2B Or Not 2B
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- Jun 20, 2017
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The way i read it stupid was being used as opposite to believable.
But have it your way... the scene will still be stupid with mask. Face recognition comes mainly from eye area not lower face.
However how about approaching the challenge from another angle? Luca can introduce Harry to this new girl that applied and he just couldn't stop himself from hiring her because she looks just like Laura! She only has different eye color (contacts) and extra mole/ tattoo or something. Luca could tease Harry about having the girl dye the hair to make her even more like Laura. Meanwhile the "new" the girl has the same hair color as Laura used to have and Harry is very troubled by that but he can't say anything.
Really like the idea. I Just put your ideas with credit in the discord. Maybe something comes from it.You wouldn't recognize family member because of a mask ? ...
Unless we wanna give Laura wig, black glasses, mask and have her never speak we better abandon the idea Harry not recognizing her, Harry endlessly believes in what she says but he is perceptive and absolutely would recognize her. I think it is better to go with the example i gave earlier. I would extend on it and Harry could try contacting Laura to ease his doubts - he could get either interrupted with timely mms from Laura showing herself and Trevor or call her and hear a prerecorded message (he wouldn't be aware it is prerecorded).
I just learned about Turning the Page, nice that they are back. They had timely releases, decent art and multi-pov approach so i'm looking forward to it.
Edit:
Sorry Boss,
looks like HCat already finished writing and sent it off to the artists but they thought it was a good idea
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