VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.211] [Lust & Passion]

[sept0342]

L&P just deleted the post about asking for help.

 

[abczzz]

what's in the next update?

 

[Alley_Cat]

There's no happy ending riding off into the sunset with Sam.

Considering that Patricia is the only one of the major five with horses, she's the only one Sophia is going to be riding off into the sunset with. Driving off into the sunset is a different matter though.

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

what's in the next update?

words

 

[Bane71]

And suddenly some dull sound abruptly pulled her out of her sinful fantasies.

Unlike those who claim that AWAM has a lot of unnecessary content and unnecessary renders, on the contrary, I think that sometimes dialogues, explanations and text of thoughts are not enough.

For example, in this episode above, the author describes Sophia's actions, about where and how she touches herself. He mentions that Sophia is immersed in her sinful dreams, but he does not tell us what exactly Sophia is thinking, what exactly turns her on? This is, in my opinion, a flaw in this episode of the game.

Already at this stage, Sophia has many reasons for sexual fantasies, but unfortunately, the author did not show us any of them.
But it could be a really hot moment in the game and completely without visualizations, based only on Sophia's vicious fantasies.

Passing different routes in this game, from time to time I come across the underdeveloped potential of some scenes.
Does anyone else have this feeling?

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

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And suddenly some dull sound abruptly pulled her out of her sinful fantasies.

Unlike those who claim that AWAM has a lot of unnecessary content and unnecessary renders, on the contrary, I think that sometimes dialogues, explanations and text of thoughts are not enough.

For example, in this episode above, the author describes Sophia's actions, about where and how she touches herself. He mentions that Sophia is immersed in her sinful dreams, but he does not tell us what exactly Sophia is thinking, what exactly turns her on? This is, in my opinion, a flaw in this episode of the game.

Already at this stage, Sophia has many reasons for sexual fantasies, but unfortunately, the author did not show us any of them.
But it could be a really hot moment in the game and completely without visualizations, based only on Sophia's vicious fantasies.

Passing different routes in this game, from time to time I come across the underdeveloped potential of some scenes.
Does anyone else have this feeling?

don't say it, or the next update will dare 70 pages of word

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

View attachment 1210366
And suddenly some dull sound abruptly pulled her out of her sinful fantasies.

Unlike those who claim that AWAM has a lot of unnecessary content and unnecessary renders, on the contrary, I think that sometimes dialogues, explanations and text of thoughts are not enough.

For example, in this episode above, the author describes Sophia's actions, about where and how she touches herself. He mentions that Sophia is immersed in her sinful dreams, but he does not tell us what exactly Sophia is thinking, what exactly turns her on? This is, in my opinion, a flaw in this episode of the game.

Already at this stage, Sophia has many reasons for sexual fantasies, but unfortunately, the author did not show us any of them.
But it could be a really hot moment in the game and completely without visualizations, based only on Sophia's vicious fantasies.

Passing different routes in this game, from time to time I come across the underdeveloped potential of some scenes.
Does anyone else have this feeling?

I hear you and while I agree I'm willing to give L&P a pass on this. I really noticed it during the sauna scene where the writing/dialog was boring. But here's how I think of it: L&P is writing for an English speaking audience in his second language, for a MC who is a different gender. That's a tall order. The last thing I want him to do is obsess over this issue too.

 

[Alley_Cat]

View attachment 1210366
And suddenly some dull sound abruptly pulled her out of her sinful fantasies.

Unlike those who claim that AWAM has a lot of unnecessary content and unnecessary renders, on the contrary, I think that sometimes dialogues, explanations and text of thoughts are not enough.

For example, in this episode above, the author describes Sophia's actions, about where and how she touches herself. He mentions that Sophia is immersed in her sinful dreams, but he does not tell us what exactly Sophia is thinking, what exactly turns her on? This is, in my opinion, a flaw in this episode of the game.

Already at this stage, Sophia has many reasons for sexual fantasies, but unfortunately, the author did not show us any of them.
But it could be a really hot moment in the game and completely without visualizations, based only on Sophia's vicious fantasies.

Passing different routes in this game, from time to time I come across the underdeveloped potential of some scenes.
Does anyone else have this feeling?

Not in the slightest. It will have been vague for a reason. It's a compulsory event, and played on both GW and Filthy from memory. So there are two options: code for every commutation and permutation of routes people can play, or leave it up to the player. L&P obviously just chose the latter.

 

[Bane71]

don't say it, or the next update will dare 70 pages of word

Ha ha ha, You are right, there is such a possibility.
But wouldn't it be interesting for you to read Sophia's vulgar fantasies, in which she imagined her students masturbating while thinking about her? Or how Mr. Murray's cock got on her and she teases him? Or something different?

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

Ha ha ha, You are right, there is such a possibility.
But wouldn't it be interesting for you to read Sophia's vulgar fantasies, in which she imagined her students masturbating while thinking about her? Or how Mr. Murray's cock got on her and she teases him? Or something different?

no, further thoughts of sophia would not bring any benefit to the story, whose development is already very slow and does not progress significantly

 

[nexer]

View attachment 1210366
And suddenly some dull sound abruptly pulled her out of her sinful fantasies.

Unlike those who claim that AWAM has a lot of unnecessary content and unnecessary renders, on the contrary, I think that sometimes dialogues, explanations and text of thoughts are not enough.

For example, in this episode above, the author describes Sophia's actions, about where and how she touches herself. He mentions that Sophia is immersed in her sinful dreams, but he does not tell us what exactly Sophia is thinking, what exactly turns her on? This is, in my opinion, a flaw in this episode of the game.

Already at this stage, Sophia has many reasons for sexual fantasies, but unfortunately, the author did not show us any of them.
But it could be a really hot moment in the game and completely without visualizations, based only on Sophia's vicious fantasies.

Passing different routes in this game, from time to time I come across the underdeveloped potential of some scenes.
Does anyone else have this feeling?

It's a bit risky. If she thinks of men, L&P upsets girl-girl-luv, and vice versa.
If she thinks of men, which one?
If she thinks of women, the same. Even worse .
Solution:

[Miki3DX] The Experiment

 

[hzjujk]

View attachment 1210366
And suddenly some dull sound abruptly pulled her out of her sinful fantasies.

Unlike those who claim that AWAM has a lot of unnecessary content and unnecessary renders, on the contrary, I think that sometimes dialogues, explanations and text of thoughts are not enough.

For example, in this episode above, the author describes Sophia's actions, about where and how she touches herself. He mentions that Sophia is immersed in her sinful dreams, but he does not tell us what exactly Sophia is thinking, what exactly turns her on? This is, in my opinion, a flaw in this episode of the game.

Already at this stage, Sophia has many reasons for sexual fantasies, but unfortunately, the author did not show us any of them.
But it could be a really hot moment in the game and completely without visualizations, based only on Sophia's vicious fantasies.

Passing different routes in this game, from time to time I come across the underdeveloped potential of some scenes.
Does anyone else have this feeling?

Oh man, they also enjoy provoking the others a little. In principle, I agree with you, that would have been erotic.

 

[Bane71]

It's a bit risky. If she thinks of men, L&P upsets girl-girl-luv, and vice versa.
If she thinks of men, which one?
If she thinks of women, the same. Even worse .
Solution:

[Miki3DX] The Experiment

I suppose it's not about the risk, but about the fact that for different scenarios, her fantasies should be about different partners. Is that what you mean? Of course, this complicates the workflow somewhat.

 

[Deleted member 3516371]

As the day with Patricia goes on day 15, so halfway through the game, maybe there will be a discussion between Sophia and Patricia.
A sort of focus where Sophia is in her feelings.
Since the next day there will normally be something about lesbianism. (day 16)

I hope so

 

[Deleted member 3516371]

DoL is Decisions of Life, the game L&P is officially making on Patreon, which is AWAM with the underage and incest references changed, and some scenes removed. I originally looked into it to see if there were any hints as to who would have relationships with who - for example, if Claire and Marie were written in DoL as mother and daughter, that would mean that they were not going to have a sexual relationship, but since all parent/child relationships in the game are lodger/Landlady (with the exception of Ellie, who is Sophia's friend, Patricia is best friend, and Amber and Neil are Sam and Julia's Landlords), it doesn't really indicate anything interesting.

DoL isn't worth playing. So be careful if the update comes out and it says "Decisions of Life" instead of "A Wife and Mother" like what happened a while back and really confused a lot of people.

Remind me when it's comes out on new update

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

Remind me when it's comes out on new update

You don't want to play it. It's mostly the same game, just awkwardly edited to avoid Patreon's censors. As a game it isn't good because it's slapped together and poorly constructed.

 

[Deleted member 3516371]

You don't want to play it. It's mostly the same game, just awkwardly edited to avoid Patreon's censors. As a game it isn't good because it's slapped together and poorly constructed.

What do you mean

 

[nexer]

I suppose it's not about the risk, but about the fact that for different scenarios, her fantasies should be about different partners. Is that what you mean? Of course, this complicates the workflow somewhat.

Exactly, that's the point. It would have been hard to please everyone.

 

[Sonny86]

L&P just deleted the post about asking for help.

I hope he found help to help speed things up!!

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

What do you mean

Imagine a videogame. The game has two versions: one version is called Decisions of a Life and the other is called A Wife and Mother. Imagine the version called Decisions of a Life is a censored beta release of the final version. That final version is called A Wife and Mother. Which would you rather play? Would you rather play the censored beta version, or the final uncensored version?