VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.211] [Lust & Passion]

[xxxorro]

Aiden never mentioned what the 4th task could be and only said to keep on wearing sexy dresses and also this task is in the classroom.
I wonder if he will use one of the painting to humiliate Sophia?

Also, not that it might have a big impact, but we have 3 different possible outcomes of the 3rd task:

1. she refuses the Aphrodite pose and nothing else happens (I mean, the task is "validated" anyway, or at least Aiden does not make much of an issue for now)
2. she goes for Aphrodite but she turns Ares down. In that case Aiden doesn't tell her he was him
3. she goes through everything and Aiden tells her it was him all the time

I don't know if that might have an influence on the 4th task. I hope not because it means more complexity etc etc but I expect that there will be some differences not just limited to the dialogues in the 4th task.
The painting, I guess it is bound to appear at some point, as part of the 4th task as hzjujk interestingly proposed, or later on down the road.

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

I was translating for L&P, He's a nice guy but he didn't want to do what I suggested which was to upload all of his script onto a google document and then assign sections to each translator in the discord, so we could all translate our sections in 1 day and then he could go over the translations. This would have sped things up by A LOT!

Instead he wanted to message 1 translator who was available out of 5, and send them 1 line of script and ask them if it sounded okay in english, and then we would have to figure out what the hell the context was for the 1 line, since context mattered sometimes, and so L&P had to go over and explain the scene to us, and then finally we'd correct the english in that line. This felt very micromanaged and it took longer, and sometimes he had issues with our corrections (which is fine because german to english is not so cut and dry since german actually has words English doesn't even have). But it all would have been easier if he did what I said.

So in my opinion, he's probably too much of a micro manager to actually let go of some of the work in the game and allow other people to do it.

hopeless

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

I was translating for L&P, He's a nice guy

do you know how old she might be?

 

[nexer]

do you know how old she might be?

SHE?

 

[Bryankitten]

So boring

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

SHE?

bad traslate

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

No, older than 18 for sure, probably in university/college age range.

is man or not?

 

[Jackpots]

This update was FIRE for me.

The 2nd Side Job Sex.Ed was the best followed by the Aiden Blackmail event. I am really looking forward for the next class of Sex.Ed where Sophia is surely going to explain the Female Physical Anatomy (Her Flower). I did not expect a handjob scene But it really surprise me.

Wedding Dress scene was surely a waste of time and an uninteresting event. BUT AGAIN 6 months for the update is tooooooo long. Anyways looking forward for the next update..

don't expect too much... next time Sophia bring condom...so maybe we will see some boob and they will come in the condom

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

Hi GingerSweetGirl
At the beginning, I would like to point out that I love reading books ... Last year, when the pandemic started, I accidentally found the F95 website (One of my friends from Loverslab let me know about this website)
I admit that my support for game developers is based on that every month I support a different developer. In my opinion, this is fairly fair, especially since I cannot afford to pay monthly Patreon 10,000 geme dev subscriptions.

As for your question .... Well, I don't mean I want total porn in this game. It's not that, but honestly? Assuming by the game creator that sex in this game will be limited only to the husband-wife relationship is totally boring. And showing a 15-year-old boy part of Sophia nipples ... its just weak - boring.
Faithfulness is boring, which is why there are so many erotic stories on F95 because people do not want to read about faithfulness, but about cheating, adultery, seduction. Because somehow these definitions are accompanied by a unique atmosphere. We, who read such a novel want to have an interactive opportunity to direct the personality of our protagonist. It should depend on us what kind of personality we create of our protagonist, whether it will be a path of loyalty or adultery


So that why Im not happy with another boring update that didnt add anything. I admit, that I like Aiden update in 0.130
But about Sophia and her son.... Well... I would see Sam instead Dylan. Too much bitterness for me.
Nevertheless, I respect the game developer decision and have no intention of judging it in any way.
Likewise, I have no intention of judging this as a whole in any negative way. I respect, appreciate, but I wanted to see what the previous update showed us, namely the visit in the prison - except that Sophi's fantasy is more... R E A L

In the future, it is possible, because I do not exclude that, I will visit the creator of A Wife And Mother on Patreon again, but on the condition that the product gives me more emotions than the boring sexual intercourse of a desperate wife / mother, I dont want to see boring Wife-Husband relationship

I want to see Sophia going to the mechanic to repair the car, where I can decide that she will be a good or unfaithful wife.
I want to decide if Sophia should show Sam all her breasts or just a fragment of her nipples.
I want to decide whether Sophia should obey it Aiden ... end of the ends ... I think each of us ... boys dreamed of score teacher.
I want to influence Sophia so that she can do what is unlikely in the real world .. Why? because it's fun and, at the end of the day, it's just an interactive game, so why give up the possibility of doing something crazy / funny or even indecent?
As I wrote before, fidelity is boring (of course in the game)


I think this statement can be fully understood.

PS. Sorry for my bad English.

Kind regards
Lizard

Ok. So what exactly did you think you would see in this update? What events did you expect, and what were your expectations from those events?

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

don't expect too much... next time Sophia bring condom...so maybe we will see some boob and they will come in the condom

they surely won't know how to wear it and she helps them

 

[Jansen]

don't expect too much... next time Sophia bring condom...so maybe we will see some boob and they will come in the condom

Thats fine by me. As long as there is some touching while exposing Sophias lovely creamy skins.

 

[Greek_Lover]

So the update after 6 months in a few words...
Blah blah blah tease then blah blah blah tease and finally blah blah blah to be continue..
Cant wait for the next blah blah blah to be continue update on December!!

 

[Neoblack]

The next update focuses on lesbian content? Why when there's only a single event in an update do people think it's going to be a lesbian update? Next update will only have a probably small event with Nat (the maid).

The focus of next update will be Sam's rock concert.

Next update focus on Santa and X'Mas

 

[Neoblack]

What is DLC?

 

[Mmarsh]

Storyline don't seem to be realistic.
On One hand Sophie refused to fuck Bennett, her colleague in the school who is of same age as her, both knew each other and more or less are friends.
But she is allowing her body, boobs, ass to be touched by wierd strange teenager who are just fooling her.
An affair with Bennett would have been more realistic than doing silly things with Aiden, Sam, Sex ed kids, painting class kids.

 

[bamachine]

I think L&P kept and wanted to convey the idea of submission by force.
The idea of rape with a greater or lesser degree of acceptance from Sophia is conveyed.
Aiden in this scene roughs Sophia up and in another circumstance, with a different type of audience, things would have a similarity to rape.
Xavier is a perverted old man after all. There's clearly a prior deal between Xavier and Aiden.
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If they ever let that bullshit bleed over into the route where you told Aiden to go fuck himself, then what support I have given the dev will dry up immediately. I even hate that this is in the code, even if not in my chosen route.

 

[SteelyDan14]

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What is DLC?

DLC - Downloadable Content

 

[yihman1]

I was translating for L&P, He's a nice guy but he didn't want to do what I suggested which was to upload all of his script onto a google document and then assign sections to each translator in the discord, so we could all translate our sections in 1 day and then he could go over the translations. This would have sped things up by A LOT!

Instead he wanted to message 1 translator who was available out of 5, and send them 1 line of script and ask them if it sounded okay in english, and then we would have to figure out what the hell the context was for the 1 line, since context mattered sometimes, and so L&P had to go over and explain the scene to us, and then finally we'd correct the english in that line. This felt very micromanaged and it took longer, and sometimes he had issues with our corrections (which is fine because german to english is not so cut and dry since german actually has words English doesn't even have). But it all would have been easier if he did what I said.

So in my opinion, he's probably too much of a micro manager to actually let go of some of the work in the game and allow other people to do it.

The further problem with just sending messages based on what you think needed correction, was that there could be mistakes in english in other lines but because he never sent those other lines we never corrected the bad grammar or mistakes since he thought they were okay.

P.S not that fixing grammar took up tons of time, but it added another week (7-12 days) to the overall production time which could have been brought down to maybe three days or less?

It sounds like the translation could be done much more efficiently in the way you suggested, but then I Would also add some additional playtesting by the translators to see if sounds good after it is done that way you would want a couple of days of that so not that much time would be saved.

Do translators not see any renders at all when translating? If not is bad... Unless he tells you exactly render looks like and you got a real good imagination. I would expect that to eat much time.

One big inefficiency I personally noticed about the way scenes are labeled and coded in is they got crazy long names for each render.

Something like: "Day15_6_B4_Ellie_Julia_stand_up_and_looking_at_each_other" All of that needs to be typed in perfectly (or copy-pasted) for each render. I'm honestly surprised there are not more bugs with the way that is labeled unless they are always copy-pasted.

Know how Sin and I label our renders? Stuff like "2d226" 2nd day, render 226 easy peasy.

The way we do it we can add 100 scenes in there 1 right after the other and can split that into parts changing like 1 or 2 numbers on the end. (Sometimes they need to be rearranged, and transitions too to be fair)

The way L&P does it does add slight convenience. You can tell that render was Julia and Ellie standing up looking at each other without looking at the render. So you could know what to put dialogue-wise there, but you should always have a render open if you are writing the line for it anyway so it doesn't really add anything other than being able to do it without looking at it.

plus all those renders are in one huge file for AWAM. We got ours separated by day and scene to find them more easily.

The way those need to be coded in on AWAM... That is lot of extra work just by having all that unnecessary info on the render names.

The thing is though... It's L&P's project. He will do it however is most comfortable for him. He gets it done.

The big part that takes the absolute longest time 100% is the posing + rendering. That is what slows the process down the most by far. That is probably around 80% of the development time, and the trims we are talking about are on the 20%. Adding a 2nd render guy who is good at rendering would get releases done a lot quicker than any micro time saves we are talking here that could save a week or whatever. Another render guy could shave months off.

 

[Deleted member 1857423]

simple question: a guy several time ago created some sort of "side game" related to awam, here side game for awam and that "side game" was really really good! If I'd like to build something similar, how can i obtain/borrow L&P material to start working around a side game too? cheers.

 

[Manowar23]

yo que tú hacía una cosa: 1) instalaba de nuevo el 0.130 y le ponía unren.bat (para poder trampear las puntuaciones), 2). abria el juego para empezar desde cero. 3). en preferencias le cambiaba lo de poder saltar con control y empezaba a adelantar hasta donde te hubieras quedado antes (tardarás unos cinco minutos y puedes aprovechar para echarle un vistazo a la trama general).

Gracias.

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