VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

[farrah]

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Sophia finally meets Vicky's boyfriend DeShawn she's already told her about.

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Go away Vicky's boyfriend

 

[abram1]

True, the lesbian options are way better so far. The dev seems to put way more effort into them & they fit Sophia better. The scenes with Ellie, Patricia, alyssa, Julie are all great.

Absolutely, apart from that tiny "chicken fight" event on Day 17. Damn, what Dylan did to Amber, put a wide smile on my face. I'm on Lesbian/Filthy routes (GW bores me) and that was the first non-contact sex scene for either of the Parker siblings.
Alas, for this to happen we need to end Alyssa/Zach storyline.

 

[Lederzar]

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Sophia finally meets Vicky's boyfriend DeShawn she's already told her about.

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Well well apparently Sophia is going to have the possibility of having a strawberry and chocolate ice cream (this smells like a threesome to me) anyway I don't like DeShawn,shoo shoo go back to NYC

 

[Sexy_Divya]

It is tough being Mrs. Sophia Parker, every part of the day she meets someone new who will start trying to systematically seduce/blackmail/grope her. Bravo Mrs Parker, you should be an inspiration for all the hot ladies out there.

 

[farrah]

It is tough being Mrs. Sophia Parker, every part of the day she meets someone new who will start trying to systematically seduce/blackmail/grope her. Bravo Mrs Parker, you should be an inspiration for all the hot ladies out there.

Please, no more blackmail, there is already too much in game.

 

[Sexy_Divya]

Please, no more blackmail, there is already too much in game.

Couldn't agree more, no more characters or storylines should be added now. There is already too much going on!

 

[farrah]

Couldn't agree more, no more characters or storylines should be added now. There is already too much going on!

Agree about no more male characters.
I don't mind a few more nice girls. Besides we will soon meet Mrs. Myers' daughter.

 

[Farun2000]

Dude, are you serious? I mean... really serious?

First of all Vicky's face looks much more vivid than on the earlier renders! On the first one she doesn't even have skin reflections! So what the hell are you talking about? Plus it's an upscaled render and not real 1080p!


Secondly there are orange color bulbs near the wall:

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This is what gives the wall a little more orange touch! Plus a white wall has a great albedo which makes light reflection glow more on it then it would on a dark surface!


Thirdly this coffee shop has a glass roof! So sunlight comes in also from above!

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Is it comprehensible now? Is there more? Maybe the dispersion of the window of the car outside is physically wrong or maybe the density of air relative to the sunny time zone has to cause other light arrays in the room?

Do you guys really have nothing better to do then trying forcefully to find any bullshit to bitch about and put my work down? Since it's not the first time! But yeah, you're actually a "big fan" and you actually don't wanna criticize anything, right?

They only criticism I have for the game is nothing. I understand that you are having a hard time finding someone that will have the same passion for this game and for Sophia. I enjoy the updates and this last update was the best one yet. I loved the fun times that Sophia and Alyssa had with Antonio. I was hoping the yoga session was going to end up being a naked yoga session, but what you did worked out really good too. Can't wait to see how the shower in the morning goes. You could tell that Ellie was very jealous of what Julia was able to get away with.

 

[Sexy_Divya]

Agree about no more male characters.
I don't mind a few more nice girls. Besides we will soon meet Mrs. Myers' daughter.

Now who is Mrs Myers??

 

[PaxHadrian17]

Now who is Mrs Myers??

Mrs. Myers is the teacher who hires Sophia for her second side job. Sophia ends up teaching several subjects, including biology, to her three sons who have been Extremely sheltered by Mrs. Myers. Mrs. Myers' daughter is currently in Japan but, with the one week in time skip coming up, she may be able to join her three brothers in learning about biology from Sophia. I think that the hands on 'lab' work has a lot of promise...

 

[Alley_Cat]

Agree about no more male characters.
I don't mind a few more nice girls. Besides we will soon meet Mrs. Myers' daughter.

Now who is Mrs Myers??

Mrs Ava Myers is the mother from the 2nd side job, who is a professor of Western (Occidental) Philosophy and single mother of four. She has a daughter Leah, college age, who is studying linguistics, and as far as we know, is currently in Japan. Her other children are all underage sons, named after apostles, who know so little about sex, they ask Sophia to teach them sex education.

According to L&P, there will be event in the 2nd side job at some point that will be "freaking hot". Personally I'm hoping that Leah turns out to be a cunning linguist, otherwise hold no interest at all in the 2nd side job

EDIT:
Sexy_Divya, it is a requirement of the forum that all posts in languages other than English have an English translation. What was the conversation you were having with dr.akhibadge about? He doesn't seem to understand providing an English translation

 

[abram1]

Mrs. Myers is the teacher who hires Sophia for her second side job. Sophia ends up teaching several subjects, including biology, to her three sons who have been Extremely sheltered by Mrs. Myers. Mrs. Myers' daughter is currently in Japan but, with the one week in time skip coming up, she may be able to join her three brothers in learning about biology from Sophia. I think that the hands on 'lab' work has a lot of promise...

I might add that in order to meet her we need to refuse the job at the nursing house.

 

[abram1]

cunning linguist

Oh, naughty boy Isee what you did here.
Yet again, way too many branches in storyline hence more time for updating the game.

 

[PaxHadrian17]

I'm not bitching about anything, I think that my criticism was respectful and constructive. I don't know if you are in an stressful moment or what, but I never tried to put your work down, actually I praised some virtues of it. The fact that I consider myself a fan and I like your work it doesn't mean that I have to love all your renders. Why I express myself about this render? Because it seems to me too artificial (plastic) and I explained my reasons.

The matter with Vicky's face isn't about the lighting, it's about that her face looks with lack of volume and relief. Look this examples:

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In both cases I prefer the first photos, because the more photoshopped ones lose three-dimensionality, you can see it in the contourns of the nose, lips and eyes, therefore, they look unnatural. That's why I used the term plastic.

Today we see a lot of highly photoshopped images in magazines and internet, many people prefer those, that's why there are too many, it's a matter of taste. I like the more realistic ones, that's all.

Respecting to the orange light, it also looks artificial to me.

Actually, this statement gives me the reason. Why? Because the sunlight is more powerful than the bulb light, so the atmospher and colour of the light reflecting in the wall should be given by the sunlight (a cold or white one) and not by the bulb light (a warm or orange one). There's a technical term known as colour temperature: "The colour or warmth of light is ranked on a scale, The Kelvin scale, the warmer the colour the lower the colour temperature. Candles being around 2000 degrees Kelvin (k) while daylight typically 5500 – 6500k. The majority of LEDs are produced to be either 2700k, 2800k, 3000k, 4000k or 5000k." That means that the daylight has more colour temperature than the bulb lights, so that's what decide mostly what will be the colour in the wall.

I will give you some real examples:

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In other words, the higher amount of sunlight, the lesser amount of orange in the walls.

Could we get a place with the light divided as you have it? With orange and white light? Yes, but the sunlight should be very low, it should iluminate vaguely the walls and there should be a great amount of bulb light, not like you did it:

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You have said yourself that you pay many attention to the details, so I think that discussing this things isn't something bad or a way to attack you or your work. These topics can be interesting. I value your work and your effort, what I'm saying is that maybe sometimes you exceed the elements implemented, to my taste. Can you prefer a more artificial look to your game? Absolutely, it's your taste. That's all. When someone expresses that he has another aesthetic taste it doesn't mean that you are wrong or you need to change.

You've clearly spent a lot of time trying to make your points. If you are this meticulous in analyzing the work of some VN developers, are you developing your own VN? Following the threads and all the lighting comments makes me think that you are working towards something, not just pulling out an extremely granular comb to assess the work of others. I've seen people get paid to produce less detail in an assessment of digital content so - what's the end game?

 

[Sexy_Divya]

Mrs Ava Myers is the mother from the 2nd side job, who is a professor of Western (Occidental) Philosophy and single mother of four. She has a daughter Leah, college age, who is studying linguistics, and as far as we know, is currently in Japan. Her other children are all underage sons, named after apostles, who know so little about sex, they ask Sophia to teach them sex education.

According to L&P, there will be event in the 2nd side job at some point that will be "freaking hot". Personally I'm hoping that Leah turns out to be a cunning linguist, otherwise hold no interest at all in the 2nd side job

Now I get it, I personally didnt like the premise of the second side job, but I do hope that it turns out great.

EDIT:
Sexy_Divya, it is a requirement of the forum that all posts in languages other than English have an English translation. What was the conversation you were having with dr.akhibadge about? He doesn't seem to understand providing an English translation

That was a conversation in Hindi, a language spoken in India. It was a fun & harmless conversation, will use English translations next time.

 

[Sexy_Divya]

I might add that in order to meet her we need to refuse the job at the nursing house.

I do remember playing this scene but didnt enjoy it much really. But who knows what might be in store later. Maybe something interesting.

 

[Alley_Cat]

Now I get it, I personally didnt like the premise of the second side job, but I do hope that it turns out great.



That was a conversation in Hindi, a language spoken in India. It was a fun & harmless conversation, will use English translations next time.

Considering the premise of her main job just seems to be completing Aiden's tasks, even that one bores me.

That was Hindi? I understand smatterings, having Indian friends that speak it. I thought I could at least recognise some of it, but neither myself or Google Translate can recognise it as such. Last I heard from dr.akhibadge, it was some North Indian dialect. But yes, English translations, even if bad Google Translate ones, is required. Personally, as long as we get the gist, it's all good, but getting even that from dr.akhibadge is an uphill battle

 

[Sexy_Divya]

Considering the premise of her main job just seems to be completing Aiden's tasks, even that one bores me.

That was Hindi? I understand smatterings, having Indian friends that speak it. I thought I could at least recognise some of it, but neither myself or Google Translate can recognise it as such. Last I heard from dr.akhibadge, it was some North Indian dialect. But yes, English translations, even if bad Google Translate ones, is required. Personally, as long as we get the gist, it's all good, but getting even that from dr.akhibadge is an uphill battle

Honestly, there was no point translating our conversation. We used Hindi slangs which only Hindi speaking people would enjoy. Google translate would definitely fail at that.

 

[nexer]

Honestly, there was no point translating our conversation. We used Hindi slangs which only Hindi speaking people would enjoy. Google translate would definitely fail at that.

Compared to other languages, English is easier. We all, non-native speakers, are lucky with this.

 

[Alley_Cat]

Honestly, there was no point translating our conversation. We used Hindi slangs which only Hindi speaking people would enjoy. Google translate would definitely fail at that.

Google translate failing at translations is entirely why I'm curious and asking for translations now. From what I've picked up from my Indian friends, Indian mythology is full of stories of Kalima, Padima, Draupadi, Akka Magadevi etc, of women being all kick-arse and taking no prisoners. And considering I don't play the Aiden or Bennett route, that's exactly the kind of Sophia I like.