Finally played the update. Well last two updates. It was good but this dev needs a fucking editor. You cant take it that far and then have it just end there. That is a culmination event where Sophia would give in as she gets aroused. Stopping there makes no sense. You build to those things. It doesnt happen in a day. There is a certain progression that would make sense and this is not that.
This is where the playable days and cohesiveness of the story are ruined. The pacing is also way off, and it is annoying that there are so many split paths. If i want to make her into a whore let me. Like the musuem event that was introduced way in the beginning is somehow a path choice which frankly is stupid. I either do that event or the Dylan event. So is the cuck path for Dylan. Its annoying because this is a female prog game, so the choices should hers not Dylans.
The path splits should also be rare. Only if there is a major deviation in content should a path split exist. Its irritating for everyone including the dev since its so much work to account for.
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I been saying the develop needed editing help or a professional writer reviewing each scene before it goes into production for the last 2 years.
Look... the whole story reads as if a caffeinated squirrel wrote it
And it's just not scene ending nonsense, it's the logic behind it. I keep bring it up, but the end of the slumber party Ellie sees Dylan getting a BJ and wonders to herself what it would be like to give a BJ to Dylan... follow the logic for a moment:
*Is it more logical a virgin would rather wonder what it would be like to have a cock inside her
*Does make sense a girl with limited experience be interested in giving BJ
*In what world is it save, a PORN world, every female gets off on giving BJ
That is one case of WTH moments about the stories, plots, and paths