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AlfredBundy4

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Feb 12, 2021
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Next update in a nutshell:
Teasing - Groping - Flashing - Stripping - Rubbing - Jizzing - Oldie dying - Sophia crying
Literally. As usual she'll put herself into a sexual situation willingly only to "snap out of it" and feel shame after...

...and do it again an hour later with another dude.

It's the weakest, laziest form of writing ever. Nobody in this VN behaves like a human, even for porn logic. Sophia especially is like an alien. I've always said she's written like an alien with BPD or multiple personality disorder, lol.

Like the alien is a slut but the alien took over the body of a housewife and those two are in am eternal struggle for her pussy, lol.

It's long beyond lame and annoying. This VN would be over with if the dev wasn't a milker and had the writing chops of an average 14yo.
 

Deniroeste

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Apr 10, 2023
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Literally. As usual she'll put herself into a sexual situation willingly only to "snap out of it" and feel shame after...

...and do it again an hour later with another dude.

It's the weakest, laziest form of writing ever. Nobody in this VN behaves like a human, even for porn logic. Sophia especially is like an alien. I've always said she's written like an alien with BPD or multiple personality disorder, lol.

Like the alien is a slut but the alien took over the body of a housewife and those two are in am eternal struggle for her pussy, lol.

It's long beyond lame and annoying. This VN would be over with if the dev wasn't a milker and had the writing chops of an average 14yo.




You have explained it more clearly than anyone. I really congratulate you. No matter who it bothers, the development of the story's plot is increasingly weak and poor. A slut who struggles to appear to be a great lady. An ignorant person who pretends to be "cultured". And all this is repeated over and over again, year after year.
 

XaGnard

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What main story?
Patricia? No
Dylan / Ellie? Absolutely not
Dylan / Amber? Absolutely not
Liam GW Path? Who is interested in this Path?
How someone can seriously stand here and say that Dylan and Ellie are not part of the main story is a mystery to me. The game is about Sophia in her role as a wife and mother. Therefore, The game has to place a corresponding emphasis on the characters that make Sophia a wife and mother. Without that, there won't be any exciting stories and twists in the main story, since the game would consist only of disjointed side stories.
 

moovigym

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Nov 27, 2021
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Literally. As usual she'll put herself into a sexual situation willingly only to "snap out of it" and feel shame after...

...and do it again an hour later with another dude.

It's the weakest, laziest form of writing ever. Nobody in this VN behaves like a human, even for porn logic. Sophia especially is like an alien. I've always said she's written like an alien with BPD or multiple personality disorder, lol.

Like the alien is a slut but the alien took over the body of a housewife and those two are in am eternal struggle for her pussy, lol.

It's long beyond lame and annoying. This VN would be over with if the dev wasn't a milker and had the writing chops of an average 14yo.

Sophia's magical words "I'm married :cry: "
 

Chandler_Bing

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Aug 16, 2021
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Literally. As usual she'll put herself into a sexual situation willingly only to "snap out of it" and feel shame after...

...and do it again an hour later with another dude.

It's the weakest, laziest form of writing ever. Nobody in this VN behaves like a human, even for porn logic. Sophia especially is like an alien. I've always said she's written like an alien with BPD or multiple personality disorder, lol.

Like the alien is a slut but the alien took over the body of a housewife and those two are in am eternal struggle for her pussy, lol.

It's long beyond lame and annoying. This VN would be over with if the dev wasn't a milker and had the writing chops of an average 14yo.
If you care that much about logical plot progression, maybe Adult VNs aren't for you.. You would get what you want on Literotica, there's a plethora of content there. Asking logic from games like these is trivial ..
 
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AlfredBundy4

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If you care that much about logical plot progression, maybe Adult VNs aren't for you.. You would get what you want on Literotica, there's a plethora of content there. Asking logic from games like these is trivial ..
It's not an issue of logic. I mention porn logic every time I talk about how insane these characters are written. Don't try to play that card, lol. Yes, porn stories always deserve the caveat of it being porn. Not here.

*even for porn logic* they behave like weird, BPD aliens.

It's mainly a Sophia problem but not exclusive to her either. As weird and as much as she will shift tone, action and blame every 5 minutes of her life the others are just as poorly written.

It's insane how the other people in her hourly trysts totally accept her weird changes in behavior.
A teenage boy has her tits in his mouth, has her naked pussy in front of her and never tries to push it even a bit.
A guy and his girlfriend has her in a gym shower with his dick on her hand and neither he or the GF try to push it a bit.

Etc.

Why? Dev is a bad writer/planner. Also because teasing is one of their main kinks (that and shota/age play) but mostly due to being a dogshit writer.
 
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