I hope when CHYOS gets time he could add more dialogue for Emily when she starts getting soft to MC , it's a little to much on nose when she just suddenly starts being nice to Mc when he starts gifting her better food.
I think maybe a bath Scene where she sees MC naked , of maybe see's MC with frisha and develops jealous but also internal conflict of how to approach towards her feeling for MC.
Basically more build for EMILY with jealous, internal conflict and more drama , lol.
I think it's a lot of work and don't think it'll be easy , but just a suggestion. This is one of the best NSFW game if not the best.