Here are my thoughts about IMHO biggest missing point of the update 0.6
The fact that we havent seen anything from Sophia's kids stay in the Carls Mansion.
With 2 boys and 3 teen girls, all horny and all eager for new experiences.
And what about hinted plots, like Ellie and Pony in petting Zoo, or Julia beeing hooked up with Christine.
I think this things beg to be shown in the game.
Thats why :
WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN in 0.7 in Carl's Manssion
Here is the important part - I know this is the game shown from Sophia's perspective, but seriously - it almosts beggs to have a portions of the story shown from her kids perspective from time to time !
I demand ( lol heh) that L&P will start next episode from "meanwhile at the Carl Mansion" intermission.
I would love to see scenes:
(1) Patricia and other girls in petting zoo
- The dog follows the girls arround playfully
- They see some animals and pet them (this part is a filler) I dunno ? Lamas ? Rabits ? whatever.
- They then go to pet a Pony, they see a Pony's dick as hinted in car ride from day 1
- Girls get excited and rowdy about it
- Dog senses it and start to "cuddle" to girls licking them on exposed skin and sniffing crotches.
- If author wants to spare Besti from Ellie and main cast - I can see Christine beeing the most lewd one - and actualy enjoy the dogs attencion, encouraging other girls.
- Dog jumps on Christine standing on hind legs, licking her face, and accidentaly his paws expose her brest.
- Girls gigle and finish their tour of zoo.
(2) Sam and Dylan check the sport area
- but they arent as excited, they hear the girls gigling in the zoo, and go spy on them
- they see the scene with Pony and a dog and the comment about it.
- they talk about Christine boobs, and how hot is she.
- when they return they see Patricia with Carl naked in the pool
- Patricia sees them spying on her and flexes for them while Carl is oblivious.
- she winks them and boys panic and run into the house.
(3) Action jumps to the evening
- Carl sleeps and Patricia is gone for the night (fighting crime, and later probably going wild somewhere)
- Sam and Dylan bump into Christine on their way to bathroom
- Christine playfully teases the boys flattered with how they react bashfully to her pressence
- Chirstine sneaks to the kitchen and steals a bottle of champaine
- with it she returns to Ellie and Julia
- Girls drink it and talk a bit about kinky topics, they reminice about the zoo and get excited again
- Ellie remembers that she wanted to hook up Julia with Christine and she thinks of a way to get tehm close to each other
- Ellie proposes to play "spin the bottle" with truth or dare
- Player has a choice here from perspective of Christine
A) agree to play just with girl
- after a few dares and kinky questions, tipsy Ellie proposes to change the game into - game of touches - you have to touch the girl bottle points at, more lewdly after each spin
- I wont describe how far the game will get - its depends on authors whim
A+) Then the dog comes in (lol) and Christine convinces the girls to let him into the game of touches ;]
(all right all right ... I stop here ... )
This one is a joke ...
...But a Man can dream right ? ;]
C) Christine proposes that 3 people is not enugh
- She invites boys in (despite Julia beeing silently agaisnt it)
- The game of truth and dare is a bit awkward because boys are only sober once
- Ellie wants to leave Christine alone with Julia, and so she asks Sam and Dylan to come with her to get more champaine.
- Sam beeing dutifull as usual complies, but Dylan rudely tells his sister to go there herself
- they argue, but christine stops them, calming Dylan down by teasing him with her body
- Angry Ellie, takes Sam and go for the bottle to the fridge
- They are sneaking in the night. Ellie, after her conversation with Sophia about Sam is a bit concious of him
- they go past couch on which Carl is sleeping, and get the bottle
- on the way back they notice he is not on the couch anymore
- Carl walks out of the nearby bathroom naked half asleep
- Ellie and Sam duck behind the couch, hiding the bottle their stole
- Tipsy and erosed Ellie is pressed tightly with Sam, and they look at each other caught in a moment.
- they quickly retun to the rest of people once Carl is gone
4) Midnight Bottle Game
- Ellie return with Sam, and she sees that Christine, Dylan and Julia are playng the bottle game
- she is shocked that Christine is without her top, just bra, julia is all red on the face, partialy undressed too, and Dylan is just in his briefs.
- Christine explains they wanted to level up the game a notch and changed the rules to strip game.
- Ellie makes a scene about Dylan beeing almost naked, but Christine calms her down and explains the rules that she found on the net and reads them from phone.
- Everyone has to make a huge jug of champain first
- The rules are as follow.
- First when the bottle points you, you have to strip one cloth part, but since Ellie and Julia objected, they agree that everyone only have to strip to underwear.
- Once person is out of clothes, the person that spin the bottle gets to touch that person it points to for 30 seconds on:
1st the hands
2nd Shoulders
3rd legs
4th they have to kiss
5th Belly
6th Tights
7th Ass
The game last untill someone is picked by for the 8th time.
- Christine explains that there are more points after that but Ellie stops her that this will be enough.
- She objects that she doesnt want to touch Dylan, Sam says the same about julia, but everyone is drunk, and Christine urges everyone that it is unlikely to land on them out of 5 people.
Here the game starts
If author wanted to go all out - it could be made truely random.
Leading to MANY probable outcomes.
Honestly that would be almost a game within a game (a glorious one)
OFC author could decide to end the game pretty early too.
Here are couple points I can see it comming to.
Dylan x Ellie
She is rude towards him, warning him not to touch her in any perverted way.
Dylan pretends to be unintrested, but he is eager to touch his sister.
Ellie is drunk and suffers his touches having inner monologue how it is wrong, and how she hates him, but actualy get realy hot.
Ellie gets mad and ruins the game for everyone once Dylan touches her tights and his palm brushes agaist her pussy.
Ellie x Dylan
Similarly when Ellie has to touch Dylan she does that very reluctantly, touches him for a sec and then breaks away, but Christine chstises her to do it for 30sec as agreed.
She would then get more and more into it.
At one point Dylan would get a boner, and later even comming out of his trunks, all girls would comment on it Ellie would kick Dylan in the nuts but be holded down by Christine again.
When they have to kiss Ellie refuses, Christine makes her do it in blindfold (as she cant stand to watch her brother kiss her)
Game Ends when Ellie touching Dylans belly, his dick "accidentaly" tauches her brest.
Boys x Christine
Christine would ofc have no inhibitions to be tauched by boys, she would be flirtatious to them all the time, making both Ellie and Julia blush.
Both guys will eagerly rub and fondle her with red faces.
But Christine unlike other girl will insist to play past point 7. When Dylan or Sam reach point 8 with her she will take her bra off.
Game will end if one of the boys "spin" on her for 9th time, which Christine will read in the phone means touching brests.
The lucky Guy will perv on her brest, refusing to end after 30seconds, getting everyone else angry (other dude for not beeing in his place, Ellie for doing something too naughty)
Christine x Boys
Similar like the other way arround, she is eager to touch boys passionately
When asked to kiss, she kisses with tonuge ofc.
when asked to touch their tights she will "accidentaly" rub their dicks too.
Game ends by Ellie shouting "enough" when Christine spins the boy for the 8th time, and tries to take of boys pants.
Christine x Girls
As you can imagine Christine is equaly eager to touch girls as boys.
She would be comming onto both of the girl hard to make them as horny as possible.
Especialy Julia will have strong reactions to the stimulations.
Julia will try to bail out once it will come to kissing with Christine, but Christine will press her into it.
Ellie will take it more calmly but still be excited by Christine touches.
Game will end if Christine spins Ellie for 8th time. Ellie simply refusing to continue.
It will also end if Christine spins Julia for the 6th time. She should touch her tights but quite blatantly she will go for her pussy.
Julia beeing very excited this whole time, when having her pussy touched with orgasm, and pee herself.
Everyone will look mesmerised at her. But she will be sobbing. Ellie will be angry at boys and Christine, and will kick everyone out to console Julia.
Boys x Boys
They will simply try to avoid contact as much as possible. Dont expect any yaoi here.
Still Ellie and Christine will sadisticly urge them to put more feelings into the touches.
Boys will outright refuse to kiss, Ellie will threaten them to kiss or they end the game.
But Christine bails them out saying as punishment they will have to do something embarasing instead.
They have to stand on their hands for 30 seconds instead. Sam fails to and fals to ppl laughing.
Dylan manages to stand, but Christine slaps him in the but and he also falls.
Boys will then also refuse to touch each others butts.
Christine issues another punishment game.
Boys need to stand up with their hands spread and eyes blinded. When they wait for more instructions Christine pulls down their pants suddenly.
The boys try to take their pants back and they all tumble on Christine, but also on other girls.
There is a lot of awkward contacts with naked boys and their naked dicks laying on the girls (mostly Christine)
Angry Ellie once again considers the game "concluded", and kicks out naked boys out of the room.
Aunt Patricia alarmed by the noice sees them as they flee naked from girls room ...
Sam x Ellie
Sam is not realy that much intrested in Ellie, but since they are all horny and tipsy he is not unintressted in touching her.
She however is concious of him, ever since that talk with her Mother, and their previous enounter when they hid from Carl
He kisses her awkwardly and not very strongly, but she still gets realy excited about it.
Dylan is spewing wiht anger when he sees him with his sister, even though he refuses to say he cares about her (he loves her ;] )
When he spins her for 5th and 6th time, she faigns that she is troubled, but lets him touch her as much as he wants.
After a while Sam gets hot too, but when he touches Ellie he imagines he touches Sophia instead.
When he gropes her ass, he closes the eyes, and realy submerges in his delusions, grabing her a little to forcefully.
He molests her ass for more than 30 seconds, not hearing her telling him to stop, and moans daydreaming "Sophia".
Everyone gets rowdy then, Ellie is all flushed but angry at him, Dylan is also furious (for him tauching his sister, and daydreaming about his mom).
Ellie x Sam
Similar Story
Ellie is actually eager to touch and kiss Sam, but she tryies to feign indiffrence.
Still she controlls herself way better than Sam, and dont get too carried away.
All the time she does things with Sam she taunts Dylan with her eyes, showing him "look - you cnat have that"
When nearing later stages of game, she is pretty horny, and oogles Sam's dick a lot.
She realy enjoys touching his butt, mostly to infurriate her brother.
But when she spinnes him for 8th time. She proclaims that he has won and doesnt go any further.
And here I end :heartcoveredeyes:
I dont have stamina to write for other variants but they would definetly be awesome too.
Ellie x Julia
Dylan x Julia
Christine x Julia
Sam x Julia
Julia x Ellie
Julia x Dylan
Julia x Sam
Julia x Christine
This was supposed to be a comment and it ended as funfickion blueprint :heartcoveredeyes:
I hope L&P gets some good ideas from it and we will see what happened that day in the Mantion between thouse teenagers !
