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As per Sophia’s description Mr Walker (Stella’s father) had an eye on her a few years before the defloration event and she was in love with him for those few years as well. At the party there had been six months since he divorced his ex wife (Stella’s mother) which indicates that they are free to “release tension”…Although I don't play for the incest, I think your sequence of events reads & flows better than the extant version. There has been a lack of awareness shown throughout AWAM, IMO, of what leads to sexual situations & causes them to progress. Atmosphere & overall moods of the participants are of vital importance & it usually takes more than alcohol to create the necessary conditions. Even one-night stands require more than a sickly-sweet stream of compliments & that would be true even for someone as shallow as Sophia has proven to be.
If everything that was going to happen had occurred in the original 'relaxing' bath, (with husband & guest downstairs notwithstanding), it would have made sense, in AWAM terms at least. As it is Sophia, after the day she's had, would be knackered after returning from the club, not in the mood for another dip into water, even with her cleanliness OCD. As for Dylan, it's past his bedtime. I'm in danger of talking realism again but instead let's call it logic & good story-telling.
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