VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P2 v0.225 + P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

[nexer]

Not only that. Desire waxes or wanes over a lifetime. You can't know that when you get married at 19.
For Liam that may be enough, not for Sophia. Even after one fuck Sophia isn't completely satisfied and the comments came from her.
So it's a visible block and after the prison visit scene I don't think Liam would suffer much to see Sophia with another man.

 

[Old Dog]

Not only that. Desire waxes or wanes over a lifetime. You can't know that when you get married at 19.
For Liam that may be enough, not for Sophia. Even after one fuck Sophia isn't completely satisfied and the comments came from her.
So it's a visible block and after the prison visit scene I don't think Liam would suffer much to see Sophia with another man.

Liam would suffer to see Sophia with another man,even if he tried to deny it to himself.
Before the prison visit Liam wanted Sophia to dress in a way that made her sexy but also unavailable and for people to know that they can look but no touching is allowed.
Liam has also said that he is not the jealous type, well I think further down the line we will find out that he is.

 

[Qixoni]

THe game is beautiful, Sophia is stunning, but as times goes by the phantom of an Abandoned tag closes in every day, due to the huge delays in updates.

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

THe game is beautiful, Sophia is stunning, but as times goes by the phantom of an Abandoned tag closes in every day, due to the huge delays in updates.

We're nowhere close to Abandoned yet, he's still within his very slow development period.

 

[Lust&Pateron]

THe game is beautiful, Sophia is stunning, but as times goes by the phantom of an Abandoned tag closes in every day, due to the huge delays in updates.

It's not abandoned if content is being made. But, the release duration is a joke.

 

[Qixoni]

It's not abandoned if content is being made. But, the release duration is a joke.

I know it´s not abandoned, what i´m saying is that i´m frightened such a thing happens

 

[Deleted member 2914737]

Just for information, so that you can better understand me, I only play two computer games WOT and AWAM. And of course, I do this in order to distract myself from reality. WOT likes the fact that it is an online gam.

AWAM, this is of course a completely different emotion. Depending on the mood, plot and other factors, all the story lines in this game are interesting, but more interesting is Sofia's relationship with teenage boys, this is in the first place. I remember myself as a young man, my fantasies and desires, and to some extent I experience these emotions again.

If it was up to me who Sophia would have sex with in the game, I'd rule out Mr. Bennet, Carl, Deshawn.

Girls and ladies are all interesting except for Emma.

In descending order, Sofia's sex with Sam, Zach, Dylan. Some erotic adventures of Sofia with a group of boys from her son's football team. Group, with Aiden's friends. Aiden is the latest!

This is just a game and I want something far from what you encounter every day in real life.

For example, so that Sophia pampered Mr. Murray, fucked him, and Dylan had the opportunity to watch how this would happen.

Liam is generally not a bad guy, and I would prefer that Sofia not have sex with men who are rivals to Liam. I'm more interested in the swing theme, Liam, Sofia and the newlyweds. Another interesting threesome, Liam, Sofia.and Liam's boss.

I will single out Patricia, a very interesting character. I would be happy to see a trio of Patricia, Sofia and Dylan. I would also like to see the pranks of Patricia and Sofia in different circumstances, both with girls and with museum boys, where there is no sex, but a lot of eroticism and excitement.

Lol,umm yeah Im pretty sure I want Dylan and Sofia anal sex

 

[L&P's Father-in-Law]

This especially, plus the inefficient dialogue are the biggest problems with the development time.

L&P could benefit greatly by hiring a script doctor to edit down the dialogue and internal monologue in each scene before developing the storyboards and setting up his scenes in DAZ.

I'd give it a try for free but I don't know German so I wouldn't be able to do anything until after translation, which is too late according to his workflow.

Yeah the internal monologue kinda irks me a bit. Dev should trim it .

 

[L&P's Father-in-Law]

Looking at the game from the beggining without CTRL'ing its quite visible that there are a lot of renders and dialogue that could be trimed to make space for other actions and events.

However I think the bottleneck for L&P is in environment creation stage. The amount of new and rich environments is welcomed but not if the dev needs to make new environments in every version.
If he had someone to create environments for him, he could just tweak them in the end and then pose pose pose. Would probably trim down his development time to 2/3's of the current dev time.

I dont know how I can look at this development process and see several bottlenecks that are solvable with "minimum" effort + perks that would make this VN a game at the level of the top 5 games on this website and he just can't see that after 3 years of slowly developing this VN.

 

[Why are you gae?]

Looking at the game from the beggining without CTRL'ing its quite visible that there are a lot of renders and dialogue that could be trimed to make space for other actions and events.

However I think the bottleneck for L&P is in environment creation stage. The amount of new and rich environments is welcomed but not if the dev needs to make new environments in every version.
If he had someone to create environments for him, he could just tweak them in the end and then pose pose pose. Would probably trim down his development time to 2/3's of the current dev time.

I dont know how I can look at this development process and see several bottlenecks that are solvable with "minimum" effort + perks that would make this VN a game at the level of the top 5 games on this website and he just can't see that after 3 years of slowly developing this VN.

I think there is more to AWAM than we all think. It takes time because his work means quality. And quality wants money. Lots of money. In order to improve the quality of this VN, more money is needed. I take it as a hint, the slow update cycles, to throw more money at him. Thus, I spend more money now. Each new month I will donate more money. I am sure blue balls aren't worth that but I also like the tags "male domination" and "humiliation" so maybe I am just in a very toxic relationship with this game.

 

[armion82]

I think there is more to AWAM than we all think. It takes time because his work means quality. And quality wants money. Lots of money. In order to improve the quality of this VN, more money is needed. I take it as a hint, the slow update cycles, to throw more money at him. Thus, I spend more money now. Each new month I will donate more money. I am sure blue balls aren't worth that but I also like the tags "male domination" and "humiliation" so maybe I am just in a very toxic relationship with this game.

Money won't help much.Actually more money usually means the updates will need much more time.
It is simple-when you have more money you have an access to much more and better programs and computers.
And you want to make better looking game and you are constantly adding more and more renders to one scene and suddenly instead of 100 renders and 1000 words you end with 500 renders and 10 000 words.

 

[Why are you gae?]

Money won't help much.Actually more money usually means the updates will need much more time.
It is simple-when you have more money you have an access to much more and better programs and computers.
And you want to make better looking game and you are constantly adding more and more renders to one scene and suddenly instead of 100 renders and 1000 words you end with 500 renders and 10 000 words.

Imagine a scene where she is teaching the class. A full six hours just witnessing her teach quantum physics. I'd love that!

 

[L&P's Father-in-Law]

I think there is more to AWAM than we all think. It takes time because his work means quality. And quality wants money. Lots of money. In order to improve the quality of this VN, more money is needed. I take it as a hint, the slow update cycles, to throw more money at him. Thus, I spend more money now. Each new month I will donate more money. I am sure blue balls aren't worth that but I also like the tags "male domination" and "humiliation" so maybe I am just in a very toxic relationship with this game.

More money is encouraging the way he's developing which is absolutely subpar so it's an absolute NOPE for me. Once I agree with the development cycle I'll go back as a patron. The only way I would help this development financially would be directly financing a dev to show his stubborn ass that the more qualified help he gets the more money he is going to make and the faster he's going to develop.

If his renders weren't good and/or mc didnt look good this game would have like 10 patreons.

 

[Why are you gae?]

More money is encouraging the way he's developing which is absolutely subpar.

If his renders weren't good and/or mc didnt look good this game would have like 10 patreons.

The story of this game is on the same level of "Inception" or "Shutter Island". It's awesome, truly a god given right to witness this blueballing masterpiece.

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

Liam only cares about himsef! And what do you think Sophia is doing right now?Exactly the same thing.
Sophia can have an orgasm when Liam gives her oral but she is always way too impatient telling Liam to fuck her without giving him any(or very little) foreplay.

Well you could argue that if Sophia gave Liam any foreplay, he would get all excited and finish EVEN quicker!
He could be the two minute Liam rather than four minute Liam!!

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Even though I’m not a fan of Dylan, I don’t want him to get NTR with Sophia. In fact I think Dylan & Sam should be out there just trying to get laid by anyone, just so they can lose their Vcard. Sex scenes need to happen in this game even if there not with Sophia yet. He could easily show a few renders of Dylan with a prostitue or him fantasizing about one of his classmates, same goes for Elle too, there sex scenes or fantasy scenes should be happening now.

 

[Deleted member 2914737]

Even though I’m not a fan of Dylan, I don’t want him to get NTR with Sophia. In fact I think Dylan & Sam should be out there just trying to get laid by anyone, just so they can lose their Vcard. Sex scenes need to happen in this game even if there not with Sophia yet. He could easily show a few renders of Dylan with a prostitue or him fantasizing about one of his classmates, same goes for Elle too, there sex scenes or fantasy scenes should be happening now.

Yeah.Where are the renders dev.Yeah, facts!!

 

[Bane71]

Completely agree with you. This especially more irritating because there are developers who have a fixed schedule for updates, be it monthly or quarterly and they literally apologize if there is even a single day's delay. That sense of professionalism what needs to be brought into this game

The time it takes for the update is important. But for me personally, the result is more important, what exactly we get and while L&P is at its best in this parameter.

But as soon as the updates begin to come out within 2.5 - 3 months, I will start supporting him financially. So yes, time is important and I think that if he speeds up, he will start swimming in money.

 

[Френсис]

Even though I’m not a fan of Dylan, I don’t want him to get NTR with Sophia. In fact I think Dylan & Sam should be out there just trying to get laid by anyone, just so they can lose their Vcard. Sex scenes need to happen in this game even if there not with Sophia yet. He could easily show a few renders of Dylan with a prostitue or him fantasizing about one of his classmates, same goes for Elle too, there sex scenes or fantasy scenes should be happening now.

you are right there dalzhny hut would be a life of some kind of sex, otherwise it’s already becoming a little boring .. and I hope that Dylan wakes up fantasizing about Sophia than about others and he wakes up the first who fucks her than this after her husband .. but what does NTR mean ??

 

[Bane71]

Looking at the game from the beggining without CTRL'ing its quite visible that there are a lot of renders and dialogue that could be trimed to make space for other actions and events.

When I read such statements, I feel sad.

The fact is that I also have similar feelings. But I understand that out of a huge number of users, there will be those for whom this content does not seem superfluous and not interesting.