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Dustellar

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Well... I'm not sure what is new :p the story look interesting now, was expecting more mom :\
 

AkitoH

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I wanna like the story behind this, because it's rather different. The balance of characters are ok. You have your geeks, hornies, assholes, and normies. But the issue with this story is that it jumps around too much. Too much changes.

Right now, it just seems like he's making it up as he goes and if he reaches a writer's block at a certain moment, the idea he once had is scrapped for something new. He's not 100% sure of himself. That's my impression at least. I understand it's far from a finished product, but it doesn't feel like geeseki has a handle of the story he wants to tell, which makes the pacing and plot chaotic. I often found myself more confused and that's not due to the mystery of the game, but rather the constant shifts in plot.
 
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D3ssel

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I wanna like the story behind this, because it's rather different. The balance of characters are ok. You have your geeks, hornies, assholes, and normies. But the issue with this story is that it jumps around too much. Too much changes.

Right now, it just seems like he's making it up as he goes and if he reaches a writer's block at a certain moment, the idea he once had is scrapped for something new. He's not 100% sure of himself. That's my impression at least. I understand it's far from a finished product, but it doesn't feel like geeseki has a handle of the story he wants to tell, which makes the pacing and plot chaotic. I often found myself more confused and that's not due to the mystery of the game, but rather the constant shifts in plot.
I couldn't agree more.

I'm curious about where geeseki wants to take his story... But, as it is, it really feels like he has very little idea of it as a whole, which leads to a very convoluted (imho) story that begins in a certain way, goes everywhere, and basically stops where it started... I know this is just 0.07 and I usually refrain myself from analyzing plots in such an early state of development, but, in this case, it looks like the author currently has little notion of where his plot is going.

It "feels" like the end goal of his story isn't really set in great detail, let alone the way to get there... Just a vibe I got from his two latest releases (0.06 and 0.07)

Both kept giving me a "feeling" that geeseki is literally making the plot up as he goes... Something that, if true, will probably not end well.

It's basically why I was quite worried when he told us that he would completely change the story... Imo, anyone considering Patreon should, at the very least, have a very well planned story and gameplay for his project, and stick to it... Otherwise, it will very likely end up looking like something extremely amateurish.

Also, I found the lack of content uninspiring... There was basically nothing new from 0.06 to 0.07, especially when it comes to h content (this is a Porn game, remember?).

Basically, +Added 2 Softcore H-scenes is just a tad too little, for a H game, imho.

Oh well, as it is, I will likely drop my patreon support for his project, and check this again in a few months.

Hopefully, geeseki will prove me wrong by then, right? ^^

It's a pity, though. I really dig how his art is refreshingly original and different from everything else in Patreon (though some fingers surely wouldn't hurt :p)
 
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KingsRaiden

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... I know this is just 0.07 and I usually refrain myself from analyzing plots in such an early state of development, but, in this case, it looks like the author currently has little notion of where his plot is going.....

It "feels" like the end goal of his story isn't really set in great detail, let alone the way to get there... Just a vibe I got from his two latest releases (0.06 and 0.07)

Both kept giving me a "feeling" that geeseki is literally making the plot up as he goes... Something that, if true, will probably not end well.

It's basically why I was quite worried when he told us that he would completely change the story... Imo, anyone considering Patreon should, at the very least, have a very well planned story and gameplay for his project, and stick to it... Otherwise, it will very likely end up looking like something extremely amateurish.
This is important when you are making a game, or a visual novel. Sure a few renders and locations are good, but what sets the good and awesome games apart is that there is a goal to achieve, or a plot, that drives everything. Having a vague idea and seeing if you can make a game about it is not new, sometimes that's how stories get written, but there is work done to flesh out that path before really sitting down and making a game.

The intriguing idea here is that the town is new, to the MC, and there are hints that things are not as they seem. But what is it? The girls disappearing is a good plot device, it gives something sinister going on and the idea was intriguing. Just going and coding something, with a few sexy scenes, doesn't quite cut it and makes me wonder how this will end up. Usually, not well, or it gets abandoned.

That would be sad, the art was fresh (even without fingers) and the idea was at least started well. Feeling out while going along, that is to me, as well, a warning sign that things might not end up quite right.
 
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3xpurt

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Good game but it's basically Summertime Saga.
It's got a similar feel to it, but the artwork is no where near that level, and sometimes I'm unsure if I'm looking at a penis or a baguette. Unfortunately, as someone said previously, it feels like he is making it up as he goes, and I have no real feel for how the story might go, unlike Summertime Saga, where I got the general gist of it right away.
 
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Akanaecchi

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Grateful for the update but I was disappointed with it sadly. I was hoping for more content. There was hardly any development. Except that they changed
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It seems like they spent more time on changing the plot around - it definitely looks like they're winging it, which will probably end pretty bad like KingsRaiden said above a few posts.
 

drlmnz

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have any of you seen the park scene with "effie" and the scribbles as "art"?
omg, why would you put this out in this state? it doesnt make sense.
 
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KingsRaiden

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Yeah, I came across this near the end before the "portal". It at least helps make sense of part of the game, but with the content and the amount of time it takes to get to a few scenes I am going to wait a few versions before coming back to this.

At least there were a few scenes where the characters have fingers.
 
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