- Apr 10, 2022
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But seriously, what is this udpates where you have 10 seconds of game ? You really have to stop at some point, either make a complete game that will be released in 10 years or abandon it, because it becomes unbearable.
- Thread starter CobraSGT
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hey
why i canot see the new scene and the storyline dont expand?
i have V.170 and story when sophia is on coach will finish
please help me
why i canot see the new scene and the storyline dont expand?
i have V.170 and story when sophia is on coach will finish
please help me
- Apr 10, 2022
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You must have like some, depending on the road you choose, some scenes are blocked.
The 2nd part not being ready to be finished, we are only at the beginning, therefore there is not yet the continuations of the various roads taken in the first part.
- Sep 23, 2020
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My thoughts on v0.170. This will contain few spoilers, so if you haven't played the scene, Don't read.
The scene is an improvement from the previous scene of the 2nd Job from Day 19. The visuals for the first time looked actually great in the 2nd job. Sophia looked excellent and the Outfit was indeed appealing in the event. In terms of writing too, the scene was done nicely, the progression was what most already expected to some extent. The scene didn't feel like it forced progress but rather it kept to the same theme for the most part and explored around it. It was a good way to make the event feel like a lot was happening but at the same time he didn't have to go above and beyond and do something that had not been done in the game. To me this is best scene of the day till now. I still expect Dylan Sophia in the evening to surpass it for me.
From what little we see of Leah, there not much to conclude about her, the only hint we got that Ava is MAYBE more lenient towards her daughter than the boys. So what her role in this story will be is still a mystery.
The boys' behaviour was just as expected after the first class. They are overwhelmed by this new feeling that they have discovered. And even when Sophia tries to teach using a more conventional method given her limitations with the banana and condom, the boys outright refuse it. They want her to keep using them as the models. Which is very in line with how you expect clueless teenagers to behave after their last class. The boys also seem really dedicated. They remembered everything from the first class and diligently picked up anything that was taught to them. Shows that they have a good grasping capacity and a genuine interest.
Interestingly in this scene Sophia also came prepared to show her breasts. She knew it would happen and she took her measures. The tape, personally speaking, i quite liked it. It was kinda sexy seeing her nips being covered by the tapes. She did her preparations, like the tapes, banana, condoms. She was willing to go the extra mile which is in line with how Sophia behaves throughout the game. Overly engrossed when it comes teaching or being the mother. She is too kind and emotionally driven for her own good. She came prepared to show her boobs and she did. Beyond that the boys took a bit of an unfair advantage of the call. And the final few renders without the skirt, was a good way to finish the scene on a high.
We see in this scene Sophia getting kinda turned on. Agreeing to bring Lingerie next time which might also be in part a result of her actually deriving excitement from this. She likes the idea of her serving as fap material to young boys which we already knew from the mall scene when she learns what the guys in school want to do with her. She even acknowledged it during one of the tasks if i remember right but not sure on that.
The dialogues in this scene are quite interesting as well. A bit about incest, pregnancy, Sophia getting somewhat turned on, her admitting the boys have dicks decent enough to satisfy her, handjob, blowjobs, breastfeeding, Talking about her landing strip. And this still doesn't cover all the kinds of things talked about.
Negatives
The dialogues seemed very convenient. I couldn't help but feel like Sophia's dialogues were basically just used to give hints to the boys in what to ask next. For eg. Sophia bringing up Blowjobs again and again in the lines, even though it didn't seem that necessary for her too, naturally this will get the boys to question her more about it and maybe someday ask her to show them. This is just one instance of the few other times this happens in the scene. Now it is a commonly used method, most writers basically use one character's dialogues as cue for the other to advance the plot. More often than not it becomes pretty obvious and it breaks the immersion as you see the writer is trying hard to drift the conversation in a certain direction.
Next criticism of the scene is the use of a single image for long segments of dialogue. It was impossible to ignore it. It was another thing that continuously pulled me out if the scene. This isn't L&P's style and it really doesn't go well with this novel. I understand his reasoning for that, also that the scene was big even without such renders. If he did make renders for conversations as well. The scene would have gone upto 270 with ease.
So in the end I'll give it a 7.6/10.
Regarding the possibilities of the next event in this route we can assume a lingerie show and since Jacob did touch her pussy, it is quite possible that the next class discussion will be about her vagina and we might get to finally see it but i will like to keep my hopes in check.
The scene is an improvement from the previous scene of the 2nd Job from Day 19. The visuals for the first time looked actually great in the 2nd job. Sophia looked excellent and the Outfit was indeed appealing in the event. In terms of writing too, the scene was done nicely, the progression was what most already expected to some extent. The scene didn't feel like it forced progress but rather it kept to the same theme for the most part and explored around it. It was a good way to make the event feel like a lot was happening but at the same time he didn't have to go above and beyond and do something that had not been done in the game. To me this is best scene of the day till now. I still expect Dylan Sophia in the evening to surpass it for me.
From what little we see of Leah, there not much to conclude about her, the only hint we got that Ava is MAYBE more lenient towards her daughter than the boys. So what her role in this story will be is still a mystery.
The boys' behaviour was just as expected after the first class. They are overwhelmed by this new feeling that they have discovered. And even when Sophia tries to teach using a more conventional method given her limitations with the banana and condom, the boys outright refuse it. They want her to keep using them as the models. Which is very in line with how you expect clueless teenagers to behave after their last class. The boys also seem really dedicated. They remembered everything from the first class and diligently picked up anything that was taught to them. Shows that they have a good grasping capacity and a genuine interest.
Interestingly in this scene Sophia also came prepared to show her breasts. She knew it would happen and she took her measures. The tape, personally speaking, i quite liked it. It was kinda sexy seeing her nips being covered by the tapes. She did her preparations, like the tapes, banana, condoms. She was willing to go the extra mile which is in line with how Sophia behaves throughout the game. Overly engrossed when it comes teaching or being the mother. She is too kind and emotionally driven for her own good. She came prepared to show her boobs and she did. Beyond that the boys took a bit of an unfair advantage of the call. And the final few renders without the skirt, was a good way to finish the scene on a high.
We see in this scene Sophia getting kinda turned on. Agreeing to bring Lingerie next time which might also be in part a result of her actually deriving excitement from this. She likes the idea of her serving as fap material to young boys which we already knew from the mall scene when she learns what the guys in school want to do with her. She even acknowledged it during one of the tasks if i remember right but not sure on that.
The dialogues in this scene are quite interesting as well. A bit about incest, pregnancy, Sophia getting somewhat turned on, her admitting the boys have dicks decent enough to satisfy her, handjob, blowjobs, breastfeeding, Talking about her landing strip. And this still doesn't cover all the kinds of things talked about.
Negatives
The dialogues seemed very convenient. I couldn't help but feel like Sophia's dialogues were basically just used to give hints to the boys in what to ask next. For eg. Sophia bringing up Blowjobs again and again in the lines, even though it didn't seem that necessary for her too, naturally this will get the boys to question her more about it and maybe someday ask her to show them. This is just one instance of the few other times this happens in the scene. Now it is a commonly used method, most writers basically use one character's dialogues as cue for the other to advance the plot. More often than not it becomes pretty obvious and it breaks the immersion as you see the writer is trying hard to drift the conversation in a certain direction.
Next criticism of the scene is the use of a single image for long segments of dialogue. It was impossible to ignore it. It was another thing that continuously pulled me out if the scene. This isn't L&P's style and it really doesn't go well with this novel. I understand his reasoning for that, also that the scene was big even without such renders. If he did make renders for conversations as well. The scene would have gone upto 270 with ease.
So in the end I'll give it a 7.6/10.
Regarding the possibilities of the next event in this route we can assume a lingerie show and since Jacob did touch her pussy, it is quite possible that the next class discussion will be about her vagina and we might get to finally see it but i will like to keep my hopes in check.
- May 15, 2022
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- Apr 9, 2018
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It doesn't matter, any scene with those kids will never be erotic to me. I'm never gonna get my Ellie shower scene..
- May 15, 2022
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That Final Save process is a poor creative choice. I tend to delete games for space, some are big and if you have 10 or so they add up. I remember playing this game most of the way through. I remember it being pretty good and lo-o-o-ong. So long it was the first game I've ever had the thought, good thing it's in two parts.
But no way I'm downloading, then running it for a hour to get to the final save just to get to the new parts.
Save process is of poor design, potentially a dealbreaker
But no way I'm downloading, then running it for a hour to get to the final save just to get to the new parts.
Save process is of poor design, potentially a dealbreaker
- Aug 3, 2018
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Here are my favorite quotes from vers 0.170. There is a WHOLE LOT of dialog in this event.
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- Aug 24, 2019
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You are just not on the routes related to this update and you have nothing. By clicking on the game menu and on the padlock in the gallery, you will see a scene from this update.
I will come back 5 years later to see if I can have a completed game or not
- May 15, 2022
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The worst part about adult games and especially this one is the release formular. Instead of a whole game you only get parts each months or every 3-6 month etc. Scenes that want you to see more and play more.
With the start of Part 2 everything works great. The scenes the quality even the animations. And it will get leweder which each scene from now on. But man do I know want to play the next Sam/Sophia part or the Dylan/Sophia part or the next AIDEN part....
Cant he not just hire 200 people and be done with thegame in like 6 Months? XD
With the start of Part 2 everything works great. The scenes the quality even the animations. And it will get leweder which each scene from now on. But man do I know want to play the next Sam/Sophia part or the Dylan/Sophia part or the next AIDEN part....
Cant he not just hire 200 people and be done with thegame in like 6 Months? XD
At this point the creater is just milking his/her patreon sponser with minimium affort.
5years long with so little content.
Probably a hour of work then call it a day.
- Sep 7, 2019
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If I ever became a billionaire, I think that I would bankroll a big budget studio to make an erotic VN like this, but with cutscenes and actors and all that. I guess the closest irl equivalent I can think of would be Quantic Dream (the Farenheit/Indigo Prophecy/Heavy Rain/Beyond: Two Souls/Detroit Become Human guys).
Combined Edition
Updated to v0.170
What's New:
1. Included Everything from the beginning to final update. (No need any save export)
2. Gallery also included all scenerios. (Also some bonus)
3. Added a Stories menu, which included some Fan Stories. (More will be added in the future).
- Jul 17, 2019
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thanks for using your first post for a useless comment
- May 15, 2022
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