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maybes4

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His english is good enough to speak and read. And definitely that makes him more adept than me at languages since I only know english really well, but he can speak english and german pretty much fluently.

Still his writing has either grammar issues, or the wrong use of a word sometimes. At other times it was the correct use of a word but it would be a word so rarely used? or rarely used in that context? that it made it sound or look weird... it didn't sound like something a person would naturally say when speaking etc. can't remember specific examples because i deleted our discord conversations.
Out of curiosity, did you do it for free?
 

maybes4

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after dylan defend her, she already starting to like and view dylan as a man and she allow him to touch her arse cheek maybe update 0.130 is turn point for sophia
What happens if he lose the fight?
Dont know why the scene didn't appear to me.
 

L&P's Father-in-Law

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If i was doing the apostle scene/tutoring scene, I'd probably have done something with a single father and maybe 1 older boy shes tutoring, and then think of subtle ways she lets her guard down, or some accidental way in which things begin to get more inappropriate, either something that started with the single dad, or started with the son and escalated to the father etc. So I just dislike the whole dynamic... or maybe do a whole twin boys thing, and one twin is perverted and she keeps confusing them.

The big problem for me is even if they didn't appear to be young and the models looked a bit older, the whole premise is kind of a retarded trope. Even if you say these boys are 16-18, and even if they looked 16-18, they would still have the emotional and sexual development of 5 year olds because they call tits "ROUND BALLS".... this is enough to signal it's pedophilia for me. It was written in a way to satisfy the Shota kink... no one can deny this. If infact these boys were experienced about sex based on their ages and things were just a bit more realistic? instead of exaggerated... then maybe L&P could argue "that wasn't my intention when I wrote this scene".

So like when I play this game based on the attitudes and models of most of the characters its at least beleivable they aren't underage *most* of the time. Instead there is just a huge age gap between Sophia and the other characters. But, for the apostles it's not believable.... if you really wanted them to be totally ignorant of sex? then there are ways to do that without making them sound 7 years old, and also I'd probably have made their models look older if I was going that route so there would be no confusion on their ages.

I'm not playing this route, and honestly for all our sakes I hope it's deleted from the game because it's just adding time to each update... and we already have plenty of teacher/student opportunities since shes already a teacher at a school... of the three job routes
It's the branch where he advanced the most in such a low amount of time. He called it "FREAKIN HOT". It's a kink for him, for sure. Good luck taking this out of the VN.
 

DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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Do we know if sophia will be going back to that art class or not. even if she did it probly would be like 2 years or longer away. Did anyone else think this could gradually become an art class gangbang?
 
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People can anyone tell me wtf is going on and after an update i have this problem right here,and it's not the only game that giving me this fucked up text.
~Thnx in advance~
 

Jack Adams

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Respectfully, what part is outdated? Ellie is a few months from finishing high school. And with her tattoos, reasonably 18, as I state. So Julia is 18 as well. And Dylan, Sam and Zac 17.

If you have more recent information, feel free to share.
It is all good, my friend. We are ostensibly in agreement. Ellie is well over 18 year old and Dylan well over 17. The real question (in light of this ineluctable evidence) is: If L&P finds himself in a position that he must demonstrate that all the Parker and Robinson kids are past their 18th birthday, how will he do it? Will he develop a group birthday scene for Ellie and Dylan (born nearly on the same calendar day) replete with a Sam celebration? This will fly in the face of all existing canon calendar landmarks. Or... will he painstakingly go through his script to ensure that no existing outlier could create a future problem?
This line of questioning is just meant as entertainment between us and not meant to cast derision of any kind.
The hoplite boys (Ava Myers kids) are another matter meant for a separate comment.
Thank you for the reply, Jack.
 

Lockyn87

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went through some comments. seems like still no notable vag sex. can someone tell me if she has at least given handies dylan and sam or ellie?
 

Sabertooth__

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The amount of controversy for the 2nd side job. Honestly it's being focused on way too much considering it's an optional event and you don't even need to see one render from it if you skip the job. To me the eldest looked like 15 honestly. And I never really felt they were lying about not knowing anything, it can very well be possible that they know nothing about sex-ed. There mother has been scaring them with the name of God. They don't go to school so they can't get such kind of knowledge and even porn has not been an option for these kids. I feel it could very well be possible, I have come across people at my school who knew nothing about stuff like this till they were 16 and they were from normal background unlike here.

Also the children took advantage of her and most likely that will be the theme of this storyline. Those kids will like to explore their curiosity regarding the female body and it will be on Sophia. For me it would have been disturbing if Sophia used them to satisfy her urges but that's absolutely not the case.

Also if L&P has that kink then it's fine. It's his game and I believe he should have the right to make something into this game even he likes. Plus it's not being forced on us. If I make a cake for my friends I would atleast like to have a small part of it. This is the small part that I feel L&P should be allowed.

Edit : I just searched the definition of paedophilia to be sure about whether the scene was paedophilic or not and I think the scene was anything but that.

paedophilia
sexual feelings directed towards children.

It is sexual feelings directed towards children not the other way round.
 
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Haegemon

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i agree with that plus alot are upset about the fact that she's gone from barely done anything with people closer to her. To grabbing dicks of them who she just met.
It depends of the player choices but at this point she did some stuff. I wouldn't call this exactly a porn game though but an eroge game.
 
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nytep

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where is the right place to download the new version for android?!
Use the link on the first page. It takes you to a comment that includes an updated mega link.

You have to download .115 and .130.

Then open both and allow access to files.

Then play all the way through .115

It's a little annoying though because you can't pick multiple save points. So depending on where you want to end up in .130 you might have to run through .115 several times.

I just finished .130 and I was locked out of a Dylan scene because I missed a scene in the previous version.
 

GingerSweetGirl

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His english is good enough to speak and read. And definitely that makes him more adept than me at languages since I only know english really well, but he can speak english and german pretty much fluently.

Still his writing has either grammar issues, or the wrong use of a word sometimes. At other times it was the correct use of a word but it would be a word so rarely used? or rarely used in that context? that it made it sound or look weird... it didn't sound like something a person would naturally say when speaking etc. can't remember specific examples because i deleted our discord conversations.
I can totally see this. He's clearly a guy with a strong formal education in English, but the writing screws him up. As I said in my review (about 24 hours ago, and 1,000 posts ago) the dialog and translation felt very stiff/formal. When I localize for other developers, this is a common problem and I can understand why. But L&P takes it to another level because I totally noticed him correctly using a couple VERY advanced words/phrases that I had to actually look up. I mentioned that I was torn by this because on one hand it's super impressive to see that kind of dedication, but on the other it was so formal as to make reading the dialog not fun.

In 0.130 this is most clearly shown in the art modeling scene. The dialog from Xavier, especially while modeling, is very very advanced. On one hand this makes sense because he's a teacher with advanced training in classical art. But on the other hand, the dialog was so dense that even I, someone who takes the time to read everything, struggled to follow it at times. And...it...just...kept...going. Any writer, in any profession, needs to keep their audience in mind when writing. This can be difficult when you need to convey complicated ideas, but it's important to do so. In America that means to write at a ~7th grade reading level (higher or lower depending on your region). But during the art modeling scene, the dialog was a mixture of advanced English, and poor translation, so it was difficult to follow without re-reading the lines.

That must have been a very, VERY, difficult scene for everyone involved in the translation/localization.
 
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