VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.211] [Lust & Passion]

[Leldorin]

« Hey mom! I made you some dinner! Here, have a sit . » «Oh thank you Dylan ! That so sweet of you ! » So, do you like it ? » «Well it’s not bad, but I don’t recognized the meat........ » « It’s the neighbors dog !! » «WHAT !?!? » «Well, you said that it was annoying how much he was barking and since I observed that you have lost some weight recently I cooked the dog, for your own good ! » «Oh my sweet, sweet little psychopath...

 

[Old Dog]

Do we know that? Seems more likely to me that the first part was true about Dylan defending other kids from Aiden and then Aiden got Dylan to do something for him in exhange for leaving him alone.



This just shows what an utter moron Dylan is because Aiden is threatening him with violence for non compliance to his request, Dylan is not in a position to ask anything of Aiden because this is not a quid pro quo. Dylan trying to get something out of this should have surely resulted in him getting beaten up because Aiden has no reason to do what Dylan wants of him. Aiden holds all the cards here. It's stupid to think that Dylan could have put any conditions on this arrangement.

Aiden: "Sure, I'll leave you guys alone, if you do something for me."
Dylan: "I'll only do it if you do something for me."
*Aiden nods to one of his boys*
*Dylan gets punched in the face and falls to the ground*
*Aiden stands over Dylan*
Aiden: "Hey! I think you're forgetting who's in charge here. Do what I want, or we'll beat your asses every day. THAT'S the deal!"

This is far more likely to be how a conversation like that would have gone down.



Again, Dylan is in no position to ask anything of Aiden, so this whole thing is stupid.

Dylan can because Aiden needs something off him otherwise he would of beaten the crap out of him and he never did.
Who do you think started all this off,Dylan did,Aiden could of said no way and just beaten him up but Aiden didn't because he needs something off Dylan.
Aiden never threatened Dylan it was all set up,there never was any Bullying involving Dylan/Zac NEVER.
Dylan even confessed that the bullying was faked and he got the bruises playing sport not Aiden.
Aiden could be a bully to the other guys but nothing has been proved that he bullied Dylan or Zac.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

That is an example more "Realistic" scene then what played out.

And that's the other thing, everything that has happened before this update, even all the incestuous stuff, has actually felt very realistic and reasonably paced, but then we get this utter bullshit, Ellie spills her guts about her and Julia completely out of the blue, Dylan goes full porn game perv for "reasons", and we have Sophia riding a sybian in the apartment of someone she's only met 3 or 4 times.

This is why I say this update totally jumped the shark because it undeniably did.

« Hey mom! I made you some dinner! Here, have a sit . » «Oh thank you Dylan ! That so sweet of you ! » So, do you like it ? » «Well it’s not bad, but I don’t recognized the meat........ » « It’s the neighbors dog !! » «WHAT !?!? » «Well, you said that it was annoying how much he was barking and since I observed that you have lost some weight recently I cooked the dog, for your own good ! » «Oh my sweet, sweet little psychopath...

Yes, apparently this is the kind of thing that qualifies as "good intentions" in this game.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Dylan can because Aiden needs something off him otherwise he would of beaten the crap out of him and he never did.
Who do you think started all this off, Dylan did,Aiden could of said no way and just beaten him up but Aiden didn't because he needs something off Dylan.
Aiden never threatened Dylan it was all set up,there never was any Bullying involving Dylan/Zac NEVER.
Dylan even confessed that the bullying was faked and he got the bruises playing sport not Aiden.

Well then this just makes the whole thing worse, doesn't it? Dylan becomes a lying scumbag moron who offers his mother up on a silver platter to the prolific school hoodlum with the absolute dumbest of justifications which then leads to the worst subplot in the whole game.

What a piss-poor bit of writing by L&P. They should be ashamed of themselves for this absolute dumpster fire. Everything was going fine, but this has ruined things so much and it can only get worse from here.

 

[Bill_Buttlicker]

And that's the other thing, everything that has happened before this update, even all the incestuous stuff, has actually felt very realistic and reasonably paced, but then we get this utter bullshit, Ellie spills her guts about her and Julia completely out of the blue, Dylan goes full porn game perv for "reasons", and we have Sophia riding a sybian in the apartment of someone she's only met 3 or 4 times.

This is why I say this update totally jumped the shark because it undeniably did.



Yes, apparently this is the kind of thing that qualifies as "good intentions" in this game.

I hardly saw it as jumping the shark. Why wouldn't Ellie confide in her mom about Julia? She's already close to her mom and with the shower adventure it only makes sense she would tell her feelings about Julia. Also this happens after she witnesses her mom kissing her sister at the club so naturally she'd be curious of her mom's point of view while exploring her own feelings with Julia. As for Dylan again why is it so strange he'd want to peep on the ladies in the shower. His experiments with his mom have only increased his desire to finally see a naked woman and now he has the chance to see 4 at one time. It comes off as more of a learning experience for him than anything perverted. As for Sophia she has already established a good connection with Alyssa right from the first meeting with her which has only grown with each additional meet. And by this time has explored a lot of temptations in experimenting with other women. Couple this with her increased frustration with not getting any sex from her husband for weeks as well as Alyssa almost causing her to orgasm in the cafe, I don't see it as a stretch she'd experiment with the sybian given her heightened state of arousal by that time.

 

[Bill_Buttlicker]

We went from Nun to Sex-ED to Hidden Blackmail/Setup or Confession. I wonder what is next???

I think I know where the second job she obtains with teaching the 3 children will lead to. Given that the mom refuses to let Sophia use any sort of visual aids for sex education it could stand to reason the teens will inquire about Sophia's body where she might give in to using herself as a visual aid.

 

[MattShizzle]

That is an example of a more "Realistic" scene then what played out. Consider his Uncle is a top dog lawyer and could get almost any charged drop, per the policeman Sophia talk to.

Except Dylan's idea is something Aiden would probably like doing anyway.

 

[The Dark One]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
File "E:\Vn\A_Wife_And_Mother-0.100-pc\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "E:\Vn\A_Wife_And_Mother-0.100-pc\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Mon Sep 14 03:44:13 2020
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[MattShizzle]

We went from Nun to Sex-ED to Hidden Blackmail/Setup or Confession. I wonder what is next???

Well it IS 2020. Maybe she turns into a vampire?

 

[Joe_shoe33]

Trying not to read spoilers, but I'm getting an error message after the Dylan/Ellie Scene when Mom goes to the store...does anyone have the fix or save from there on??

 

[Anthony11553]

Someone could make a porn game and not have a sex scene for 10 years and people would be saying "good slow burn, so glad this game isn't a meaningless fuckfest"

 

[Dr.SigmundFap]

Except Dylan's idea is something Aiden would probably like doing anyway.

True. Aiden is the beneficiary of this scene. But here the thing, Dylan knows who Aiden is and that he affiliated with the "Junior Mafia." and his uncle is this great lawyer. He should have known that making a deal like this was going to backfire. The writing here makes no sense from a "Realistic" standpoint. Dylan wasn't holding the cards here. Aiden was the one holding the cards. Everything in that scene benefited Aiden. He even said that if he could get Sophia to wear a tight miniskirt in class it would be way better then the data he is seeking.

 

[jackhack]

does it add sex scenes??????????

 

[Old Dog]

True. Aiden is the beneficiary of this scene. But here the thing, Dylan knows who Aiden is and that he affiliated with the "Junior Mafia." and his uncle is this great lawyer. He should have known that making a deal like this was going to backfire. The writing here makes no scene from a "Realistic" standpoint. Dylan wasn't holding the cards here. Aiden was the one holding the cards. Everything in that scene benefitted Aiden. He even said that if he could Sophia to wear a tight miniskirt in class it would be way better then the data he is seeking.

Yes Dylan should of known better it was a stupid thing to do.Also we don't know what type of data he wants but maybe it has something to do with the school,who knows.
Maybe Bennet is selling grades and Aiden wants in so he needs to get some proof,all guess work.

 

[Old Dog]

does it add ant sex scenes??????????

Only on a Wednesday

 

[DrDougDoesDOS]

ant sex scenes??????????

haven't had any Spider-Pig Sex scenes yet so Ants are way off... 12 years maybe

 

[DanThaMan]

does it add ant sex scenes??????????

This might be more your thing if you're into ant sex

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[Holy Bacchus]

I hardly saw it as jumping the shark. Why wouldn't Ellie confide in her mom about Julia? She's already close to her mom and with the shower adventure it only makes sense she would tell her feelings about Julia. Also this happens after she witnesses her mom kissing her sister at the club so naturally she'd be curious of her mom's point of view while exploring her own feelings with Julia.

That wasn't "confiding", that was an overly-blunt and far too sudden diatribe that would be too cheesy and cringey even for a romantic novel. The only reason for it was to get the admittedly hot scene with Julia, but even that felt way too soon and very out of place.

It's not even about Ellie's curiosity either, it was just about finding a really contrived way to include a steamy lesbian scene with Sophia but the whole thing is far too rushed. Ellie was supposed to take some time to think about things with Julia but now we find out they've done a lot in the last 3 days, so it clearly didn't that long, and somehow they've done so much that both she and Julia are comfortable being this open with Sophia? Nope, not buying it.

The whole justification for this, that Julia saw Sophia, is also bogus because Julia's back was to where Sophia was the whole time so there's no way she saw her. It was just a plot contrivance to force this scene.

As for Dylan again why is it so strange he'd want to peep on the ladies in the shower. His experiments with his mom have only increased his desire to finally see a naked woman and now he has the chance to see 4 at one time. It comes off as more of a learning experience for him than anything perverted.

Because it's the typical porn game trope that I'm sick of seeing and really thought this game was above. L&P lowered and debased themselves by including this.

As for Sophia she has already established a good connection with Alyssa right from the first meeting with her which has only frown with each additional meet. And by this time has explored a lot of temptations in experimenting with other women. Couple this with her increased frustration with not getting any sex from her husband for weeks as well as Alyssa almost causing her to orgasm in the cafe, I don't see it as a stretch she'd experiment with the sybian given her heightened arousal by that time.

Good connection, yes, but she only met her a handful of times and given how prudish she still is about so many things, riding a sybian just seems way out of character for her right now. She doesn't even masturbate with a dildo for Christ's sake, and we're supposed to believe she'll take a ride on a sybian? Again, not buying it.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Dylan had good intentions but he chose poorly very poorly,stupid/naive in fact and it was never his intentions to offer his mother up.Aiden changed the rules not Dylan he should of known better.

I've said it before and I'll say it again: Fuck. His. Intentions! His intentions are flawed anyway so he's already on very shitty ground as far as that's concerned. If he were my son, I'd disown his ass for doing something like this. I'd kick him out of the house and tell him to never darken my door again. He would be dead to me!

The whole problem I have with this is that, up until now the game has felt reasonably well-grounded, even with the incest, blackmail, lesbian feelings, etc, and that has been one of its greatest strengths. But this revelation is a huge steaming pile of horsecrap that has totally obliterated that grounded feeling for me because there is absolutely no rationale for why Dylan should have ever thought that this was a good idea. This is a shit idea, not simply from Dylan, but from L&P who wrote the damn thing. They have sullied themselves with this horsecrap, piss-poor bit of writing, and it is shameful for someone as talented as them.

 

[ST-9Pol]

Hey,

Really liking the game, but seems im getting error always on day18 when entering grocerie after pool/treehouse event with Sam. Any way to bypass it or what causing the error?

I'm getting the same error.... no fix yet