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Perhaps at the concert Sam will see Sophia's breasts, because she herself wanted to show him. Maybe also a kiss on the lips. We cannot count on more.
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- May 24, 2018
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Playing this game again after a year or so and good *lord* I'd forgotten just how badly this writer needs an editor. They write like they're trying to fill out a word count quota and worse, they have no clue how to structure an actual scene. Sophia as a character is so tedious and uptight and annoying, which is a problem cause she's literally in every single scene.
Sophia/Ellie makeout scenes make it worth it though. I approve.
Sophia/Ellie makeout scenes make it worth it though. I approve.
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Hopefully the next one. There is so much potential with this dress for Aiden
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My expectations for Sam's concert are a bit more conservative. I think Sam is still working at a disadvantage due to his age, so I think the progress bar isn't as far along. However, I think something along the lines of Sam grabbing Sophia's butt and her openly allowing it is very likely. A kiss is possible, but I don't expect it. A boob flash is very unlikely, but I can't rule it out completely. I assume if she flashes him her boobs she's either doing it in public (which would be a big step for her) or she's doing it for him privately in which case he's going to want to touch (a huge step)- so because of those additional components I don't think it's likely.
But, that said, if she does flash Sam (or more) then I think we can definitively say that this train is picking up steam. As you both said, the next major step for Sophia is to take ownership of these sexy actions. So far she's mostly been following the lead/desires of those around her, doing things because they ask or because they seduce her. The next step will be for Sophia to be the one to start doing things without being asked. That sort of confidence is what she'll need in order to have sex on day 19.
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Sorry, but to school in this dress, bad taste ((
Sofia has much more acceptable and much more erotic outfits in her wardrobe.
I understand that this is a matter of taste, but still ...
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The sauna scene really highlighted this for me. I know that this thread has talked about the need for an editor before, but between the translator issues and the script writing, it's really coming to a head. L&P is not a native English speaker, so I cut him a lot of slack, but that doesn't make the writing magically better. I think that's why so much of the game's dialog reads like a courtroom transcript as people convey facts. Writing fact-based dialog is probably a hell of a lot easier for someone who isn't a native English speaker.
DeShawn- "Do you have children?"
Sophia- "Yes, I have two children."
D- "Where do you work?"
S- "I'm a teacher, but I only work part-time, so I have a side job too."
etc, etc, etc. Writing dialog for a conversation though would be much more difficult. It's probably why the narrator is so busy in this game telling the player about all of the interesting things being said, but we never actually read dialog containing all of these interesting things.
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It seems like you have some unnecessary characters there: "[/" Delete those and add your other signature. Just do right click over the image you want, select "copy url image", click in the image icon in your signature box and paste the url.
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Thanks all.
Now all I need to do is figure out how to have the two signatures side by side, rather than one above the other.
Now all I need to do is figure out how to have the two signatures side by side, rather than one above the other.
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Patricia drooling, she would like to see Sophia naked in this position.
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I'm sure people like me that don't want to see dicks when playing female MC will gladly skip it.
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yes of course, both! Incest festival.
Am I correct in assuming that you are not a Dylan fan?