VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.211] [Lust & Passion]

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Cid Kagenō

Cid Kagenō

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Voyeur92 said:
What the heck!!

Just a few scenes.
1. Went to kids to teach and used them as real life models to teach about penises.
2. Selected a bridal dress.
3. Went to pose naked for art exhibition for Aiden.
4. Comes back home and that's all, end of update...

Man, those throwing money after this game really need to reconsider.

Or is it not the complete version??
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Did you miss the Dylan scene?
 
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interested_guy

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I downloaded with NOPY. more than 5 giga (not compressed version).
But after the wedding dress selection scene, Sophia goes home and the game says "to be continued"
What's wrong ?
Walthrough is found directly in the game. in the main manu there is a link .. and we understand that the game lasts longer.
Now I'm trying to replay the game from the beginning.
Meanwhile I noticed that there are changes in the graphics .. but to me it seems a little worse
I will be able to tell you if the game continues or not ..
 
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Kodek

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I won't comply about the update or the size of it, nothing of the sort.
I made my mind months ago that i wouldn't invest any money in L&P's game until he sorted his project management problem (and he won't).

But allow me: Why is L&P investing so much time, effort and renders on FUCKING pedophille scenes?!??!?!?!?!?
Like really, it always annoyed me that the fucking son is so young-looking, but real children? C'mon!

I don't care about the nature of a scene and couldn't care less about loli, shota porn whatever. But please, let it be in games that actually have a place for them. AWAM have no place for kiddies scenes, it's already too overloaded with plot points that never advances and now there's one more and it's so tasteless???

Stop adding useless, nonsensical content to the game and make do with what you have because it's already too much.
 
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TheVengefulOne

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GingerSweetGirl said:
You do realize that we mostly agree, right?

My point about a professional writer is that there are a lot of balls in the air, and a very narrow timeline for catching them all. A writer would need exceptional organizational skills to make all of these storylines work and make the storytelling good. L&P, like 99% of writers here, could use some help in the organizing department because, as you said, the story's progression is really messy.
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I know, we just disagree on the fact that one need not be a professional writer to properly organize their story telling.

L&P said it would be 30 days, it is said nowhere in the VN that they're on vacation and will leave in 30 days, or that something will happen in 30 days like the LessonOfPassion's extortion games.

Just extend those 30 days to 60 or however long he needs and there, he now has more time to properly tell the story.
Also re-organize the events so they flow realistic before unrealistic, not the other way around. I think it's pretty easy to say which should come first.
I don't think people would mind if they got more/better content.
 
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L&P's Father-in-Law

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For suposedly 6 months of work this was a terrible update and I usually defend the quality of these, despite the pace but:

Storywise this didn't need:
  1. All that render work to show aiden's getting sophia to out of town. That shit could have been done in 2 renders.
  2. Liam checking out the blonde chick scene that no one is going to remember her name. Even the whole bridal thing added nothing to the story.
  3. Dylan event is terrible. It adds nothing to the story, once again L&P adding events just to fill and take more time.

The old dudes event wasn't bad but he could have skipped to the part where she dresses the new dress the old guys have for her or put her on a sheer bra, without a bra, same makeshift bikini. Any of these options would be better than the current one.

The Aiden event itself was good, well-paced, well written.

The 2nd job event was okay for those who have that kink I guess.


So, why a 3/10 instead of a 6 or a 7?

  • Filler events for no good reason
    • I'm still thinking why the fuck did he thought it would be a good idea to have that dylan event, its just bad, adds 0
    • Bridal event was just forgettable (Liam's side is just.. cringe)
    • All that render work on Aiden meeting Sophia is a terrible waste of resources. Would have been better to do 2 renders in some prefab part of the city and show her change to those clothes in some clothes store with a creepy owner than doing the whole bridal thing and what not
  • At this point you have to be really gullible to believe this "special" dev works 12hours a day since the start of january. Or is the slowest worker ever.
  • Clear cashgrab, please don't bring the "he's doing it for the art" nonsense. The dev only changes stuff in his workflow that gives him more money. If it means developing smarter and faster, he wont do it.
    • Change from USD to EUR and now fucking over 38.5$ patrons who got their game from f95 first.

No sane, smart person, can play this update, all routes, and say: this was worth 6 months of development.
 
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