VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P2 v0.225 + P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

[steelsmiter]

OK I really have to say that this is one of the worst written stories/games I have seen in a long while. At the beginning it had potential and I really love the renders but the lazy-ass writing on the blackmail path really ruins the experience. I don't mind a good blackmail path as it can move the story in good ways but the writing for it here is just horrid. Seriously the police just turn a blind eye to assault, gang-related activity and blackmail? Because the kid's uncle is some sort of super lawyer??? And what is all this crap about the school and lawsuits? I'd love to see a lawyer sue a school because their kid got a failing grad, sure that's going to work in what world are these devs living??? Seriously WTF. That whole arc is stupidly written, unrealistic and totally ruins what should be a fun game.
Really disappointed that they don't seem to understand basic story writing. Given the stupidly slow burn and the trainwreck of a narrative, I'd recommend we just rip the CG and enjoy the renders.

Wait?! What's this about a blackmail path? what I got was some footnotes? Did I make the wrong choice for a fully involved blackmail path?

 

[dbp5ca]

That's my concern too, what if not getting along with Aiden means Alyssa to not hangout with MC.

I was really hoping for something between Alyssa and the MC at some point. Hope the stupid-ass blackmail plot doesn't mess with that.

 

[satoshi36]

I was really hoping for something between Alyssa and the MC at some point. Hope the stupid-ass blackmail plot doesn't mess with that.

To me it looks like it will if not going with the blackmail route...

 

[Kamera.69]

Let's face it: There's nothing in this game moving. He is just winning the time by repeating his promises every update. Nothing's moving in here.

 

[Silver]

I was really hoping for something between Alyssa and the MC at some point. Hope the stupid-ass blackmail plot doesn't mess with that.

I think going on the blackmail route is best, it gives MC some time to plot against him, it doesn't send the two boys away, and therefore Alyssa can interact with MC again too. according to walkthrough if you refused to cooperate,

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[nexer]

A woman, mother of two, 32-35 years old, waiting weeks for one more night of fun with her husband, discovers her lesbian side. but first, hypnotized by her son's dick, Janitor's beast and three more in hotel's sauna. Speaking about realistic.

 

[Johnysilver771]

Guys advice me similar games like this .

 

[Angmir]

Guys advice me similar games like this .

This one is practicaly unique one.

90% games out there girls just jump on the first dick they see becouse they are enchanted by "how big that dick is".

There are some decent games there as well - but none structured in that way.

 

[armion82]

This one is practicaly unique one.

90% games out there girls just jump on the first dick they see becouse they are enchanted by "how big that dick is".

There are some decent games there as well - but none structured in that way.

Might give me those games?
I can't recall any of the good female MC corruption games that we get sex realy early.
The exception is JOHN but Conner is her boyfriend.
I know mind blowing-game in which MC is fucking her boyfriend

 

[Angmir]

Might give me those games?
I can't recall any of the good female MC corruption games that we get sex realy early.
The exception is JOHN but Conner is her boyfriend.
I know mind blowing-game in which MC is fucking her boyfriend

You want names of the shitty corruption games ?

As most of the decent games are compleatly diffrent from AWAM.

A good female corruption game is Fleeting Iris for an example - but it is not 3d model renpy game but drawn CG artwork game.
It has a tons of sex multiple route etc. And corruption of innocent female.
But it is vastly diffrent after all.

If you want 3d game with sub-par storytelling but with lots of sex and corruption of fem protag - I guess I can "recomend" Elena's Life I guess.

But there are no games with great storytelling and atencion to details like this one at all.

"Hight Life" was prommising Demo - but half a year later there isnt even single update done yet.

And another story heavy "artistic" game "Dual Family" has become a compleate meme at this point, and a legendary moneygrab. (Breeding Season style)

I hope that helps.

 

[lockerxx]

good girl gone bad is great too.

 

[Arzies]

A woman, mother of two, 32-35 years old, waiting weeks for one more night of fun with her husband, discovers her lesbian side. but first, hypnotized by her son's dick, Janitor's beast and three more in hotel's sauna. Speaking about realistic.

She is forty something years old, not 32-35.

 

[fakerdude]

She is forty something years old, not 32-35.

You definitely got him there. 5 more years make all the difference in the world.

 

[Gabriel Lima]

I think this game is pretty cool at first, but it has been promising a lot and delivering so little. It's as like you wanted to have sex with your best friend but she bamboozled you so much, leaving you with a little hope that you finally smash, so that in the end you realize that she's a guy. Just sad.

 

[tigers]

I think the blackmail storyline has potential if L&P plays his cards right. Maybe after assignment 4 or 5 , Sophia gets enough corrupted that when she gets the chance to end it maybe by some help from Patricia or even the janitor who is a thug, she decides against it and continues playing with Aiden.
In this way she becomes the dominating party, not aiden since she had the chance to call it off yet she did not because she secretly started enjoying it. But Aiden doesnt know that and thinks he's still in control.
In this way she might even discover her masochistic side leading to possible bdsm scenes
This way has some serious potential i believe.

 

[tigers]

new update from patreon pls?

 

[steelsmiter]

I think this game is pretty cool at first, but it has been promising a lot and delivering so little. It's as like you wanted to have sex with your best friend but she bamboozled you so much, leaving you with a little hope that you finally smash, so that in the end you realize that she's a guy. Just sad.

Not even a guy. She's a boy.

 

[dbp5ca]

I think the blackmail storyline has potential if L&P plays his cards right. Maybe after assignment 4 or 5 , Sophia gets enough corrupted that when she gets the chance to end it maybe by some help from Patricia or even the janitor who is a thug, she decides against it and continues playing with Aiden.
In this way she becomes the dominating party, not aiden since she had the chance to call it off yet she did not because she secretly started enjoying it. But Aiden doesnt know that and thinks he's still in control.
In this way she might even discover her masochistic side leading to possible bdsm scenes
This way has some serious potential i believe.

I like this suggestion. It makes sense at least and plays into some aspects of the story that were evident earlier, primarily Patricia as a slightly unhinged firecracker with an itchy trigger finger . It might also bring the MC and Patricia closer which is a good thing. I hope this will also bring the MC and Alissa closer as well since she's one of the best looking characters in this game.

 

[Creeping Death]

There should be some new tags for threads. AN (=annoying) and TX (=toxic). The same shit is discussed after every update and between every update and before every update. The same shit over and over and over again. I am out of this, again, sadly. Have fun!

 

[Lerox]

A woman, mother of two, 32-35 years old, waiting weeks for one more night of fun with her husband, discovers her lesbian side. but first, hypnotized by her son's dick, Janitor's beast and three more in hotel's sauna. Speaking about realistic.

32-35 years old ar maybe better said 38-40 years old. It doesn't matter so much, but I think she is a bit older then 32, infering from her children age.