VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.205] [Lust & Passion]

[sergey matveev]

Good afternoon. I went through version 0.150 and again made sure that the quality of the script and dialogues constantly decreases as the speed of Sophia's corruption increases. Imbalance between the highest quality renders, stretched "empty" dialogues and described situations. A large number of "garbage" renders, in which the position of bodies, heads, etc. has slightly changed.
And again, the usual cliches of a porn game are in use.
1. I have not had sex for so long, so I feel constant arousal (She probably has "uterine rabies"). Scene with Natalie.
2. When I am drunk (and she gets drunk from the first glass) I cannot control myself. The scene with Sam included both the first stamp and the second.
At the same time, it seems to me that the plot will develop in the direction when the cunning Sam will fuck both mom and daughter.
Also interesting is the author's transition from a porn story to a porn fantasy. I was moved by the scene when Sam dives into the jacuzzi and snuggles against Sofia's crotch, actively mastering it, and Liam, who approached, talks to his wife and does not notice a foreign body in the clear water against the background of the white paint of the jacuzzi. Cute and unexpected ...
And of course, a lot of questions are caused by the rapid transformation of the Puritan housewife into a corrupted bitch.
If the author in the game provided for some, albeit small, prehistory explaining the rapid degradation of Sophia, it would be in the logic of the narrative, and so the only excuse for her contradictory behavior and other logical inconsistencies is only that this is a porn game in which everything Maybe. Alas, a good script gives more than half the quality of the game, but here he reduces it by half.

 

[nexer]

I'm absolutely sure it won't be something like

It won't show where the stockings "end".
In this case I think Aiden will want to "check" if Sophia is wearing stockings and
First part wil be:
1. ask her to lift up her skirt
2. He lifts her skirt himself.
3. he'll put his hand between her thighs to check.

 

[chaoaople]

why this picture??

 

[Mikecoxlong17739]

Can someone hook me up with Noemi's Toscana rebirth hot scenes?

 

[AceMan07]

Seriously?

 

[immax8817]

sorry if this has already been discussed, can someone tell me how to get to the sams concert scene

 

[keefer43]

I think these informational posts from L&P are exactly what is needed to pacify the torch-carrying villagers and to give the monster some room to breathe.

Carefully measured - no doubt in my mind.

 

[Deleted member 40068]

I wish the kissing scene with Sam occurred in his car...that would have been way hotter

 

[AchedCroissant]

Seriously?

He has Napoleon complex

 

[nexer]

Wow, that was fast. Faster than Liam . I read last message and

 

[nexer]

He has Napoleon complex

Before Waterloo is OK

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Damn these Mods are fast today

 

[D2taA]

Why are

I'm absolutely sure it won't be something like

It won't show where the stockings "end".
In this case I think Aiden will want to "check" if Sophia is wearing stockings and
First part wil be:
1. ask her to lift up her skirt
2. He lifts her skirt himself.
3. he'll put his hand between her thighs to check.

Why are y'all so hung up on this out fit, does it really matter. She's got on a short ass mini skirt in high heels. There's a hundred different ways to molest a chic wearing this outfit and I guarantee that you ain't never done a one.

 

[hzjujk]

Aiden touched her breasts, perhaps he will tell her to let Andre feel her breasts, and at that moment he will really stick his hand into her panties.
But the outfit that he told her to wear is definitely not only for him and Andre, Sofia will have to demonstrate something to everyone.

Agree, it is still not an easy task for the L&P to make this plot erotic enough, interesting and unpredictable.

People do you really like to watch a woman get sexually fooled by a guy she doesn't like? And when she does get "wet", you completely ignore the self-disgust that this woman should feel. An erotic scene with Aiden in which this happens? We are really worlds apart - and by that I also mean the smiles and thumbs up drooling under this post.
On the third task I let Aiden touch Sophia because I didn't notice right away that Aiden was under the mask. I thought it suited the events. But now Sophia knows that Aiden will take every chance and she shouldn't let herself be fooled again. For me that means that everyone can touch Sophia during the 12 tasks, except Aiden, if I can prevent it. Aiden is a potential rapist, you saw that exactly during the 3rd task. He knew no restraint! He would rape Sophia immediately if he believed he could get away with it and also brag about it.

 

[nexer]

Why are

Why are y'all so hung up on this out fit, does it really matter. She's got on a short ass mini skirt in high heels. There's a hundred different ways to molest a chic wearing this outfit and I guarantee that you ain't never done a one.

Because of L&P. It's in the script

 

[D2taA]

Because of L&P. It's in the script

But still I've seen this on like the last 8 pages, the ideal for a chic wear sumin like this is to get her to bend over at the hips, or sit in front of you with legs uncrossed, either way it's straight bush. As short as it appears getting her to bend over with nothing on underneath, wood be the easy way to see sumin. It wood show about have of her ass and all of everything else. I wood just have her go up I front of class and drop sumin and have her bend over, with her back to the class , and pick it up. You'd be able to tell how good her last wax job was.

 

[Radoslaw Wolf]

We can Trust L&P word i think we gonna get awesome Hotter & hotter scenes in upcoming updates.

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There's no doubt we eventually will. The problem is whether we're still around to see them...

 

[lockerxx]

We can Trust L&P word i think we gonna get awesome Hotter & hotter scenes in upcoming updates.

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is he going to post the next 4 days?13,14,15,16

 

[Assari]

People do you really like to watch a woman get sexually fooled by a guy she doesn't like? And when she does get "wet", you completely ignore the self-disgust that this woman should feel. An erotic scene with Aiden in which this happens? We are really worlds apart - and by that I also mean the smiles and thumbs up drooling under this post.
On the third task I let Aiden touch Sophia because I didn't notice right away that Aiden was under the mask. I thought it suited the events. But now Sophia knows that Aiden will take every chance and she shouldn't let herself be fooled again. For me that means that everyone can touch Sophia during the 12 tasks, except Aiden, if I can prevent it. Aiden is a potential rapist, you saw that exactly during the 3rd task. He knew no restraint! He would rape Sophia immediately if he believed he could get away with it and also brag about it.

it's a game. we even killing peoples in the games, even exterminating entire nations you know? and we have fun because of that

 

[Jack Adams]

What I am about to write is just one man’s perspective floating in a sea of other valid comments. I’m not going to address the slow production rate in this comment. Let’s turn the clock back to 2017…

L&P recognizes that the majority of games (not all) being produced in this genre provide poor graphic depictions of a skeletal story expressed with insipid dialogue by two-dimensional characters (he was correct).

L&P takes time to understand female psychology and temeritously incorporates it into his story… including those aspects that most women don’t want to openly admit. He spends time developing his characters and their back story as a family. He then story-board’s the methodical derogation of his protagonist (this is all commendable).

After producing enough worthwhile renders to entice an audience he releases his first version and goes on to explain that his effort is in response to the dross that is offered in the genre and he will show how an adult VN is done (this is dangerous). I applaud him for the desire and work-ethic to produce and offer his audience a high-quality adult novel. I believe that (in his well-meaning fervor) he misses that there is more than one way to ‘do it’ properly. When his honest efforts are challenged his disbelief leads to over-reaction and does damage with his rebuttal.

I believe that his work has inspired others to effort in new directions by his example. It would serve him well to recognize quality work done a different way for what it is … a vast improvement over the dross that congested this venue in 2017. Commending the achievements of others would lift some of the heat he doesn’t believe he deserves when he is working so hard.

In addition, L&P (although intelligent) does not have the complete skill set. He is a talented graphic artist. He is a capable researcher who understands the nuances and the conceptual connective tissue of what he studies. He is adroit in terms of setting up the long-term steps that lead to a conclusion. However, he severely lacks in logic continuity when it comes to the progressive choices and expression of his characters, and fails on the micro level when it comes to dialogue.

I strongly believe that if he received help in the form of a second set of eyes checking the continuity, and a skilled PR representative his stress would decrease and his product would improve.