VN Ren'Py A Touch of Magic [v0.1 Ch.1 Remake] [First Sin, JAD]

[elkon98]

I need to correct you on something, dev. you call the MC a Nephilim but he is referred to as half human and half dragon. a Nephilim is the child of an angel and a human. specifically they are defined as the offspring of the sons of God and the daughters of man. you should really correct that going forward or some people will be confused

You're right, in theory.
However; what I'm understanding here is that he is supposed to be a hybrid dragon-angel(god?)-human or some sh1t, and he lost the angel(god?) part so he's now just human-dragon. You also got to remember the creative liberties some people take when it comes to storytelling so maybe Nephilim in the authors universe is anything/everything that is a mixture of human and any other fantasy race.

The story seems interesting and reminds me of another vn that never got finished, archon something something. Hope this one gets more love and is not just a money trap for people to donate while the author just takes the money and makes an update every 6 months.

 

[drifter139]

You're right, in theory.
However; what I'm understanding here is that he is supposed to be a hybrid dragon-angel(god?)-human or some sh1t, and he lost the angel(god?) part so he's now just human-dragon. You also got to remember the creative liberties some people take when it comes to storytelling so maybe Nephilim in the authors universe is anything/everything that is a mixture of human and any other fantasy race.

The story seems interesting and reminds me of another vn that never got finished, archon something something. Hope this one gets more love and is not just a money trap for people to donate while the author just takes the money and makes an update every 6 months.

I'm not saying it won't succeed. it's just that seeing mc being called a Nephilim irks me because I like the idea of a mc having an angel parent and in this case it isn't that. if they called him something like dragonkin or dragonborn, then it wouldn't be such an issue to me. it just feels like dev saw the term, thought it sounded cool, and went with it

 

[SpectyrX]

I'm not saying it won't succeed. it's just that seeing mc being called a Nephilim irks me because I like the idea of a mc having an angel parent and in this case it isn't that. if they called him something like dragonkin or dragonborn, then it wouldn't be such an issue to me. it just feels like dev saw the term, thought it sounded cool, and went with it

Does any of this really matter when this game isn't ever getting finished lol.

 

[e6mill]

Does any of this really matter when this game isn't ever getting finished lol.

Not with that attitude...

 

[SpectyrX]

Not with that attitude...

The game getting finished has nothing to do with some random person on a forum and everything to do with the developer. This game has had two updates in two years. That is one update a year and the most recent "update" isn't even an update but a rework. It's going nowhere. I wish that wasn't true because the premise sounds interesting but giving this game any attention is a complete waste of time.

 

[e6mill]

The game getting finished has nothing to do with some random person on a forum and everything to do with the developer. This game has had two updates in two years. That is one update a year and the most recent "update" isn't even an update but a rework. It's going nowhere. I wish that wasn't true because the premise sounds interesting but giving this game any attention is a complete waste of time.

And yet here you are.

 

[HornyyPussy]

And yet here you are.

Boggles the mind, doesn't it

 

[SpectyrX]

And yet here you are.

You think being bored on the internet and responding to a forum thread is me playing a game. Ok, you keep on thinking that lol.

 

[rafa30]

Any incest patch?

 

[e6mill]

Any incest patch?

You enter p much ALL the relationships yourself...

 

[rafa30]

You enter p much ALL the relationships yourself...

I don't understand how to choose relationships.
English is not my native language.

 

[exile69]

I don't understand how to choose relationships.
English is not my native language.

Verona is your grandmother, and you are her grandson.
Angela is your mom, and you are her son.
Enzo is your brother, and you are his brother.
Magno is your father, and you are his son.
Bianca is your sister, and you are her brother.

 

[elkon98]

Verona is your grandmother, and you are her grandson.
Angela is your mom, and you are her son.
Enzo is your brother, and you are his brother.
Magno is your father, and you are his son.
Bianca is your sister, and you are her brother.

or if ur gonna go full ash ketchum on them add a step to everything

 

[elkon98]

for anyone curious i will attach some example of the "remake" bellow. i don't think anything was actually rewritten, maybe few lines here and there got removed.

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left side is the old version

shiet, the old version actually looks better aesthetically like, wtf

 

[fitty543]

what i this a remake off? where the original game if it has more contewnt i want to download that

 

[Tyrranus]

what i this a remake off? where the original game if it has more contewnt i want to download that

not a remake but more a 'spiritual successor' or something but its Reluctant Archon.... you can find it in the forum it has its own thread

 

[Funky_A]

The scenario is interesting, the cg΄s are quite good and the story progresses in a good pace. Kind disappointing that a game so invested in quality cg's has no animations

 

[MasKeLs]

Render looks good

 

[Samothrace73]

I cannot find a single possible secret on screen