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DurumMurud

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Technically they are not shotas anymore because they cum. You don't cum until you are 13/15, and for the 9/18 months it is still transparent and very low in ammount until you start doing real white volume, and that happens in the 14/16 age gap. Yes, you orgasm before that, but nothing comes out of the pipi.

I would also talk about the cock sizes, as the cock grows also with the androgens that makes cum posible, they are synced, but I understand he is doing an overall cock inflation to the novel starting with Dylan pool size, then the stupid size of DeShawn (the sauna version was good but the shower was ridiculous), and now the teenagers (previous shotas).

Overall very bad update. He is afraid to do some real sex because he is starting to fear the consequences on doing under age porn, but at the same time his need to increase in monthly payments had made him go shady with cliff hangers and shit, but at the same time he remains milking and stale for at least a year and a half (min 5 updates) before "something" really happens.

The overall quality time dedicated to the novel is going down. The text was boring and really bad, all those lines after lines after lines of reading about hormones and lingerie, soooo much unnecesary filling to make the update go for months instead of mixing it with the other and moving forward to interesting stuff. Sophia remains stupid "I put boundaries that last less than 15 minutes to anyone" kills Sophia, she is so fucking dumb at this point that she is not relatable, from godess to average stupid bitch, the destrucction of the main character.

The other thing I saw is that he is planning to increase the milking. He "introduced" another character, Leah. He introduced another plot (his boyfriend), and he is planning to waste time on that plot. He basically emptied the house and left a chance of Sophia + Leah alone with the "forgotten item", just to fuel that plot that no one asked for in a novel that is already overflowing in useless plots.

Unless "the guy" Leah wants to fuck is Aidern, or Zac, or Sam, or one of the pijama party girls boyfriend, or some plot twist like that, and when she returns home it's really worth something, or this guy is actually laughing on absolute everyones face with this shit novel and deserves a real life visit lol. I wonder how he looks like, my bet is a fat beard weirdo, specially after reading his ideas of gym people through Sophia's words on the bycicle, classical nerd dream that bombshells would think like him about hot strong men hahaha.
 

dan_roger69

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She should've let them see her change.. that's the only disappointment for me.
Now the cliffhanger..next update Sophia will go back to ava's house and maybe ava and the boys will be back before she could leave ? Will Leah be involved this time ? But again l&P said Leah won't engage in this event. Its still a part of this event. I honestly hope the boys will be involved & help Sophia but in exchange maybe they'll tell her to go further ? :coffee:
L&P is setting things up for Playday 16 - Monday where there are several Hot events. One of those events is the 2nd side job. In an older post L&P mentioned there will be a big hetero event on PD 16 and it could be with the 3 Apostles - Kissing Lessons, Female Anatomy (Vag), Handjob, a Blolwjob and on PD 16 she will be naked.
 

kingkorai

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Technically they are not shotas anymore because they cum. You don't cum until you are 13/15, and for the 9/18 months it is still transparent and very low in ammount until you start doing real white volume, and that happens in the 14/16 age gap. Yes, you orgasm before that, but nothing comes out of the pipi.

I would also talk about the cock sizes, as the cock grows also with the androgens that makes cum posible, they are synced, but I understand he is doing an overall cock inflation to the novel starting with Dylan pool size, then the stupid size of DeShawn (the sauna version was good but the shower was ridiculous), and now the teenagers (previous shotas).

Overall very bad update. He is afraid to do some real sex because he is starting to fear the consequences on doing under age porn, but at the same time his need to increase in monthly payments had made him go shady with cliff hangers and shit, but at the same time he remains milking and stale for at least a year and a half (min 5 updates) before "something" really happens.

The overall quality time dedicated to the novel is going down. The text was boring and really bad, all those lines after lines after lines of reading about hormones and lingerie, soooo much unnecesary filling to make the update go for months instead of mixing it with the other and moving forward to interesting stuff. Sophia remains stupid "I put boundaries that last less than 15 minutes to anyone" kills Sophia, she is so fucking dumb at this point that she is not relatable, from godess to average stupid bitch, the destrucction of the main character.

The other thing I saw is that he is planning to increase the milking. He "introduced" another character, Leah. He introduced another plot (his boyfriend), and he is planning to waste time on that plot. He basically emptied the house and left a chance of Sophia + Leah alone with the "forgotten item", just to fuel that plot that no one asked for in a novel that is already overflowing in useless plots.

Unless "the guy" Leah wants to fuck is Aidern, or Zac, or Sam, or one of the pijama party girls boyfriend, or some plot twist like that, and when she returns home it's really worth something, or this guy is actually laughing on absolute everyones face with this shit novel and deserves a real life visit lol. I wonder how he looks like, my bet is a fat beard weirdo, specially after reading his ideas of gym people through Sophia's words on the bycicle, classical nerd dream that bombshells would think like him about hot strong men hahaha.
why did he change the boys? I think it completely defeat the point of shota
 

Taker Fan

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L&P is setting things up for Playday 16 - Monday where there are several Hot events. One of those events is the 2nd side job. In an older post L&P mentioned there will be a big hetero event on PD 16 and it could be with the 3 Apostles - Kissing Lessons, Female Anatomy (Vag), Handjob, a Blolwjob and on PD 16 she will be naked.
3 Apostels (y) :LOL:

But is there a 2nd Sidejob Event on PD 16?
 

tofhdns

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L&P is setting things up for Playday 16 - Monday where there are several Hot events. One of those events is the 2nd side job. In an older post L&P mentioned there will be a big hetero event on PD 16 and it could be with the 3 Apostles - Kissing Lessons, Female Anatomy (Vag), Handjob, a Blolwjob and on PD 16 she will be naked.
Ellie is the main character that day.
 

DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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L&P is setting things up for Playday 16 - Monday where there are several Hot events. One of those events is the 2nd side job. In an older post L&P mentioned there will be a big hetero event on PD 16 and it could be with the 3 Apostles - Kissing Lessons, Female Anatomy (Vag), Handjob, a Blolwjob and on PD 16 she will be naked.
Isn’t that day like 10 years away? Unless he does a time jump which he definately should
 
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LSC82

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This is an erotic novel, not porn.... This is not a bad game for an erotic novel! 150% :WeSmart: :coffee:
This must be the most sex averse erotic novel in history :LOL:

Yes, it can be a erotic novel(if you focus on a single character it's a story about how a married woman gets seduced into a new relationship), but a erotic novel that moonlights as a corruption game...

But with this enormous list of characters it's too unfocused to actually work as a erotic novel, a character takes years to appear again after his/her latest scene.

If you chose several characters... it becomes a corruption slutathon... but it doesn't excel here either, because it doesn't deliver the nasty shit that a corruption story is all about.
 

dan_roger69

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Ellie is the main character that day.
Nope. As per L&P several events happen on PD 16:
[1st big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days from PD 12]
[2nd big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
[2nd lesbian sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
Ellie has events but Sophia does too.

  • "Something definitely really "wild" what is not with the husband [...] and it will be something no one will definitely expect at the moment!" as per L&P quote. Also "... there will be a very hot and big hetero scene.'" (source)
 

tofhdns

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Nope. As per L&P several events happen on PD 16:
[1st big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days from PD 12]
[2nd big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
[2nd lesbian sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
PD 16 - Day 23 - Monday
[1st big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
[2nd big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
[2nd lesbian sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
 

dan_roger69

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PD 16 - Day 23 - Monday
[1st big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
[2nd big hetero sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
[2nd lesbian sex scene with an important character: Within the next 4 playable days]
Ellie has events but Sophia does too. The entire day is not dedicated to Ellie. Ellie events will be split into 3 routes so depending on your choices you'll see many events for Ellie on PD 16 but they will be alternative routes.

  • "Something definitely really "wild" what is not with the husband [...] and it will be something no one will definitely expect at the moment!" as per L&P quote. Also "... there will be a very hot and big hetero scene.'" (source)
 

Fendrall

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I just finished watching this update, I think it's totally useless.... the side jobs are totally useless, they're just a waste of time. I feel like I'm seeing a shrimp taking one step forward and five steps back. But that's not enough, LP evidently not satisfied with the mess of the story introduced another character (Leah), thus adding mess to mess. I am convinced that this game, for one reason or another, will never see an end.
 

tofhdns

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Ellie has events but Sophia does too. The entire day is not dedicated to Ellie. Ellie events will be split into 3 routes so depending on your choices you'll see many events for Ellie on PD 16 but they will be alternative routes.

  • "Something definitely really "wild" what is not with the husband [...] and it will be something no one will definitely expect at the moment!" as per L&P quote. Also "... there will be a very hot and big hetero scene.'" (source)
That doesn't mean there won't be a Sophia event.

There's also a possibility that Sophia will play a role when Ellie meets Logan.

I'm saying that the most likely hetero event (biggest) is Ellie/Logan, not a second side job.

(I wrote the article before yours was edited, but when I posted it, the content after yours was edited was reflected.)
 
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