VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.211] [Lust & Passion]

[xןʞ]

I've always thought the same way really, like what the hell is the point of playing a game if there is no actual plot development.

Like do people not realize they are on the internet and there is microsecond access to any type of porn they might be interesed in that will be hotter than any computer renders if they just want mindless bonin' action.

Kinda just assumed it was just because they are legit 13 years old(why no sexi in 0.01 build me no like read!) or that a lot of people here have english as their 3rd or 4th language and might not be able to keep up with long form dialogues and such as well as a native speaker would, which is actually understandable I guess.

 

[Chel]

Can't wait to see her in a tiny bikini!! :9

Oh god, id die happy if i saw her in a slingshot bikini.

 

[Fadge]

I tend to like character development and backstory before somebody's pussy gets smashed. To me, it seems more erotic when there's a build-up. I got the same criticism on my game (it's a gay content game so steer clear if that's not your thing) and I'm ok with it. I like being teased and getting to know the characters. It seems unnatural, especially in an incest-based story, to just assume that characters are going to hook-up and fuck. I think, for a lot of people, it's interesting to see the degradation of morality that leads the characters down that road.

Just sayin...

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I think nobody really want a sex scene with the MC at this stage of the story (if there is one, it must be with the husband, even if it is a sex scene that the MC doesn't enjoy), but want to known what you are capable of in this domain, which is a domain in itself. It can be done in several ways as the sexual frustration of the MC increases : a dream, a masturbation, she can peep an encounter, or her son or daughter masturbation, even a fantasie as she watch a male or female in swinsuit. The MC can touch her breast even with clothes and have a very erotic scene. Somedy can massage her shoulders, even her hands and have an erotic scene. You have shown a lot of stories, but none are erotic. There are infinite solutions to show erotism without a sex scene with the MC. It doesn't even have to be a penetration. Of course, you will answer that i want early sex with MC. NO !!!!!! bla bla bla ... I don't even want nudity. I want erotism, you can speak forever, sorry I haven't see OR EVEN READ something close to erotism. I understand absolutly your opinion to not have an early sex scene with the MC AND I TOTALLY AGREE, but please, and for your OWN INTEREST show us something.
And you can avoid the subject forever if you show nothing, you will get nothing.
It is the way it works ! is it an adult game or not ? If it is, show something, EVEN TEXT ONLY EROTISM .
It will be very painfull to have this project to be delayed and even stopped because it have insufficient fundings because you want to implement your perfect backstory before anything else. You will fall in the trap of "BigBrother" where the sex scene is always delayed to the point that if it appears it will be the end of the game. If you are delaying to have the perfect athmosphere, and if your scene is not absolutly perfect in all domains, you will loose all. On the contrary, if you introduce erotism step by step, you can even find with the reactions what is working and what not
Please consider it

EDIT: even a scene with only text can show erotism if we can read the thoughts of thje MC about her frustrations. erotism is a domain. You have shown your abilities in a lot of domains but not in erotism.. So let's go, show eveybody I am wrong and you can write something that evybody can identify as erotism, even without modify your story telling. Put a dream will change your story telling ? She can remenber her first orgasms with her husband, even without renders of the scene in itself. Find on internet erotic novels with female protagonist, the descriptions, the thoughts, the feelings, the dreams ...
So do it, show erotism !!

 

[Cameage]

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I think nobody really want a sex scene with the MC at this stage of the story (if there is one, it must be with the husband, even if it is a sex scene that the MC doesn't enjoy), but want to known what you are capable of in this domain, which is a domain in itself. It can be done in several ways as the sexual frustration of the MC increases : a dream, a masturbation, she can peep an encounter, or her son or daughter masturbation, even a fantasie as she watch a male or female in swinsuit. The MC can touch her breast even with clothes and have a very erotic scene. Somedy can massage her shoulders, even her hands and have an erotic scene. You have shown a lot of stories, but none are erotic. There are infinite solutions to show erotism without a sex scene with the MC. It doesn't even have to be a penetration. Of course, you will answer that i want early sex with MC. NO !!!!!! bla bla bla ... I don't even want nudity. I want erotism, you can speak forever, sorry I haven't see OR EVEN READ something close to erotism. I understand absolutly your opinion to not have an early sex scene with the MC AND I TOTALLY AGREE, but please, and for your OWN INTEREST show us something.
And you can avoid the subject forever if you show nothing, you will get nothing.
It is the way it works ! is it an adult game or not ? If it is, show something, EVEN TEXT ONLY EROTISM .
It will be very painfull to have this project to be delayed and even stopped because it have insufficient fundings because you want to implement your perfect backstory before anything else. You will fall in the trap of "BigBrother" where the sex scene is always delayed to the point that if it appears it will be the end of the game. If you are delaying to have the perfect athmosphere, and if your scene is not absolutly perfect in all domains, you will loose all. On the contrary, if you introduce erotism step by step, you can even find with the reactions what is working and what not
Please consider it

EDIT: even a scene with only text can show erotism if we can read the thoughts of thje MC about her frustrations. erotism is a domain. You have shown your abilities in a lot of domains but not in erotism.. So let's go, show eveybody I am wrong and you can write something that evybody can identify as erotism, even without modify your story telling. Put a dream will change your story telling ? She can remenber her first orgasms with her husband, even without renders of the scene in itself. Find on internet erotic novels with female protagonist, the descriptions, the thoughts, the feelings, the dreams ...
So do it, show erotism !!

I'll say this: I think the writer is trying to make MC a little frustrated. He established that she threw out her sex toy(s), she was expecting good sex twice and was thwarted, and she hasn't gotten a real chance for any me time (her time?). That would explain why this sex game doesn't even have a little quickie scene or anything yet. That's my guess.

I DO think the writer could have thrown a bone to some of the players who really want that stuff early by having MC giving semi-reluctant head to her husband at some point, maybe after the wine in the outside alcove. She still wouldn't have been satisfied after that, but it would have given players something to leer at.

 

[Viatovic]

But... she has not been tempted yet.

The 0.01 was an intro, a HUGE intro, but just that.
There is going to be a slow burn, for sure... mostly, because the dev has to balance that large number of subplots, so sex or sexual acts are still a long shot.
You can't wait? Well, too bad, there is at least three or four months to get to that stage...

Does this mean that there aren't going to be sexy scenes? Not at all.
The lingerie fail in the intro, for example...

Good corruption games reward the patience.

 

[xןʞ]

But... she has not been tempted yet.

The 0.01 was an intro, a HUGE intro, but just that.
There is going to be a slow burn, for sure... mostly, because the dev has to balance that large number of subplots, so sex or sexual acts are still a long shot.
You can't wait? Well, too bad, there is at least three or four months to get to that stage...

Does this mean that there aren't going to be sexy scenes? Not at all.
The lingerie fail in the intro, for example...

Good corruption games reward the patience.

Also he's kind of said over and over that this game will never really be one of the countless awful female protag games where the lady just throws herself at every dick she meets after meeting the person two minutes prior.

I think a lot of people expecting female protag rpgmaker type corruptionslut game #8531 are gonna be pretty disappointed.

 

[Viatovic]

At least here there are no hobo-dicks...

 

[xןʞ]

Just wait until you find out mail isn't the only big package grandpa mailman has to deliver!

 

[dbp5ca]

Really liking this for an intro. Lots of good story setting even with the rather wonky English. One item I do find kinda funny is that there's not a Hustler magazine in the world that is as tame as the one the MC's son owns

 

[Aaryn]

The problem with throwing sex in early on is that people always want the ante raised. You drop sex in v0.1 and you're gonna have to have orgies by the third update to keep people satiated. Sure, you could do teasers, dreams, voyeur, etc. but if it's not conducive to the story--and the author states his primary focus is the story-- then all you'll see is animated pussy that really won't make a lot of sense. IMO the author has to stay true to his own intentions and the purpose of his game. If he wants to get rich, then he listens to the masses. However, allow the masses to create you and they will eventually destroy you. Plus, it's the internet: you will never get everyone to agree. I say you write the story you like and write the content you enjoy. If people like it, they'll follow it. Who knows, dude may pull off a killer plot line and do some Usual Suspects shit and blow our minds along with our loads

 

[kingscard]

It's the right way to go Aaryn . If someone wants to see a pussy I think there is way enough content over the internet to not rush your protagonists into sex !

I hope your game will have a long life. But I'm in line with those who think that 155 renders for one scene is maybe too much. With strong words and story, one still image can say many things. But I'll wait to see the result before complaining !

 

[stoper]

The problem with throwing sex in early on is that people always want the ante raised. You drop sex in v0.1 and you're gonna have to have orgies by the third update to keep people satiated.

That's an issue you see in game developed and written by your random Joe Schmuck, who knows as much about writing as I know about nuclear physics. I agree that people expect to see the ante raised, but if the writing is good the game can be kept satisfying even having early sex scenes. Take a look at Good Girl Gone Bad for example, there's plenty of sex there, yet there's still much character development to be done. A relationship doesn't stop being exciting after the first fuck.

 

[relayer98]

Good Girl Gone Bad is ordinary slut simulator , only fuckfuckfuck ... and on the end - fuck and live happy what about story then ?:closedeyesmile:

 

[Chel]

Good Girl Gone Bad is ordinary slut simulator , only fuckfuckfuck ... and on the end - fuck and live happy what about story then ?:closedeyesmile:

if you play through it by skipping all the dialog then yeah? Whats your point? The game has quite a lot of story.

 

[relayer98]

i play a little , but what i see - all story concentrate on sex,drink,drugs without consequence ...at the end you maybe by a queen of sluts with golden crown on head. good or... bad ,not matter .

once i play a good patch , nothing interesting then for my ... but maybe old version. no sex ...

 

[Chel]

i play a little , but what i see - all story concentrate on sex,drink,drugs without consequence ...at the end you maybe by a queen of sluts with golden crown on head. good or... bad ,not matter .

Try playing the good path instead of the bad one then?

 

[Andarilho]

Oh god, id die happy if i saw her in a slingshot bikini.

Something like this? :FeelsGoodMan:

 

[Chel]

Something like this? :FeelsGoodMan:

YESSS!!!

 

[kupic]

...wrong thread maybe ?

 

[stoper]

@cusa, hooked on what, drugs?