As usual, visually stunning.
The update was pretty well written (a couple of obvious typos and awkward wordings). I thought overall the dialogue between Marie and Dylan was mostly sweet and the events were even somewhat plausible.
The problem is, these scenes offer literally nothing to the main storyline, and that's because AWAM doesn't actually have a main storyline. It actually has about a dozen or so different stories about the same people happening in the same place at the same time. It's sad the author can't just focus on telling a good story.
Another problem is, how many good stories have you read that asked you to wiggle your mouse really fast in order to turn the page?
And of course, I do wonder if we needed to know that Claire has n3o-n@z! sympathies. I do also wonder if Sophia thought you know what, I'm not going to patronize this business anymore cuz, wow. But no, she chuckles about it and carries on as if she wasn't really bothered by it.
