Zagar999

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Apr 12, 2018
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Could become a masterpiece.

Beautiful graphics (but bland face in latest version).

Interesting story at the start, boring development, no build-up of tension, no excitement

More interesting if she made men struggle, just an easy girl in the story

Would be good to train yourself to write a good script and redo the story
 
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Couto25

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Just a small suggestion to LP if he watch it..Dude open your eyes, wake up...you need new plan for this game..scrap all the old schemes...play part 1 of this game yourself that you developed and see what it was.

We want you to continue the story with the essence of real part 1 that you developed yourself from sophia's perspective....we don't want you to dwelve yourself inside the teenage body and keep thinking about first time sex and stretch the story like a rubberband for years. Dwelve yourself inside the body of a married woman who has sexual deisre and corrupt her for cheating with her lifestyle...i.e. in married woman work culture and in terms of who sophia should hang around with after work like neighbors, her sister, her friends etc lol.

Please get your story out from Dylan, Ellie their friends and teenage perspective of sex asap. And get back on the track of cheating and corrupt wife and develop the story from the middle age woman perspective.
 

PietruccioTheHilander

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Jul 17, 2019
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Just a small suggestion to LP if he watch it..Dude open your eyes, wake up...you need new plan for this game..scrap all the old schemes...play part 1 of this game yourself that you developed and see what it was.

We want you to continue the story with the essence of real part 1 that you developed yourself from sophia's perspective....we don't want you to dwelve yourself inside the teenage body and keep thinking about first time sex and stretch the story like a rubberband for years. Dwelve yourself inside the body of a married woman who has sexual deisre and corrupt her for cheating with her lifestyle...i.e. in married woman work culture and in terms of who sophia should hang around with after work like neighbors, her sister, her friends etc lol.

Please get your story out from Dylan, Ellie their friends and teenage perspective of sex asap. And get back on the track of cheating and corrupt wife and develop the story from the middle age woman perspective.
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