- Feb 12, 2021
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My expectations have been lower than alligator piss for years now. I check in about once a month to see in what unique ways this dev has somehow fucked up even worse than last time and they almost never disappoint.
This update felt and looked like a fan story, it felt like fan art. Which, if that speeds up development would be great but it's it's still slow for what you get. This dev either needs to truncate the story massively or bring aboard some more help. Period. It's that or it's still looking at a 2050 finish date...or most likely abandonment. Something has to break there.
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As for the update, I'll only give myself an 80% correct score this time as no cum touched her face but she did taste it. I called that as the "taboo" act.
Sad how a guy that visitd about once a month can see a single teaser and tell you exactly what will happen, right? That's how bad and predictable this dev is.
L&P, male or female, has a massive shota fetish and it shows here. Sophianonce again walks into a situation fully ready to slut-it-up only to act chaste most of the time. She remains bipolar disorder in her behavior but slightly less here due to the devs particular fetish.
"Touch the fabric" comes back, lol. I still have zero idea wtf is up with that besides a way to graze her body, which would necessitate Sophia being a moron to not notice so she's still just allowing boys (these kids, her son or Sam) to touch her. Again, making her schizo.
The bag & rope feels like the worst Chekhov's Gun ever. Gee, I wonder if the rope will ever come into play in 18 years from now?
Animations were much worse but I've never felt those were worth the development time so that's fine. Not a big deal and I don't even think this VN needs them if the choice is a full month for a single good animation or a week for that one.
I'll maintain that at this pace if she ever does fuck before this gets abandoned it'll be very anticlimactic due to the pacing. Like JOHN, either being very slow per update or stretching the story out for 30 years will kill that moment...which is likely the plan. Sadly. There is too much they set-up for the pace of release to not take another 20 years at least...and it's getting worse, not better, with time.
Rather than guess the next act/scene maybe I should guess how the story will somehow regress while moving forward because that seems to be the pattern here? The other is too easy. This dev is too predictable.
This update felt and looked like a fan story, it felt like fan art. Which, if that speeds up development would be great but it's it's still slow for what you get. This dev either needs to truncate the story massively or bring aboard some more help. Period. It's that or it's still looking at a 2050 finish date...or most likely abandonment. Something has to break there.
SPOILERS AHEAD
SPOILERS AHEAD
SPOILERS AHEAD
WARNING!
SPOILERS...
As for the update, I'll only give myself an 80% correct score this time as no cum touched her face but she did taste it. I called that as the "taboo" act.
Sad how a guy that visitd about once a month can see a single teaser and tell you exactly what will happen, right? That's how bad and predictable this dev is.
L&P, male or female, has a massive shota fetish and it shows here. Sophianonce again walks into a situation fully ready to slut-it-up only to act chaste most of the time. She remains bipolar disorder in her behavior but slightly less here due to the devs particular fetish.
"Touch the fabric" comes back, lol. I still have zero idea wtf is up with that besides a way to graze her body, which would necessitate Sophia being a moron to not notice so she's still just allowing boys (these kids, her son or Sam) to touch her. Again, making her schizo.
The bag & rope feels like the worst Chekhov's Gun ever. Gee, I wonder if the rope will ever come into play in 18 years from now?
Animations were much worse but I've never felt those were worth the development time so that's fine. Not a big deal and I don't even think this VN needs them if the choice is a full month for a single good animation or a week for that one.
I'll maintain that at this pace if she ever does fuck before this gets abandoned it'll be very anticlimactic due to the pacing. Like JOHN, either being very slow per update or stretching the story out for 30 years will kill that moment...which is likely the plan. Sadly. There is too much they set-up for the pace of release to not take another 20 years at least...and it's getting worse, not better, with time.
Rather than guess the next act/scene maybe I should guess how the story will somehow regress while moving forward because that seems to be the pattern here? The other is too easy. This dev is too predictable.