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GREATThere will probably be 2 more parts.
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If you liked the previous 4 parts of our story, we will allow ourselves to continue.
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Friends, the works of artists published in this fan art thread leave no one indifferent!
For example, the idea for this funny mini-story came from just one amazing render, Devoted Member KillJoys!
We sincerely and deeply thank all artists and wish you, dear friends, creative success and a short path to the heights of mastery!
Author of history and dialogues Bane71
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The notorious Liam (Sophia's husband) and his boss Harris come to Sophia's house in the evening to drink another bottle ... (whoever reads it will find out what the reason is).
How will it end? How far will it go?
This is a version consisting of 5 chapters. A sequel is being prepared.
Have fun reading and we are waiting for your comments.
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+1 for zacooo boy, I hate working with vegetation!
This render was idealized by raavan1, thanks bro!
It was fun trying to realize the idea of someone else.
I hope you like it!
Also, I think I should try another male character... Any ideas? Just please, no Sam or Dylan... there is plenty of awesome renders with them on these 7xx pages haha
Characters: Sophia and Aiden.
"Snack Break"
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Please take time to read before you post. The previous page answered this so are you just posting for points?ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE THIS ?
mundane and rather poorly designed in economicsGreat work dud....can u make aiden and sophia please
Blown away-so fast!A new challenger appears! At least for me haha
Characters: Sophia and Andre
"Friends share..."
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Kill Joy BOY!
Update, just vyshak!...A new challenger appears! At least for me haha
Characters: Sophia and Andre
"Friends share..."
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Dylan: I wonder what she is watching
Sophia: "mm ah yeah, yeahs.."
Dylan:Wait is she?
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Dylan:"woooooow, are you..
Sophia: oh god no, sophia you stupid idiot
Dylan: "You're watching fucking porn and playing with yourself!!!"
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Dylan:"Don't worry its ok!"
Sophia: "I I I, I'm so sorry you shouldn't have seen that.."
Dylan: "It's fine! really its super normal right?"
Sophia:"Please just lets not talk about this ok"
Dylan: "oh come on, what were you watching?"
Sophia:"god i'm so embarrassed"
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Dylan:"Some romantic porn huh, just a guy watching porn while his girlfriend is sleeping on his lap... how meta.."
Sophia: "Uhm yeah looks like it, there was a different one on before this. All the channels are porn on this TV.. Kinda weird.."
Dylan: "Yeah I don't think this is a normal Motel"
Sophia:"What do you mean?"
Dylan: "I think this place is being used as a whore house.."
Sophia:"Iewww"
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Dylan:"Gluk* Gluk* yeah kinda gross but it's only for one night and it didn't seem to crowded."
Sophia: "Well explains the porn and the dirty rooms.."
Dylan: "The beer is great though."
Sophia:"Haha yeah really strong stuff, I'm really getting a bit drunk"
Dylan: "Strong beer and no food..."
Sophia:"And a drunk women being caught masterbating sigh.."
Dylan: "I guess we both got a bit horny after today.."
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Dylan:"Well maybe a bit more horny.. according to the meter.."
Sophia: "Dylan.. your towel.. oh...oh.."
Dylan: "It's ok, I'm just getting more comfortable"
Sophia:"Hick* please cover yourself up"
Dylan: "I can't, the towel is now all dirty.. such a dirty Motel."
Sophia:"fine just don't do anything weird ok"
Dylan: "Why don't you turn the volume back up"
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Dylan:"Just you and me getting drunk and watching porn haha, its crazy"
Sophia: "I'm not sure this is a good idea.."
Dylan: "Come on.. please?!"
Sophia:"Fine.."
Sophia turns the volume back up.
TV-porn actor: "yeah suck that fat cock"
TV-porn actrice: "gluaggghhh gluaghhhhh fuckk"
Dylan: "Why don't you also make yourself a bit more comfortable?"
Sophia:"You want me to get naked?"
Dylan: "Yeah its not like we haven't seen each other naked before, right?"
TV-porn actor: "oh my god your mouth feels amazing"
TV-porn actrice: "gluaggghhh gluaghhhhh gluaggghhh gluaghhhhh"
Sophia: Is this really going were I think it's going? Getting naked and masterbating watching porn while laying next to him? I need some more beer..
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Dylan:"Yeah take some more beer but leave some for me as well ok haha"
Sophia: "gluck* gluck* gluck* sure.. gluck* gluck*"
Dylan: wow I can't believe this is real
TV-porn actor: "turn around a want to see that pretty ass of yours"
Sophia: fuck it, fuck this towel
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Dylan:"oh wow yeah there you go, no shame"
Sophia: "oeh my head is spinning.."
Dylan: "come sit with me"
TV-porn actor: "yeah now spread that ass open for me"
TV-porn actrice: "I'm not sure it's gonna fit?"
Sophia: mmm fuck I'm so fucking horny, god what is happening, what am I doing...
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Dylan:"Just don't think to much about it ok, just two adults getting relaxed after a long day"Dylan: I wonder what she is watching
Sophia: "mm ah yeah, yeahs.."
Dylan:Wait is she?
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Dylan:"woooooow, are you..
Sophia: oh god no, sophia you stupid idiot
Dylan: "You're watching fucking porn and playing with yourself!!!"
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Dylan:"Don't worry its ok!"
Sophia: "I I I, I'm so sorry you shouldn't have seen that.."
Dylan: "It's fine! really its super normal right?"
Sophia:"Please just lets not talk about this ok"
Dylan: "oh come on, what were you watching?"
Sophia:"god i'm so embarrassed"
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Dylan:"Some romantic porn huh, just a guy watching porn while his girlfriend is sleeping on his lap... how meta.."
Sophia: "Uhm yeah looks like it, there was a different one on before this. All the channels are porn on this TV.. Kinda weird.."
Dylan: "Yeah I don't think this is a normal Motel"
Sophia:"What do you mean?"
Dylan: "I think this place is being used as a whore house.."
Sophia:"Iewww"
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Dylan:"Gluk* Gluk* yeah kinda gross but it's only for one night and it didn't seem to crowded."
Sophia: "Well explains the porn and the dirty rooms.."
Dylan: "The beer is great though."
Sophia:"Haha yeah really strong stuff, I'm really getting a bit drunk"
Dylan: "Strong beer and no food..."
Sophia:"And a drunk women being caught masterbating sigh.."
Dylan: "I guess we both got a bit horny after today.."
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Dylan:"Well maybe a bit more horny.. according to the meter.."
Sophia: "Dylan.. your towel.. oh...oh.."
Dylan: "It's ok, I'm just getting more comfortable"
Sophia:"Hick* please cover yourself up"
Dylan: "I can't, the towel is now all dirty.. such a dirty Motel."
Sophia:"fine just don't do anything weird ok"
Dylan: "Why don't you turn the volume back up"
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Dylan:"Just you and me getting drunk and watching porn haha, its crazy"
Sophia: "I'm not sure this is a good idea.."
Dylan: "Come on.. please?!"
Sophia:"Fine.."
Sophia turns the volume back up.
TV-porn actor: "yeah suck that fat cock"
TV-porn actrice: "gluaggghhh gluaghhhhh fuckk"
Dylan: "Why don't you also make yourself a bit more comfortable?"
Sophia:"You want me to get naked?"
Dylan: "Yeah its not like we haven't seen each other naked before, right?"
TV-porn actor: "oh my god your mouth feels amazing"
TV-porn actrice: "gluaggghhh gluaghhhhh gluaggghhh gluaghhhhh"
Sophia: Is this really going were I think it's going? Getting naked and masterbating watching porn while laying next to him? I need some more beer..
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Dylan:"Yeah take some more beer but leave some for me as well ok haha"
Sophia: "gluck* gluck* gluck* sure.. gluck* gluck*"
Dylan: wow I can't believe this is real
TV-porn actor: "turn around a want to see that pretty ass of yours"
Sophia: fuck it, fuck this towel
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Dylan:"oh wow yeah there you go, no shame"
Sophia: "oeh my head is spinning.."
Dylan: "come sit with me"
TV-porn actor: "yeah now spread that ass open for me"
TV-porn actrice: "I'm not sure it's gonna fit?"
Sophia: mmm fuck I'm so fucking horny, god what is happening, what am I doing...
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oh yeah finally...every time it gets better and better...can't wait for the next partDylan: "Years wow..."
Zedd: "Yup hehe I wouldn't recommend buying any of that food"
Dylan: "WHy haven't you bought any new stuff for in the machine?"
Zedd: "Nobody ever buys anything, so would be a waste of money to replenish it.."
Dylan: "Fuck, I really needed to buy some food.."
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Zedd: "Why don't you take some of these instead?"
Dylan: "Uhmmm"
Zedd: "It's my own beer, the Zed's special"
Dylan: "Well ok it's better than nothing"
Zedd: "And for you it's free kid haha I'll put it on Roberts tab.."
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Zedd: "Just be careful these little green devils pack a hell of a punch"
Dylan: "I bet, totally on an empty stomach"
Zedd: "True.. But beer takes the hunger away hehe"
Dylan: "Ah what the hell I'll take it"
Zedd: "Tell me if you liked them tomorrow ok"
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Zedd: "And bring me back the empty bottles we do recycle around here hahah"
Dylan: "Sure, Thanks Zedd!"
Dylan: Not sure how Sophia is going to react but getting her drunk sounds like a fun idea hehe
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Sophia: Yuk this shower hasn't been cleaned in ages..
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Sophia: Kinda scary being here all alone, getting Bates motel vibes..
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Sophia: Jezus my nipples are still hard and I'm wet.. I guess this day did take a toll on me. But this shower is too dirty to mastrubate in. I really need to get it out of my system before I'm giving Dylan the wrong ideas again.
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Sophia: Heh sounds like Dylan has returned
Sophia:"Dylan is that you honey?!"
Dylan: "Yeah yeah I'm back"
Sophia: Great when he goes to take a shower I'll have enough time to have a quicky with myself.. After a quick snack...
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Sophia:"Will you take a shower now honey?"
Dylan: "mmm mmm"
Sophia:"Dylan what are you..."
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Dylan:"Just don't think to much about it ok, just two adults getting relaxed after a long day"
Sophia: "yeah I guess... It's just."
Dylan: "No! Just let it go. Just relax and watch some porn. Everybody does it.."
Sophia: "ok.. I'll try.."
Dylan: "Yes that's the spirit"
Sophia: mmm, me pussy is al tinteling and I feel so relaxed, Dylan is right... Just some relaxation after a crazy day. Tomorrow everything will go back to normal..
Dylan: This is crazy, we're both naked and she is touching herself. Maybe she is willing to help me...
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Dylan:"Is your pussy nice and wet?"
Sophia: "Dylan please don't ask me such things you're making it weird.."
Dylan: "Why? Let the shame go and enjoy yourself.. Let's be open to each other"
Sophia: "yes.. yes my.. I really wet.."
Dylan: "Yeah my dick is really hard as well"
Sophia: "I noticed.. looks even bigger than this afernoon"
Dylan: "Go ahead!"
Sophia: "What? What do you mean"
Dylan: Come on, just need to push her a little bit more.
Dylan: "touch it!"
Sophia: This is so wrong.. He should help himself..
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Dylan:"Come on, I think I deserve some help after you've been using it as a meter haha"
Sophia: "If I do this..."
Dylan: "Come, please just help me out.."
Sophia: "I thought we we're going to watch the tv and help ourselves.."
Dylan: "I know I know but this is so much better.. And I promise what happens in this motel stays in this motel"
Sophia: "..."
Dylan: "And I'll let you know if I'm about to cum ok"
Sophia: "..."
Dylan: Yes yes oh please just do it
Sophia: What is wrong with me am I really going to jerk him off while im still playing with myself..
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Sophia: "Fine!"
Dylan: "Oh fuck yes"
Sophia: "Enjoy it in silence mister I don't want to hear you moaning while I'm touching myself that's just too weird.."
Dylan: "ahh ahh ok I'll try to stay silent."
Sophia: Holly cow his dick feels like it's made out of concrete.
Sophia: "..."
Dylan: ahhh yes this is heaven!!
Sophia: Stop staring at his dick Sophia, keep your eyes on the TV. Just imagine yourself jerking off the porn actor..
Dylan: "mmmm"
Sophia: "Silence Dylan.."
Dylan: "mmhaa fuck.. yes sorry. Just feels amazing.."
Sophia: "hah thanks I guess.. but stay silent please.."
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Dylan: I can't believe this is real.. I wonder if I can push her even further.. I need to take it slow. Nice and slow, maybe switch to a different porn channel to see her reaction on different genres..
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Unknown: Well well well look at this..
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what a nice surprise so for the weekend great jobDylan:"Just don't think to much about it ok, just two adults getting relaxed after a long day"
Sophia: "yeah I guess... It's just."
Dylan: "No! Just let it go. Just relax and watch some porn. Everybody does it.."
Sophia: "ok.. I'll try.."
Dylan: "Yes that's the spirit"
Sophia: mmm, me pussy is al tinteling and I feel so relaxed, Dylan is right... Just some relaxation after a crazy day. Tomorrow everything will go back to normal..
Dylan: This is crazy, we're both naked and she is touching herself. Maybe she is willing to help me...
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Dylan:"Is your pussy nice and wet?"
Sophia: "Dylan please don't ask me such things you're making it weird.."
Dylan: "Why? Let the shame go and enjoy yourself.. Let's be open to each other"
Sophia: "yes.. yes my.. I really wet.."
Dylan: "Yeah my dick is really hard as well"
Sophia: "I noticed.. looks even bigger than this afernoon"
Dylan: "Go ahead!"
Sophia: "What? What do you mean"
Dylan: Come on, just need to push her a little bit more.
Dylan: "touch it!"
Sophia: This is so wrong.. He should help himself..
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Dylan:"Come on, I think I deserve some help after you've been using it as a meter haha"
Sophia: "If I do this..."
Dylan: "Come, please just help me out.."
Sophia: "I thought we we're going to watch the tv and help ourselves.."
Dylan: "I know I know but this is so much better.. And I promise what happens in this motel stays in this motel"
Sophia: "..."
Dylan: "And I'll let you know if I'm about to cum ok"
Sophia: "..."
Dylan: Yes yes oh please just do it
Sophia: What is wrong with me am I really going to jerk him off while im still playing with myself..
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Sophia: "Fine!"
Dylan: "Oh fuck yes"
Sophia: "Enjoy it in silence mister I don't want to hear you moaning while I'm touching myself that's just too weird.."
Dylan: "ahh ahh ok I'll try to stay silent."
Sophia: Holly cow his dick feels like it's made out of concrete.
Sophia: "..."
Dylan: ahhh yes this is heaven!!
Sophia: Stop staring at his dick Sophia, keep your eyes on the TV. Just imagine yourself jerking off the porn actor..
Dylan: "mmmm"
Sophia: "Silence Dylan.."
Dylan: "mmhaa fuck.. yes sorry. Just feels amazing.."
Sophia: "hah thanks I guess.. but stay silent please.."
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Dylan: I can't believe this is real.. I wonder if I can push her even further.. I need to take it slow. Nice and slow, maybe switch to a different porn channel to see her reaction on different genres..
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Unknown: Well well well look at this..
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In my opinion, the idea is generally good and has the right to be implemented.Ok, I've tried something different...
There are two things to this idea...
First, I want to learn to work with Renpy by making a short fan novel about AWAM...
Second is that AWAM, as great as it is as a porn game, lacks one of my favorite "tropes", that of the old wretched guy corrupting and dominating the hot milf(blame the hentai "mistreated bride" hahaha).
So I thought, hey... why not make it myself? haha
What I wanted to ask here is , do you guys think this kind of story would be nice? or is it too far from the core of the game?
I've made two renders to present the idea, one is a possible poster for the main menu and the other would be a render on the kind of story I'm aiming for..
Here we go
Poster
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Render
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No GUI:
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What you guys think?? As always, I'm open to ideas and constructive criticisms
Thanks in advance!
It's an idea with massive potential & of great interest to many fans, I would think, altho' there's already a summer/winter thing going on in the game with the first side job. As you've asked for honest feedback, I'd say that the old man is far too ugly. He looks like the offspring of a human & a demon IMO. I know from personal experience that looks deteriorate with age, consequently I avoid mirrors as studiously as a vampire, but this bloke...!??! As he's named as Liam's Dad & Liam is a handsome man, I think he could stand some revision, unless Liam inherited all his good looks from his Mother's side!Ok, I've tried something different...
There are two things to this idea...
First, I want to learn to work with Renpy by making a short fan novel about AWAM...
Second is that AWAM, as great as it is as a porn game, lacks one of my favorite "tropes", that of the old wretched guy corrupting and dominating the hot milf(blame the hentai "mistreated bride" hahaha).
So I thought, hey... why not make it myself? haha
What I wanted to ask here is , do you guys think this kind of story would be nice? or is it too far from the core of the game?
I've made two renders to present the idea, one is a possible poster for the main menu and the other would be a render on the kind of story I'm aiming for..
Here we go
Poster
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Render
View attachment 1621954
No GUI:
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What you guys think?? As always, I'm open to ideas and constructive criticisms
Thanks in advance!
In my opinion, the idea is generally good and has the right to be implemented.
But looking at your renderings, I have one question, why does the old man have such dark skin?
Maybe I'm wrong, but I noticed that the more realistic the characters look, the more popular the artist's works are.
It's up to you to decide how the characters in your story should look, but my advice to you is to transform your father-in-law into a more realistic look and you can safely create your own fan art.
I wish you success!
It's an idea with massive potential & of great interest to many fans, I would think, altho' there's already a summer/winter thing going on in the game with the first side job. As you've asked for honest feedback, I'd say that the old man is far too ugly. He looks like the offspring of a human & a demon IMO. I know from personal experience that looks deteriorate with age, consequently I avoid mirrors as studiously as a vampire, but this bloke...!??! As he's named as Liam's Dad & Liam is a handsome man, I think he could stand some revision, unless Liam inherited all his good looks from his Mother's side!