VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.205b] [Lust & Passion]

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Bane71

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Many people often talk in this thread about the need to reduce the number of plots in AWAM, that the L&P has introduced too many characters and arcs into the game.
Personally, I am very sorry that the L&P put Coach Sophia's storyline off to a later date for DLC. Because when Sofia and Dylan were taking a bath together, Dylan told Sofia that an important match was waiting for them at the weekend and they absolutely had to win at all costs.

I think Sofia, fulfilling her duties as a coach, would have found an effective incentive for the players of the football team to do their best and even more to win this important match.
And I'm so sorry we won't see it soon, or perhaps never at all.


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Dylan told his mom about an important match this weekend and that they must do whatever it takes to win.
 
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Bane71 said:
Many people often talk in this thread about the need to reduce the number of plots in AWAM, that the L&P has introduced too many characters and arcs into the game.
Personally, I am very sorry that the L&P put Coach Sophia's storyline off to a later date for DLC. Because when Sofia and Dylan were taking a bath together, Dylan told Sofia that an important match was waiting for them at the weekend and they absolutely had to win at all costs.

I think Sofia, fulfilling her duties as a coach, would have found an effective incentive for the players of the football team to do their best and even more to win this important match.
And I'm so sorry we won't see it soon, or perhaps never at all.


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I've already said that cutting out the characters now is stupid, then, damn it, he spent so much time on the characters and the story, it turns out he could stupidly not do it, I'm generally against cutting out the game now, it should have been done initially.
 
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Bane71 said:
Many people often talk in this thread about the need to reduce the number of plots in AWAM, that the L&P has introduced too many characters and arcs into the game.
Personally, I am very sorry that the L&P put Coach Sophia's storyline off to a later date for DLC. Because when Sofia and Dylan were taking a bath together, Dylan told Sofia that an important match was waiting for them at the weekend and they absolutely had to win at all costs.

I think Sofia, fulfilling her duties as a coach, would have found an effective incentive for the players of the football team to do their best and even more to win this important match.
And I'm so sorry we won't see it soon, or perhaps never at all.


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Coach Sophia was a fantastic idea, and L&P blundered by not thinking of it sooner. Thematically it makes far more sense for Sophia to have a part-time job coaching than either of her actual side jobs (especially the nursing home job). Coach Sophia should have been written into the game from the beginning, that's how good I t think the idea is. It would have given her another point of contact for many of the main love interests, and helped consolidate the story.

The nursing home and tutoring jobs should have been the DLCs
 
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GingerSweetGirl said:
Coach Sophia was a fantastic idea, and L&P blundered by not thinking of it sooner. Thematically it makes far more sense for Sophia to have a part-time job coaching than either of her actual side jobs (especially the nursing home job). Coach Sophia should have been written into the game from the beginning, that's how good I t think the idea is. It would have given her another point of contact for many of the main love interests, and helped consolidate the story.

The nursing home and tutoring jobs should have been the DLCs
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It could have worked, but the question should be if L&P added this as an afterthought to his story. When he started this story, his statement was this back on 7.19.18.

https://f95zone.to/threads/a-wife-and-mother-v0-130-lust-passion.5944/post-924649

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It makes me wonder how large his script was at that time if he was going to tell 30 playable days in a 4-5 year timeframe and how much fluff he added to his script. Was Coach Sophia fluff? For someone with a script already written, going from 5 years to 15+ years was drastically off on his projection, or he's been rewriting his story to add fluff and change plots or add to them.

Coach Sophia could have been better served than the other two side jobs, as you have stated. But we already know he will not give up the second side job because that's one of his favorite stories in his novel.
 
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