VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P2 v0.225 + P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

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This update would be better if the slumber party was hosted by Ellie. Dylan could go to the basketball game with Liam, the girls would have the run of the house under the watchful, and lustful eye of Sophia. As much as I hate to say it there could be another pool scene. A party at the Parkers would advance the main narrative, do away with rendering the prerequisite "getting some booze" mission and the new location. Or Dylan could stay and do what he does best, perv on his sister and mother discreetly and the rest of the party. Maybe learn a little something about Sophia and Ellie's changing relationship and their lesbian tendencies.

I would like to think that there is going to be some 'action' in this chapter but my instincts and prior experience with this game lead me to believe that there will be some teasing and an untimely interruption. The story will then shift with the next update and this one won't even be referenced for at least a year. No one will be happier if I am proven wrong.
 
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Abserd Spud said:
This update would be better if the slumber party was hosted by Ellie. Dylan could go to the basketball game with Liam, the girls would have the run of the house under the watchful, and lustful eye of Sophia. As much as I hate to say it there could be another pool scene. A party at the Parkers would advance the main narrative, do away with rendering the prerequisite "getting some booze" mission and the new location. Or Dylan could stay and do what he does best, perv on his sister and mother discreetly and the rest of the party. Maybe learn a little something about Sophia and Ellie's changing relationship and their lesbian tendencies.

I would like to think that there is going to be some 'action' in this chapter but my instincts and prior experience with this game lead me to believe that there will be some teasing and an untimely interruption. The story will then shift with the next update and this one won't even be referenced for at least a year. No one will be happier if I am proven wrong.
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Yeah that would of been a great mix
 
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Abserd Spud said:
This update would be better if the slumber party was hosted by Ellie. Dylan could go to the basketball game with Liam, the girls would have the run of the house under the watchful, and lustful eye of Sophia. As much as I hate to say it there could be another pool scene. A party at the Parkers would advance the main narrative, do away with rendering the prerequisite "getting some booze" mission and the new location. Or Dylan could stay and do what he does best, perv on his sister and mother discreetly and the rest of the party. Maybe learn a little something about Sophia and Ellie's changing relationship and their lesbian tendencies.

I would like to think that there is going to be some 'action' in this chapter but my instincts and prior experience with this game lead me to believe that there will be some teasing and an untimely interruption. The story will then shift with the next update and this one won't even be referenced for at least a year. No one will be happier if I am proven wrong.
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By "main storyline", do you mean one of the main routes with Sophia?
 
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Abserd Spud said:
As interesting as an Ellie slumber story might be I don't see what it has to do with "a wife and a mother" or "how far will she go".
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I'm just wondering what you mean when you say that a party at the Parkers would advance the main narrative.
 
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It's a Wife and a Mother.
(In my opinion) Sophia and how far will she go is the main narrative. I don't see how this update date advances that story.

Having said that I hope it's enjoyable. My post was supposed to be helpful (albeit unsolicited) advice/opinion.
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I think you'll find it's just "A Wife and Mother". But I agree, this update doesn't advance Sophia's story in the slightest. It was even promoted as a bonus without Sophia.

Which is pretty stupid considering how long updates are taking. The 20th will mark two entire years since v.150 was released. So a fortnight from now will be approximately when L&P started working on PD13. And this PD has three events just for the bonus storyline alone (Ellie discovering Logan is cheating on her, the diner scene, and now this slumber party).

And yeah, Ellie hosting the slumber party would have been great, particularly on her route when she knows that Sophia is spying on her, like we find out during the Ellie/Julia event. And we find out that Ellie made head cheerleader. The only problem is that on the Ellie route, she's made every effort to make sure that Dylan isn't around - for example, she specifically asks Sophia if he'll be at home before inviting Jules and Elena over on PD8. And she does it when Dylan is at his football match.

So Ellie hosting the slumber party would only happen if she could guarantee that Dylan wasn't going to be there.
 
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I think you'll find it's just "A Wife and Mother". But I agree, this update doesn't advance Sophia's story in the slightest. It was even promoted as a bonus without Sophia.

Which is pretty stupid considering how long updates are taking. The 20th will mark two entire years since v.150 was released. So a fortnight from now will be approximately when L&P started working on PD13. And this PD has three events just for the bonus storyline alone (Ellie discovering Logan is cheating on her, the diner scene, and now this slumber party).

And yeah, Ellie hosting the slumber party would have been great, particularly on her route when she knows that Sophia is spying on her, like we find out during the Ellie/Julia event. And we find out that Ellie made head cheerleader. The only problem is that on the Ellie route, she's made every effort to make sure that Dylan isn't around - for example, she specifically asks Sophia if he'll be at home before inviting Jules and Elena over on PD8. And she does it when Dylan is at his football match.

So Ellie hosting the slumber party would only happen if she could guarantee that Dylan wasn't going to be there.
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Also 20-th November will mark 1 year since Sophia/Sam update.
The worst year if we count the number of renders-a little more than 1100.
Beyond 1100 renders only because he have to finish Sophia/Sam scene
 
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Doesn't strike me as a typical response to liking seeing someone naked. Which is exactly how Ellie responds to seeing Dylan's little friend.
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it's possible Ellie does like it but says she doesn't, as Dylan is her brother. would be natural for both Sophia and Ellie to say they didn't like it when they did.
 
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