Soccer Coach event:
As mentioned here, writing a story is not a linear process. You have an idea and start developing different paths
and events around the idea. At some point the more or less complete framework of the entire plot is in place.
There are paths / events with a note "definitely", some with "no" and some with "maybe". We have the privilege or
the bad luck to watch a story develop. Anyone expecting a monolithic block has to come back in 10 years.
Then there are the editors who accompany the writing process. That is essentially his fanbase. The payer and the
non-payer. No matter what we believe, L&P feels the pressure that is being built up. So if we say he's getting
bogged down and moving too slowly, sooner or later it will have an impact. And, at least for me, does not lead to
the statement that he does not work in an organized manner.
And as a last point: What would we have to expect from a side path / event at this point in time with the current
level of corruption? L&P cannot take giant strides because the event has to fit into the main story. So at best we
can expect a naked Sophia in the shower cubicle (we already had in the gym) and then a Sophia in the shower cubicle
behind a curtain while the footballer boys fantasize about their bodies. And a pissed off Dylan who wants / has to
defend his mother against verbal attacks from the others.
This is nothing that cannot be told with the person and locations already introduced on the main strand.
You don't need the side event for this. Wasted development time. You see the irony in this arguments !!!
If, on the other hand, the Soccer Coach event is told at a later point in the story, it can become a real sporting
challenge for Sophia.
As mentioned here, writing a story is not a linear process. You have an idea and start developing different paths
and events around the idea. At some point the more or less complete framework of the entire plot is in place.
There are paths / events with a note "definitely", some with "no" and some with "maybe". We have the privilege or
the bad luck to watch a story develop. Anyone expecting a monolithic block has to come back in 10 years.
Then there are the editors who accompany the writing process. That is essentially his fanbase. The payer and the
non-payer. No matter what we believe, L&P feels the pressure that is being built up. So if we say he's getting
bogged down and moving too slowly, sooner or later it will have an impact. And, at least for me, does not lead to
the statement that he does not work in an organized manner.
And as a last point: What would we have to expect from a side path / event at this point in time with the current
level of corruption? L&P cannot take giant strides because the event has to fit into the main story. So at best we
can expect a naked Sophia in the shower cubicle (we already had in the gym) and then a Sophia in the shower cubicle
behind a curtain while the footballer boys fantasize about their bodies. And a pissed off Dylan who wants / has to
defend his mother against verbal attacks from the others.
This is nothing that cannot be told with the person and locations already introduced on the main strand.
You don't need the side event for this. Wasted development time. You see the irony in this arguments !!!
If, on the other hand, the Soccer Coach event is told at a later point in the story, it can become a real sporting
challenge for Sophia.
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