- Mar 28, 2023
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The Developer who cried wolf....
see... that's the problem. No matter how well the scene is developed, the passion buildup, the plausibility, the render quality, the scene will end stupidly. So, any buildup of suspense or passion along with plausibility goes right out the window. Can anyone really think otherwise?
Take three big moments in AWAM.
Sam/Sophia bedroom scene, we all have seen and played it. First there is the main interaction of Sam and Sophia getting it on then a long-drawn-out exchange of romantic notions. More like putting the apple cart before the horse. I would have worked better if half the romantic notions exchanged were simplified to help build the sexual tension, then go to the make out scene. Even if the developer didn't want Sam to penetrate Sophia, the developer could have had Sam dry hump Sophia rather than her bringing herself off.
Dylan/Sophia date night was good up until the end. Realistically, heavy petting isn't so tame. Sophia getting so worked up but having enough control to keep Dylan from fingering her flies in the face of logic. Good sex is a mixture of giving and GETTING. The developer could still have maintained his slow burn theme going without crossing the Rubicon.
Second meeting of Tyler... oh god a total disaster. Tyler at the dance club already got to finger Sophia... and that is all that happened? Part two of Ellie/Sophia was again just giving and no getting... another plausibility fail.
Then the 800-pound gorilla doesn't just sit in the room but comes crashing through the ceiling. First all these long-ish wait times between updates with just "stuff" content just crushes the whole established story arches. And now I here AWAM has run afoul of Patron
