clowns234

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The concept seems interesting. Based on comments so far, I'll probably wait for more content.
If this is from the girls perspective, how is this NTR? Just curious.
 
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Aason

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The concept seems interesting. Based on comments so far, I'll probably wait for more content.
If this is from the girls perspective, how is this NTR? Just curious.
She has a boyfriend. And she's not really willing to cheat on him, but she don't have much of a choice.
(that's a kind of ntr, right?)
 

clowns234

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She has a boyfriend. And she's not really willing to cheat on him, but she don't have much of a choice.
(that's a kind of ntr, right?)
It would be NTR from the boyfriend's perspective. Not so much hers. And since she is an unknowing / unwilling participant, she's not by definition the one cheating, unless she continues to let it happen.
 

Avenjq

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As per usual the blackmail setup is pathetic and would never work in reality ... but oh well. Lets hope the folowup makes it worth the pain.
 

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Overview:
You play as a young girl, who's late on her period. She wonders why... When she receives a text from her brother -that wasn't meant for her-, she gets her explanation, and a new style of life!
This game is entirely inside the phone of the said girl.​

Thread Updated: 2022-02-03
Release Date: 2022-02-03
Developer: Aason F95zone
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Version: 0.01
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Uhm. Something new. I'll try it.
 

Dom1anon

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The concept is very interesting, though I would have really preferred a dominant male protagonist for something like it.
 
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I'm sorry, but the way this is portrayed is absolutely nonsensical. Not only does she have evidence to have both her dad and brother thrown in jail on her phone, away from them, she cowers like that over the phone instead of screenshotting it and sending it to both her mom and the police? Story so far is both boring and bad, hopefully you can make it better. Best of luck!
 

Aason

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I'm sorry, but the way this is portrayed is absolutely nonsensical. Not only does she have evidence to have both her dad and brother thrown in jail on her phone, away from them, she cowers like that over the phone instead of screenshotting it and sending it to both her mom and the police? Story so far is both boring and bad, hopefully you can make it better. Best of luck!
Porn logic! But yeah I hear you. I'll try to take it more slowly, and more realistically.
 
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fjabbegreven

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Really cool concept, might've been because I just got high, but it really sucked me in.

Abusive father incest is a massive turn-off lol, well at least I know that, anyway just wanted to say 'Cool Concept' hope it spreads and good luck. And don't worry I went in blind and high, and I grew up in the goatse days so I'm good :p
 
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fourtwonull

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Half of y'all cant seem to read OPs post before commenting, how the hell do you get through any Renpy games without the ability to read?

Neat concept, awesome tags, I'll definitely be on the lookout for future releases. Playing demos always results in disappointment for me no matter how good they are.
 

fjabbegreven

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Half of y'all cant seem to read OPs post before commenting, how the hell do you get through any Renpy games without the ability to read?

Neat concept, awesome tags, I'll definitely be on the lookout for future releases. Playing demos always results in disappointment for me no matter how good they are.
Everyone burns out at different intervals, some of us learn to enjoy getting scorched occasionally :p
 
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Lednacek

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a bit dark, but i dont mind. promising start. i wont review it until some real content comes out. this is short even for a 0.01.
Where are the good times when games started with 1.0 version.
 
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quiboune

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While I'm a huge fan of this kind of storytelling, this is disappointing in a few ways. Pregnancy is instant and aborted immediately without the player's input so I think the tag shouldn't even be there. There are no relevant choices so far, the only splitting point leads to a lame blackmail "storyline".
There's barely 1 minute of content in this, hardly enough for a release, so I'm uncertain about it all.
 

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She has a boyfriend. And she's not really willing to cheat on him, but she don't have much of a choice.
(that's a kind of ntr, right?)
F95's definition of NTR is as follows per their own website:

"NTR [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC."


Also, I would like to point out that most anti NTR trolls only consider it NTR if the MC is a male and getting cheated on, and tend to ignore it if the female MC is doing the NTR'ing.

Sounds to me like this NTR tag doesn't need to be there.

While I'm a huge fan of this kind of storytelling, this is disappointing in a few ways. Pregnancy is instant and aborted immediately without the player's input so I think the tag shouldn't even be there. There are no relevant choices so far, the only splitting point leads to a lame blackmail "storyline".
There's barely 1 minute of content in this, hardly enough for a release, so I'm uncertain about it all.
Agreed that the tag is questionable at the least...also sadened that this is misleading and we don't get to see this...hopefully at some point later maybe.
 
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PhantomBull

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When I read that all the game happens inside the phone of the girl I expected something more like a porn version of "A normal lost phone". I ended up being disappointing that the gameplay doesn't involve using the phone and that it's more a click to read where we don't have control of how she interacts with the phone. I don't know if this kind of gameplay is for me, but good luck anyway ;)
 
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