Inspired by
Notretsam I decided to restart from scratch. Right away you see the incredible difference in the quality of renders from the get go to now.
(this was probably already covered in the first dozen pages of the thread so sorry for the old news)
But you also see some of the sloppy writing:
San Alejo airport is 3,000 meters above sea level, but San Alejo appears to be at sea level. Fine, but they get from the airport to the new home in just 25 minutes. So that's leaving an airport parking garage (they were parked on the 8th floor), then exiting the airport complex, some freeway driving and then some city driving, in 25 minutes. Ok, fine.
But the whole rationale of Carl taking the sports car instead of the SUV was that they were running late. But then if you refuse to let Dylan sit on your lap Carl calls his chauffeur to pick them up and says "he'll be here in a few minutes" - so how is it possible that they were running late and needed to take the faster car if the trip to the airport is so ... short?
So I haven't even got into the car from the airport and already the congruity is a mess...