- Feb 14, 2018
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As been said already, you're expectations are perhaps a bit too high for the genre. Additionally, the author of this particular VN is way too ambitious with the scope of his story. As a solo developer he's got way too many moving pieces and way too many branching paths to give proper attention and development to characters and character arcs. It's inevitable that there will be plot holes, lapses in character consistency, and missed opportunities to provide essential details.Nice art style but personally I do find the story to be shallow.
Very hot female teacher in a new city with extra slutty sister and her extra rich husband starts teaching part time in a new school and is bound to get in trouble with a gang, a world class lawyer and the mafia roughly around the same time.
... Yeah ...
Plus there is only one person being at fault for the massive debts of liam and that person goes by the name of sophia.
She made several really big mistakes on that matter alone. Starting by allowing a known gambling addict the casino visit to begin with, continuing with telling an addict basically to stop being addicted and ending by leaving said addict at a place where he can go about his addiction without supervision ...
What exactly did she think would happen?
That and ignoring the very obvious telltale signs of adultery by her husband (hot female coworkers, working late every day, no sexual action at home - not even interested, ...)
Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the game. Somewhat.
But for an allegedly very intelligent woman in her late 30's she comes off as being dumb as a board and naive to boot.