Not really surprised, more disappointed. I predicted this update was just going to be a hand job one in the off topic thread._________________________________________+++++++++++++____________________________________________
yourmomma, good review... and spares me the bother of doing the download
But in some ways, you sound surprised as to the outcome. I said in an earlier post that there wasn't really going to be anything with this release-- that no way some 3 little snots were going to nail Sophia considering the rest of the things she has already been through.
And your 100% spot on:
"L&P style has become so sophomoric, throw in unnecessary dialogue and predictable it steals away from his erotic writing.
If he got rid of the unnecessary dialogue and was a bit more realistic with the sexual tension he could do two scenes per update and get the story moving along at a normal pace." Oh, there is a detectible plan L&P is working on... a plan and rather stupid at that. L&P is building for a grand climatic series of endings. In theory, this time, next year, maybe the boys get to rail Sophia... and I only say that because just ahead of that event, everyone ELSE has had themself some Sophia and she ought to be absolutely corrupted and "filthy."
"This game is basically becoming one to watch to see if L&P finally gets it, and learns how to move a story along or continues fumbling along like a virgin scared to pull the trigger." Actually, for many of us it's like waiting around for a predictable train wreck and standing there with our lawn chairs and popcorn. However, just to follow up on your critique with regards to the story plot. The last "tutor" scene was a complete dud because L&P missed the opportunity to set up this latest "tutoring" update. If you recall toward the end of that scene Sophia had to take a phone call and the boys got handsy with her. Yes Anna in part acted like what a "normal" person would have (sort of) and didn't get really aroused by it. For the sake of the story, Sophia should have become more aroused to set up THIS UPDATE. As it is two huge plot holes exist. The first how is lingerie a topic for sex ed. L&P's reasonings for the lingerie plot are worse than the plot hole it created. And second it sounds like Sophia was 'planning' a naughty adventure rather that she falling into it as is the case in most of her adventures. If L&P is finally moving the needle to where Sophia is actually encouraging naughty time and planning for it. at least that is some progress. Guess we'll all know in about 7-8 months when there are more Dylan events if that is the case.
You bring up some good points. Expanding on your observations about the lingerie, any woman that brings lingerie to a private event knows exactly what she's doing. This is what frustrates me about L&P's writing. It's obvious to me it lacks real world experience and pools from erotic fiction.
I mean L&P even hints to it himself. Sofia constantly has slutty thoughts and fantasies. Constantly puts herself in situations to act on these slutty thoughts, but never does.
So okay in reality if Sofia got that aroused during that entire shota threesome hand job, she'd eventually go home and at least masturbate or jump on Leam. But she doesn't do any of that. If she doesn't end up unleashing in game days worth of pent up sexual frustration sometime, I'm going to simply treat this game like an unintentional comedy of predictability.
On the other hand I almost do feel sorry for L&P, because people keeping track of all of his hints for the game has really backed him into a corner and now if he deviates away from that he runs the risk of upsetting supporters.