Fan Art A Wife And Mother Fan Art

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Icekatana

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I really love the pairing. I think the sounds effects work, but the font size should be much smaller. I quite like the usage of it for the ringing phone. Thanks for sharing.
To me, the font size should vary. A fairly large one would indicate when a stroke or two would be hard while the smaller ones would indicate softer ones. Also having several of them would indicate the speed. For example it could look like this: "Splish, splish, SPLISH, SPLISH, splish." or "SPLISH, splish, SPLISH, splish". Bold being the hard strokes. Also, having more than three onomatopoeias (Words used to indicate sounds), gives the idea of how rapidly Myriam is getting fucked, for example something like this: "Splish-a, SPLISH-A, splish-a" or "PLAP-plap-plap-plap-PLAP." Now you could imagine more clearly how fast and hard a guy would be thrusting.
I've been writing a somewhat extreme sex novel on Discord about a young, Afro-Latina woman who was once a stripper but is now doing concierge porn. I've sent excerpts to a couple of old gaming partners, using that style, and they told me that those excerpts were some of the hottest storylines that they had read. Kthulhu, you could try it in a three or four panel scene to look back on and see if it would work for you.
 
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Yoda03

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Hi... I'm looking for a fan game in which there are several stories with Sophia.
Has anyone kept a copy to share?
Thanks in advance.
 
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To me, the font size should vary. A fairly large one would indicate when a stroke or two would be hard while the smaller ones would indicate softer ones. Also having several of them would indicate the speed. For example it could look like this: "Splish, splish, SPLISH, SPLISH, splish." or "SPLISH, splish, SPLISH, splish". Bold being the hard strokes. Also, having more than three onomatopoeias (Words used to indicate sounds), gives the idea of how rapidly Myriam is getting fucked, for example something like this: "Splish-a, SPLISH-A, splish-a" or "PLAP-plap-plap-plap-PLAP." Now you could imagine more clearly how fast and hard a guy would be thrusting.
I've been writing a somewhat extreme sex novel on Discord about a young, Afro-Latina woman who was once a stripper but is now doing concierge porn. I've sent excerpts to a couple of old gaming partners, using that style, and they told me that those excerpts were some of the hottest storylines that they had read. Kthulhu, you could try it in a three or four panel scene to look back on and see if it would work for you.
I don't disagree. I think smaller and larger font has a place in showing degrees of sound. I think maybe the baseline should be a little smaller to start with. The focus should still be the render and not the font, but maybe having a version with and without text solves all of that.
 
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Yoda03

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Aren't they on page 1 of the main AWAM thread?
Goes to show you how some people just want things handed to them instead of doing a minimal amount of work.
From memory, there was a fan game in which there were several stories with Sophia (including 1 which was in 2 parts in which Sophia was gangbanged by the movers... directed by ST-9Pol, I think).

This game was on the front page and is no longer...otherwise, I wouldn't be here asking the question.
 

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Do you also think these updates will be a bull shit?
Well, I think the shit's got a little chance. The scenario developed in such a way that everyone expected fill all the holes of Sophia. But the plot took a turn. A little boring so far. The future will show.
P.S. The perfect ending to this story would be a ball in his mouth and a buzzing butt plug in Aiden's ass IMHO.
 

HanSolofan

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From memory, there was a fan game in which there were several stories with Sophia (including 1 which was in 2 parts in which Sophia was gangbanged by the movers... directed by ST-9Pol, I think).

This game was on the front page and is no longer...otherwise, I wouldn't be here asking the question.


find ST-9Pol, then search first page for mega files
 

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Well, I think the shit's got a little chance. The scenario developed in such a way that everyone expected fill all the holes of Sophia. But the plot took a turn. A little boring so far. The future will show.
P.S. The perfect ending to this story would be a ball in his mouth and a buzzing butt plug in Aiden's ass IMHO.
I would advise you to be careful saying those type of things around here. Andre and Aiden are non-events as far as I'm concerned - too boring a character to even download, but something like that might just pique my interest to try it.
 
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