she saw his browser history but is disappointed with how small his pecker is. She disappears again the next morning and he gets a video directly from her of her fucking the wish.com version of Luca and says the videos were her the whole time and she made a bet with the dude that sex with her wimpy brother would be better than sex with him. So she didn't have sex for a week and was rolling on molly but the sex was still disappointing so now she is dude's slave or something. Not only that, if her brother wants to stay in the house he has to pretend to be her husband and raise her baby with Luca's lost cousin. Also, he must dress like a girl and let a fat gangster fuck him in the ass while his sister is out prostituting herself. So yeah. This is the logical framework we are working with. Anybody that thinks that the Aya ending is anything else than discount pain shopping needs to give me a call because I've got the deed to the London bridge and they can have it cheap.

Although I would be the first to agree not to expect good writing from ntr games of all things, some of them clearly try to go for something more believable than others and people build expectations accordingly. You are unlikely to find anyone complaining about the scenario you just wrote being stupid because they never expected otherwise, the author never bothered to pretend it was anything but.

This game, particularly in early updates, makes more of an attempt to sell its scenario to the player. There's even an option to play without seeing Laura's perspective, which practically removes porn from the experience. This shows the developer was confident his story could stand on its own, having lewd as a strong hook but not something that completely subordinates the writing. At least when compared to the standard ntr hentai.

Though I think what's upsetting people about this is more expecting something fresh than expecting better writing (along with the fact picking aya's options throughout the game does bait one into believing harry will be able to pick her). It's just one thing amplifies the other.

You sound like you've played the update. If so, how does Aya end up getting fucked? I'm curious.

Haven't played yet sadly, i'm inferring based on the early update and comments here. Can't imagine it will be anything but either rape, some kind of bet or Aya going through insane lenghts to prove a point.

 

[NewTricks]

Although I would be the first to agree not to expect good writing from ntr games of all things, some of them clearly try to go for something more believable than others and people build expectations accordingly. You are unlikely to find anyone complaining about the scenario you just wrote being stupid because they never expected otherwise, the author never bothered to pretend it was anything but.

This game, particularly in early updates, makes more of an attempt to sell its scenario to the player. There's even an option to play without seeing Laura's perspective, which practically removes porn from the experience. This shows the developer was confident his story could stand on its own, having lewd as a strong hook but not something that completely subordinates the writing. At least when compared to the standard ntr hentai.

Though I think what's upsetting people about this is more expecting something fresh than expecting better writing (along with the fact picking aya's options throughout the game does bait one into believing harry will be able to pick her). It's just one thing amplifies the other.



Haven't played yet sadly, i'm inferring based on the early update and comments here. Can't imagine it will be anything but either rape, some kind of bet or Aya going through insane lenghts to prove a point.

Nah. This game never sold itself as anything other than exactly what it is. From the first update, the banner was Luca grabbing both girls by their tits. Anybody who can't read that visual shorthand deserves their disappointment. I knew all along that picking Aya's options was just picking Aya to get fucked and mindbroken by Luca's colossal dick. It's like playing a harem game and being disappointed that every girl in the game is as easy as a two-dollar hooker and every other guy in the game has no dick.

 

[Traveroro]

Nah. This game never sold itself as anything other than exactly what it is. From the first update, the banner was Luca grabbing both girls by their tits. Anybody who can't read that visual shorthand deserves their disappointment. I knew all along that picking Aya's options was just picking Aya to get fucked and mindbroken by Luca's colossal dick. It's like playing a harem game and being disappointed that every girl in the game is as easy as a two-dollar hooker and every other guy in the game has no dick.

The banner argument is fair enough, but I think you are overplaying the genre argument. It's not uncommon for ntr games with several branches to have ''good endings'', reverse ntr paths and other things that deviate from getting cucked. I'd wager most people knew blonde kouhai would take your bully's dick in some route, but thought there would be ways to avoid it.

 

[ZUBiDAM]

The banner argument is fair enough, but I think you are overplaying the genre argument. It's not uncommon for ntr games with several branches to have ''good endings'', reverse ntr paths and other things that deviate from getting cucked. I'd wager most people knew blonde kouhai would take your bully's dick in some route, but thought there would be ways to avoid it.

don't be stupid, you know there is a good ending planned, there are also a nuch of routes with aya as the main heroine, this route will not show her full character. wait for the game to be completed before saying stuff like that.

 

[Terix3]

This game, particularly in early updates, makes more of an attempt to sell its scenario to the player. There's even an option to play without seeing Laura's perspective, which practically removes porn from the experience. This shows the developer was confident his story could stand on its own, having lewd as a strong hook but not something that completely subordinates the writing. At least when compared to the standard ntr hentai.

Believable setup is important for netorare to have good "kick" but once that is done the kink takes precedence. The MC pov only is not meant to be entertaining on its own, it is to provide people with some mystery if they seek one and for me it is a "ok let's see how dumb and blind is the MC to not see what is happening".

Also it is far easier to write linear bit of story than multi choice one that result the characters becoming almost different people.

The banner argument is fair enough, but I think you are overplaying the genre argument. It's not uncommon for ntr games with several branches to have ''good endings'', reverse ntr paths and other things that deviate from getting cucked. I'd wager most people knew blonde kouhai would take your bully's dick in some route, but thought there would be ways to avoid it.

My first expectation about the game was that the blonde chick will be corrupting the wife. I don't think many people come to ntr games expecting that you can save the girls.

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

this game definitely got generic and spoiled from the moment it branched out into several routes, the usual problem, prioritizing quantity over quality, I hope your next game is better used.