VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Split Existence [v0.3] [A Dre@mer]

[katabasi]

9 months zero reviews?
doesnt spell good

 

[hoborg]

9 months zero reviews?
doesnt spell good

Its not bad, but there isnt really much content to comment on.

 

[hyperjack38]

Oops, fixed. Thanks

Thank you

 

[Jackie123]

Thank you

this game really needs more attention so many good devs are struggling to build up their patreon base..... while all the other "bigger" devs bringing boring ass games out and milking a shit ton of money...

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Good renders, but the dialogue is too much, it's like a Tarantino movie, with long runs of dialogue between the action.
Get an editor to cut the fat out.

 

[raj143]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/scene_3.rpy", line 302, in script
    j " {color=#0000ffff} Ohh... it's the nurse and [nameb]. "
KeyError: u'nameb'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/scene_3.rpy", line 302, in script
    j " {color=#0000ffff} Ohh... it's the nurse and [nameb]. "
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 715, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/exports.py", line 1393, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/character.py", line 1190, in __call__
    what = what_pattern.replace("[what]", sub(what, translate=True))
  File "renpy/character.py", line 1179, in sub
    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
  File "renpy/substitutions.py", line 270, in substitute
    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)
  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 585, in _vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 646, in get_field
  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 605, in get_value
KeyError: u'nameb'

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 7.4.4.1439
A Split Existence 0.3
Fri Oct 22 07:21:07 2021

MANNY TYM SHW THIS.....ANY ONE FIX THIS MATTER.

 

[Deleted member 3712752]

So, played the first version...a lot of questions...
1) it has incest tag ...then why the foster parents , landlady concept
2) whos this diana ? Another sister ? Aunt ?
3) its the dev's second game ...why doesn't he get it proof read
4) isn't it too short for the first release ? We didn't even get to meet the full cast( the game says mc lives with 4 women ...we only met 3 , even the intro isn't completed properly )

An IP needed.

 

[Jazzmatazz]

Nice renders but the text used is giving me a Epilepsy seizure.

 

[sidsan]

any femdom and how to get that

 

[Boehser Onkel]

any femdom and how to get that

you asked this at amore tech too..
how about just read the genre tag´s
or just play

 

[sidsan]

you asked this at amore tech too..
how about just read the genre tag´s
or just play

I want to know which character have that

 

[Boehser Onkel]

I want to know which character have that

you asked about femdom -- read the genre tag



and for the char who has this -- play , or the info which char is useless

 

[GrannyJuices]

Needs the Lesbian tag, we've already seen some dumb bimbo getting finger-fucked by an LI for no apparent reason. Annoying, ugh.

 

[Tuperr0]

Niceeee

 

[Wayward38]

Is this abandon? It doesn't have the abandoned tag but it seems like there haven't been any updates in a while.

 

[Daastaan007]

Any update news or Is this one Abandoned..??

 

[Ramagar]

Any update news or Is this one Abandoned..??

Well the dev does have another game. But even it has not been updated since Jan. So not looking good I think

 

[GentlemanCorpse]

I tried it.. even until the end...
I really don't like it... not funny at all, faces and poses are ridiculous, writing has so many errors, only fat cows.

But lets support him on 20 different platforms so he can make 3 games simultan after his 55h job....

I don't see this getting better in future, guess it is just not my humour or something...

But happy for those who enjoy this.


Regards

 

[vokka]

Why is the DEV working on 3 Games

1. My Dream Girl
2. A Split Existence.
3. Dreams To Catch... instead of finish One ???

 

[7empest5teele]

Oh I don't THINK SO!!
I was just tortured reading the dialog in another VN, My favorite sister, or something that has INCREDIBLY horrible dialog!
BUTCHERED English from start to finish, I am not even going to bother starting this one, since I can READ in the synopsis how it's going to unfold!
And THAT is why, it's "made" by the same developer.