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Kthulu_SFM

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ancienregimele said:
It's an idea with massive potential & of great interest to many fans, I would think, altho' there's already a summer/winter thing going on in the game with the first side job. As you've asked for honest feedback, I'd say that the old man is far too ugly. He looks like the offspring of a human & a demon IMO. I know from personal experience that looks deteriorate with age, consequently I avoid mirrors as studiously as a vampire, but this bloke...!??! As he's named as Liam's Dad & Liam is a handsome man, I think he could stand some revision, unless Liam inherited all his good looks from his Mother's side!
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:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:

Bane71 also said something on those lines haha


About the job, I thought about it too... but it lacks the Dom part... The old men are too "grandpa" for my sake haha


I'm glad I asked for opinions, you guys rock! :giggle:

Thank you!
 
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Bane71

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Kthulu_SFM said:
Hey! Thanks!

About the skin, it was the only character that I've found that has the "evil" look I'm looking for... Unfortunately, as you have observed, he is meant for a more fantastical approach like an evil mage or something. :ROFLMAO:

The old guys people usually put in their novels have the face a grandpa IMO haha

I think I can make him more "human", I will see about it!

Thank you for the advice and the word of encouragement! :love:
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From your answer, I understood that your character must be evil and have a somewhat scary expression on his face.
This is normal and logical in a creative sense!
Maybe you'll just find a way to make his skin lighter? I think that would be quite enough.
 
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I will experiment a little on him to see what I can achieve...


meanwhile, If you don't mind helping me a little bit more.. I've found a possible substitute... this guy:

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He has the look I'm looking for and it's also rather normal.. ;)

What you guys think? Bane71 and ancienregimele


sorry for bothering you with this, but second opinions are invaluable! :giggle:
thank you again!
 
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Kthulu_SFM said:
I will experiment a little on him to see what I can achieve...


meanwhile, If you don't mind helping me a little bit more.. I've found a possible substitute... this guy:

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He has the look I'm looking for and it's also rather normal.. ;)

What you guys think? Bane71 and ancienregimele


sorry for bothering you with this, but second opinions are invaluable! :giggle:
thank you again!
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I will say, a great choice!
 
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Night Hacker

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Kthulu_SFM said:
Ok, I've tried something different... :oops:

There are two things to this idea...

First, I want to learn to work with Renpy by making a short fan novel about AWAM...

Second is that AWAM, as great as it is as a porn game, lacks one of my favorite "tropes", that of the old wretched guy corrupting and dominating the hot milf(blame the hentai "mistreated bride" hahaha).

So I thought, hey... why not make it myself? haha :ROFLMAO:

What I wanted to ask here is , do you guys think this kind of story would be nice? or is it too far from the core of the game?

I've made two renders to present the idea, one is a possible poster for the main menu and the other would be a render on the kind of story I'm aiming for..

Here we go :eek:

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What you guys think?? As always, I'm open to ideas and constructive criticisms :giggle:

Thanks in advance! :D
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Sounds great, but that old guy in your render looks like a zombie. Hmmm... new game idea... the dead have risen and they're having sex with our wives! Anyhow... the old man after the MILF is a trope I don't mind at all, in fact, I experienced something similar several times in real life, the situation being the old guy had something she needed (money, drugs etc) but wanted something in return, so she gave it to him... on a regular basis, true story. Anyhow... try and make the old guy look a LITTLE better than the undead. LOL ;)

Edit: Something closer to this (a render I created a while back)... Bill and Wanda - Blowjob 1.png
 
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Night Hacker said:
Or a little more on topic... "Bill and Sophia" (who's Bill? Dunno... someone's father, LOL)... the character can be old and manipulative without being ugly... just change his eyebrows to look meaner. ;)
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In principle, I agree with you and I like your character more.
It would be great if it satisfied the artist's intention. In that case, could you give Kthulu_SFM a link to the assets of this character.
 
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Night Hacker said:
Or a little more on topic... "Bill and Sophia" (who's Bill? Dunno... someone's father, LOL)... the character can be old and manipulative without being ugly... just change his eyebrows to look meaner. ;)
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That's a hot render, if I ever saw one... :love: :devilish:


Thank you for the advice! :giggle:

The eyebrows are a really nice touch and idea, but I have a counter point to the argument on being ugly.

You see, in my mind, Sophia is to be subjugated by what is considered wretched and ugly. When I compare the skin details of the model in your render with the one I'm intending to use now, Jeb(the second one), it is clear Jeb is way more decrept. Let's say your Bill would be a healthy 60 year old, while what I need is a nearly dying 70 year old! I totally agree that I went waaay overboard on the ugliness with the first character, but I kinda really dig Jeb now... He fits :devilish:

I think it boils down to what I'm visualizing. I've said in my first post that I'm inspired by a hentai named Mistreated Bride. In it, the old man is really old! I recommend it if you like this kind of stuff btw... too bad the only worth episode is the first...

I'm really grateful by the advice you guys gave me! Please, if you have more, I'll be glad to hear :love:
 
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Kthulu_SFM said:
That's a hot render, if I ever saw one... :love: :devilish:


Thank you for the advice! :giggle:

The eyebrows are a really nice touch and idea, but I have a counter point to the argument on being ugly.

You see, in my mind, Sophia is to be subjugated by what is considered wretched and ugly. When I compare the skin details of the model in your render with the one I'm intending to use now, Jeb(the second one), it is clear Jeb is way more decrept. Let's say your Bill would be a healthy 60 year old, while what I need is a nearly dying 70 year old! I totally agree that I went waaay overboard on the ugliness with the first character, but I kinda really dig Jeb now... He fits :devilish:

I think it boils down to what I'm visualizing. I've said in my first post that I'm inspired by a hentai named Mistreated Bride. In it, the old man is really old! I recommend it if you like this kind of stuff btw... too bad the only worth episode is the first...

I'm really grateful by the advice you guys gave me! Please, if you have more, I'll be glad to hear :love:
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To each his own. Far be it from me to tell you what to create. I get what you're saying and I am sure it will be interesting in it's own way. Variety is the spice of life after all. I look forward to seeing what you come up with. :)
 
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ancienregimele

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Kthulu_SFM said:

Sooo I redid the last render after the awesome advice by Bane71 and ancienregimele

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I'm really happy with the result! I will continue working forward on this project :giggle:

I'm still open to suggestions, as always!

See ya! :cool:
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I see Jeb as a big improvement but would definitely let him have more hair & maybe a smaller nose? Age features & the feeling of being old are relative, as you see to me "really old" means someone in their 90s! There's also the issue of fitness because the character as can be seen, needs to be able to make love to a woman, which demands a certain energy & so he must not come into the "nearly dead" category, unless the effort is going to eventually kill him.....
 
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