VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus Scenes S2 7-8] [Hangover Cat Purrroduction]

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Iexist

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Haven't played through Aya's perspective for whatever reason but I think I've seen all of her endings. So I'm speculating somewhat blindly. My guess is Laura is to do a lot of heavy lifting. And it will take place over a longer period of time. Eventually making her think she can have Harry without Laura hurting him. Especially if the branch starts with Harry kissing Aya back. I can see her wanting to hurt them badly because of it.
There's the Aya Path ending and a whole other FIVE Aya variant endings, for a total of 6... which is exactly as many as the other ending types... which is insane if you think about it, if only because all of Aya's variants could be considered Good Endings for the MC. Laura, not so much in most of them. >.>"

Are you seriously saying you played through basically half of the endings with only Harry's perspective? Because, if you play through the All Perspective, you literally CANNOT avoid her perspective...

ANYway, getting back to the point...

In her path, which is the first thing you need to see before you can unlock the other 5 Aya variant endings... it's BECAUSE Laura was involved that Luca got done in. He got greedy and tried to have them both, and he ended up biting up more than he could chew when Aya used Laura to keep him distracted while she wrapped Harry around her finger and then screwed up Luca and Laura with her yakuza connections.

The fact of the matter is that the big difference between the girls, is that Laura presents herself to be strong and smart... when she's not particularly strong and her intelligence is debatable. Aya presents herself as silly and dumb... when in fact she's very smart and she's definitely strong. Both are batshit crazy btw, but the nuance of their insanity is different, and Aya's insanity comes out on top.

Most importantly, Aya knows that Luca's a Mafia kid, but HE does not know that Aya's a yakuza princess, which lets her have a hidden hand that he can't prepare for.

The dev needs to address these things without suddenly giving Aya the idiot ball, or making her seem mentally weaker than she actually is. On top of that, we have at least three endings that show that Harry CAN become good enough in bed to compete with Luca (The Good Ending and its Aya variant, and arguably, the Aya version of the Fallen Hero ending). Aya should be smart enough to figure that out and stubborn enough to want to make it happen even IF Luca fucks her until she has a strong sex addiction. She's shown to not be anywhere near as short-sighted as Laura after all.

This means that sex alone shouldn't work the way it did with Laura. (And with Laura it worked because she's too short-sighted to think that Harry could accept her as she is... all without going the extra mile of telling of him in the first place, and too short-sighted to think that he'd be willing to learn how to deal with her beyond normal nympho needs. That's on top of the fact that she's not even considering the fact that Luca will eventually throw her away like a used tissue the moment she's no longer useful in tormenting Harry and/or stops being a good enough hole to fuck...)

I'm not saying it's NOT doable.

However, I AM saying that it'll take a lot of work, a lot of thinking, and possibly more effort than the Dev might be able to put in. As someone who's done some writing of their own under certain circumstances, I can easily say that knowing what points you need to reach in your writing... and actually hitting them in a satisfactory matter is not easy. Plus... if I'm not mistaken, the dev made a comment along the lines of "I'll make her fall even if I have to completely mess up the characters." or some such... which is... uh... not encouraging.
 

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Hmmmmm, since there's a lot of close encounters there. The MC should spray a bottle of syphilis or chlamydia and the like while they're banging. Can you imagine the anarchy that would do when he continues on banging the other girls.

Anyways, good stuff, poor cucks
 
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Laura is so strong/smart that in three years of relationship she never understood her boyfriend, and her first reaction when that is bought up was to run away as a coward like her would instead of facing your wrongdoings, and trying to improve.

That is why I call her a coward and a weakling.

That is such an degree in fail that is laughable and pathetic. That is the sort of person Luca wants.

Pathetic begets Pathetic.

Gods, it would be fun if Harry told her that he kept praising her because she has such a fragile ego that he thought she would break apart if someone said anything that wasn't that. That is also something about her pride.

Her ego is so fragile...good God, now think about overinflated egos, general incapacity to understand your own FUCKING PARTNERS and the way you lie to yourself claiming one to be a 'weakling'...

:ROFLMAO:

This word becomes funny when considering the 'Good' Ending, Pot Calling Kettle Black at its best! Laura could truly join Luca on a campaign of spreading misery and chaos, then fail because she is inept at social actually and because she, like Luca, would ALSO consistently act into williful ignorance.
 
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Are you seriously saying you played through basically half of the endings with only Harry's perspective? Because, if you play through the All Perspective, you literally CANNOT avoid her perspective...

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I skipped all of the updates between Laura's last solo ending and the good ending. Because, there was a part of me that thought that we wouldn't be getting the update here. As the dev already made it harder to leak it here once. So, I figured I might as well leave it somwhere I could make peace with how things turned out. Laura's family ending and Harry's full-blown cuck ending are the truest to their characters as far I interpret them. I came back because I wanted to know what the dev had in mind for a good ending. Especially because he doesn't do early exits or purity routes. Which is what I prefer in games like these. Dumb as it sounds.

As to why I played Harry only and not all perspectives. Well, I wanted to see Harry fucking her first. In all iterations and on all paths. Possibly also including her full path. So, that way if I ever get around to watching her and Luca it should hit harder. Because she's nobody to Harry until the endings. Meaning the scenes before then are between characters I don't care for. And my connection to Harry is my connection to the game.

You know there's a path or two where you see Aya or Laura's perspective when choosing Harry only. At least at the end of each path.
 

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I skipped all of the updates between Laura's last solo ending and the good ending. Because, there was a part of me that thought that we wouldn't be getting the update here. As the dev already made it harder to leak it here once. So, I figured I might as well leave it somwhere I could make peace with how things turned out. Laura's family ending and Harry's full-blown cuck ending are the truest to their characters as far I interpret them. I came back because I wanted to know what the dev had in mind for a good ending. Especially because he doesn't do early exits or purity routes. Which is what I prefer in games like these. Dumb as it sounds.

As to why I played Harry only and not all perspectives. Well, I wanted to see Harry fucking her first. In all iterations and on all paths. Possibly also including her full path. So, that way if I ever get around to watching her and Luca it should hit harder. Because she's nobody to Harry until the endings. Meaning the scenes before then are between characters I don't care for. And my connection to Harry is my connection to the game.

You know there's a path or two where you see Aya or Laura's perspective when choosing Harry only. At least at the end of each path.
That's... an interesting perspective...

I only played through Harry's perspective exclusively only once, because it's the thing to do for NTR VNs and all that. However, I'm here for hot smut, regardless of the permutation of characters it happens with, so after that it was full blown exposure. First playthrough was blind, and I landed straight on the basic Good Ending... which I suppose is to be expected given that to get there you need to take the choices dictated by Common Sense... a nearly non-existed super-power in the NTR genre.

I didn't play any of the updates. I only picked this up once it was complete, and it's a good thing for Hangover that they didn't block them from getting here, because if they did, they wouldn't have gotten any of my money. I don't spend money on H-games blind, especially with stuff like NTR. However, this was so well done that I definitely decided to throw some money their way for a while, to help ensure that there's more in the future.

Getting back to Harry and his perspective. I honestly don't think I could manage multiple playthroughs from his perspective. Mainly because he's such an oblivious idiot that I'd punch him, repeatedly, if he was a real person that I could meet. However, the smut MORE than makes up for it. Could've used more scenes with Laura+Sandra or Laura+Aya at the same time though. Or gangbangs. Shame there's only two of those.

I honestly don't know how the Family Ending looks from just Harry's perspective... Or any ending really aside from the Good Ending. That said, you do know that the Family Ending is actually the second worst ending for Harry in the entire game, right? Second only to the Fallen Hero ending. Some might say that the Abrupt ending is worse for him, but at least in that one, he finds out the truth and acts... even if we have no idea how far his actions will go in his moment of madness without Aya to change things. In the Family Ending, Harry suffers more and more without even realizing how much he's being screwed with, and odds are that Luca will get bored eventually and just completely ruin him in a way that's as bad, if not worse than the Fallen Hero ending.
 
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Public post from HC's patreon page.

A Promise Best Left Unkept - Aya Edition V0.1.0 - Hangover (10$) Tier (5 days Exclusivity)

Here we go again! We’re back for more A Promise Best Left Unkept… woohoo~…
If it isn't obvious already, I don't really know how to preface this. I guess by explaining what this project is about. For those who don't know, A Promise Best Left Unkept was completed last month and released on Steam this month. But it might be confusing since we're back with more of it this month instead of a completely new project. That's because last month was only the completion of Laura's route. Now we're doing the same game, but with Aya as our main heroine. What that means is that, at a certain point early in the game, Harry will be doing something different than what he did in the original version, and this will lead to a drastically different outcome.
For the specifications: the update adds 15.5k~ words of new content, with 2 new sex scenes and 5 new CG sets. The entire beginning of the game (probably 50k words) is still there, for those who haven't played the original game, or simply want to re-read it.
For those who don't want to read it again though, and don't want to skip through it, there's now an option in the extra section of the game to jump to specific versions of the game. Since it's the first version, you can only jump to V0.1.0, but when V0.2.0 comes out, you will be able to jump to the new content from that menu directly.



Another change is the Scene Replay menu. Now you can choose Harry in the menu. Meaning that every scene involving Harry will be found under him. Also, if there are any memorable moments where Harry witnesses scenes indirectly or partially (mystery perspective), those might be found under him as well.



As mentioned previously, this update starts things slow. In fact, Aya's route in and of itself is slow. I have mixed feelings about lots and lots of things. Her route will either be a huge failure or a great success. Just… expect it to be a fairly long ride.

Once again, if there are quality-of-life changes that you want to see in the game, you can still bring them to my attention. I want to create a quality product, but since it's essentially the 'same' game, a lot of things are the same.

I do plan to add a few custom music that I commissioned over the past months. There are no new music pieces in this particular update, but expect a few in the next one.

As always, love you guys. Stay safe.

Download hub (from my website)

To those who are going to my website for the first time, to link your Patreon account to my site, all you have to do is click on the "Refresh to access this content." Then you will be prompted to link your account to my website. Accept, and you should be redirected to the page with the links. It shouldn't be more complicated than this.

If you have a hard time linking Patreon to the site, you might have to disable certain browser extensions such as AdBlock or any type of ad blocker.

Changelog V0.1.0

Menu


  • Added a Jump To Version feature
  • Changed the Replay Menu to incorporate Harry's perspective
Story

  • Added 5 CG sets
  • Added 2 sex scene
  • Added 15.5k words to the story
 

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So, I've been playing this game for a while now. I'm in the scene Laura gives a blowjob the o Luca while Harry thinks she is throwing up.

I'm finding the lack of graphic sex scenes so far weird. It's mostly black screen with texts. Didn't seem like this game would be text based.

Is this how the game supposed to be or something wrong on my end?

I got some pictures like Laura smoking in the office, she putting the condom with the mouth, the groping at inside the wardrobe but most of real sex stuff are text based.
 

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So, I've been playing this game for a while now. I'm in the scene Laura gives a blowjob the o Luca while Harry thinks she is throwing up.

I'm finding the lack of graphic sex scenes so far weird. It's mostly black screen with texts. Didn't seem like this game would be text based.

Is this how the game supposed to be or something wrong on my end?

I got some pictures like Laura smoking in the office, she putting the condom with the mouth, the groping at inside the wardrobe but most of real sex stuff are text based.
Wut? That scene has graphics in Laura's perspective. It's even animated. And there's like... 7 scenes before that one, all with graphics.

Are you playing Harry's perspective? Because in Harry's perspective, the only scenes that are shown are the ones that he directly becomes aware of... which is not much in most routes.

If you want to fully see the scenes, you need to play the All Perspectives way, and that will let you see exactly what's happening with Laura (and in some cases with Aya/Sandra) when Harry isn't looking or isn't around etc. There's a ton of CGs in this VN. There's 70 registered H-scenes (the majority of which involve Luca and Laura, of course. It's a NTR VN, what else can you expect?)
 
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Heranwen

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Wut? That scene has graphics in Laura's perspective. It's even animated. And there's like... 7 scenes before that one, all with graphics.

Are you playing Harry's perspective? Because in Harry's perspective, the only scenes that are shown are the ones that he directly becomes aware of... which is not much in most routes.

If you want to fully see the scenes, you need to play the All Perspectives way, and that will let you see exactly what's happening with Laura (and in some cases with Aya/Sandra) when Harry isn't looking or isn't around etc. There's a ton of CGs in this VN. There's 70 registered H-scenes (the majority of which involve Luca and Laura, of course. It's a NTR VN, what else can you expect?)
I chose all perspectives, the game even tells me when it is switching perspectives. I went to the Extra menu and saw that in the Cg Preview, it shows an image that I don't see in-game. When I click it I only get a black screen though. Maybe the installation got corrupted.
 

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I chose all perspectives, the game even tells me when it is switching perspectives. I went to the Extra menu and saw that in the Cg Preview, it shows an image that I don't see in-game. When I click it I only get a black screen though. Maybe the installation got corrupted.
There's definitely something b0rked with your installation in that case... It's weird that it's working at all in that condition though...
 
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That's... an interesting perspective...
Hey, I didn't say they were 'good.' I said they were "true." Although I should have been more specific, still. The Family ending is true to Laura's character. Because she's unfettered by any notions that she's different from her mother. And the Fallen Hero ending is true to Harry because he's a secret cuck. I think that's part of why he is attracted to Laura. There's no way he lets Luca have the USB without contacting her first. Especially not after what happened to Maya. If he doesn't want something to happen deep down.

At least that's how I interpret the characters. Otherwise the story is rushed and dragged out at the same time.
 

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Hey, I didn't say they were 'good.' I said they were "true." Although I should have been more specific, still. The Family ending is true to Laura's character. Because she's unfettered by any notions that she's different from her mother. And the Fallen Hero ending is true to Harry because he's a secret cuck. I think that's part of why he is attracted to Laura. There's no way he lets Luca have the USB without contacting her first. Especially not after what happened to Maya. If he doesn't want something to happen deep down.

At least that's how I interpret the characters. Otherwise the story is rushed and dragged out at the same time.
Actual ending Aya/Laura Route.

Aya/Laura 'humiliates' Harry and thinks he is 'weakling'.
The moment go out, Luca approaches Harry...pats on his back friendly really and asks.

Luca: So? Recorded it? Having to make those bitches think you are an idiot is a bit hard, I mean, you pretend to be a fool so hard that for Christ's sake, they are so dumb that they can't see the facts straight on.

Harry: Lemme guess, they think I don't know, and get off from it?

Luca: Meh, yep. They are braindead idiots, I swear, anyone with half a brain would have noticed what we were doing.

Harry: Luca...I needed to stay THREE years making Laura think she has a brain...and less said about Aya...she pretends to be a fool and...then thinks she is smart...
*He grimaced.*

Luca: *Blinked, and sighed.*
Gods, Harry, that is really worth it? I mean, I know girls with more of a brain than those ones...and willing to play with this whole cuck porn business.

Harry: It is good when they think we are idiots, make the fantasy shit better for those idiots out there, also, more money the better for us anyway. So? What now?

Luca: Gonna call Laura's Mother and we can fuck her, and then fuck each other, what'cha think? It was a while since we haven't teamed up a bitch and got off from one and another. I kinda miss it.

Harry: Eh, might be good pastime until dinner.

Luca: I will be honest, I don't like how they talk with you, I only made them be like that since that was your request.

Harry: Luca, those two are so braindead they didn't notice half of what I did is so contrived that there is no what I wouldn't know. Why should I care about what a bunch of brainless worthless bitches think?

Luca: Point, as long as we get the profits, it is all okay...

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Gods. Those two are worse in this than anyone else.
 

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Hey, I didn't say they were 'good.' I said they were "true." Although I should have been more specific, still. The Family ending is true to Laura's character. Because she's unfettered by any notions that she's different from her mother. And the Fallen Hero ending is true to Harry because he's a secret cuck. I think that's part of why he is attracted to Laura. There's no way he lets Luca have the USB without contacting her first. Especially not after what happened to Maya. If he doesn't want something to happen deep down.

At least that's how I interpret the characters. Otherwise the story is rushed and dragged out at the same time.
While Harry being a cuck on any level is debatable...

The USB thing didn't happen because of that. It happened because of Harry's willful ignorance problem. You have to remember that at that point, Harry did NOT remember what happened with Maya exactly. He loosely knew something happened and that Luca was involved, but at that point the memory was firmly suppressed. On top of that he was running away from the details of his past so hard that he was ignoring the warning signs of what Luca was doing and desperately hoping that Luca actually changed from the psycho he was back in high-school. He took the friendly illusion Luca was projecting as reality, because the reality that Luca was still the same psycho, but grown up, and still had it in for him, was too terrifying to deal with.

Either way, that's not the real plot-hole with the whole blackmail thing.

The real plothole is the fact that apparently, that entire office building has cameras only in places that are inconvenient for Harry and no where else, and somehow, employees are allowed to turn off their cameras without providing justification for it whenever they want. In any real office building, Luca's blackmail scheme would have never worked, along with most of the fucking scenes at the office. He'd have been tagged as present in the building and talking with Harry in any real office building, and he'd have been a prime suspect in the incident, if one occurred. In which case Harry might have taken a slap on the wrist over it for being a moron, but it'd be Luca who'd get the police down his throat.

Again though, NTR VN.

NTR is one of those fetishes where you have to turn parts of your brain off to enjoy it, because the world has to literally bend around the "stud" for it to work in many cases. It works better in settings with magic and/or super-science or the like, where the "stud" can have some kind of unfair advantage. Otherwise, if any sort of realism is expected, genuine NTR is impossible.

Props to the writer though for giving the characters reasons and whatnot in this one. The issues of all the characters mean that IF they could all be real and IF such a ridiculous office building with such a ridiculous company could exist, and IF they could all gather in one place... then maybe this sort of absurd series of events could actually occur. Well, minus the whole 'cums 10+ times in a girl and still has just as much cum as when he started' bits. That's biologically impossible.
 
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Again though, NTR VN.

NTR is one of those fetishes where you have to turn parts of your brain off to enjoy it, because the world has to literally bend around the "stud" for it to work in many cases. It works better in settings with magic and/or super-science or the like, where the "stud" can have some kind of unfair advantage. Otherwise, if any sort of realism is expected, genuine NTR is impossible.
That is porn games in general. Not specific to NTR. You can bring up the “realism criticism” in a lot of them.
 

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That is porn games in general. Not specific to NTR. You can bring up the “realism criticism” in a lot of them.
I mean... yes and no.

I suppose realism is the wrong choice of words here. Internal consistency is, I suppose, the better way of putting it. A porn world doesn't need to be realistic, but it should be internally consistent so there aren't any massive plot-holes. Like, for example, many games aren't realistic, but the way the world works in each of them and how the characters are shaped by that world is internally consistent. So you can think 'Yeah, if this world was real, this shit would make sense in this world.'

Unfortunately, this VN is set into a setting that's supposedly based on the real world, which means that there are real-world-like things that you expect. You can hand-wave the porn-god stuff away by saying that people are built different over there. However, the way the company works isn't as hand-wave-able, especially when the VN does stuff like blatantly reference COVID and other such things. Which is why the whole blackmail thing feels like a massive plot-hole. Because you see a supposed company that could exist IRL, but somehow doesn't have the basic security that is standard for tech companies for more than 10 years. For someone like me who has worked in a tech company, I just can't easily ignore how stupid it is. XD

In my experience, NTR is, in general, by far the genre with the most consistency issues out there, though I do admit that I can very well be extremely biased, especially around any games that have my favorite content, aka tentacles.
 

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Question, was some of the art made using AI? Not the static characters in most of the dialogue sequences but the cg art itself. A lot of them just have contradicting or altering art styles?
 
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