VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.215f] [Lust & Passion]

[L&P's Father-in-Law]

Now, after the update, the only explanation for using the leather suit and motorcycle is preventing Sophia from leaving the workshop early. No memories of her youth, nothing like that. BS.
From the beginning it was premeditation on Aiden's part, Aiden's will to keep her there as long as possible, 2.5 hours.

The story of how that leather suit came in the update was like this:

L&P seaches for some assets.
Notices that leather suit.
"Damn that would look nice, let me find a way to put this into this update even though it's not needed at all"
"Oh shit some pigeons too"
"And a park"
"And godrays"

This update, now that some days have passed, was a bit of letdown storywise. Clear as day that there was no story/script written for this update, just a rough draft that he rushed to get it done.

 

[L&P's Father-in-Law]

Just a reminder that L&p said (talking about playable day 12,13 and 14):

“All I can say is that there are some really hot scenes planned for the next 3 playable days. Especially end of playable day 13 and 14! Of course we're talking here about more and much more daring scenes then we got now. Mostly hetero.”

End of day 13 is mostly Dylan events.
And for day 14 we have the museum guys with Patricia and the first time job (that I’m sure for now).

So for those who think Sophia corruption is suddenly going too fast, prepare yourself.

Dude, you're not even going to see those updates. It's going to take 4 or 5 years to get to playable day 14.

 

[L&P's Father-in-Law]

The information regarding the event with the children explains a lot. Perhaps it is actually his personal kink and therefore he implemented it in this much too exaggerated way that does not fit at all with the rest of the story. Too bad, I guess that really means that there is no chance that he will correct this bad decision.

From my point of view, the events described from a different point of view as Sophia's were a real plus for the game. In the long run, it just gets boring to go through the same monologue over and over again, describing Sophia's inner moral struggle with all the situations she get into. I don't know how many times I've confirmed that it's perfectly fine for her to show her breasts around.

I was most disappointed by Dylan/Sophia event this time. It's crazy how many points we' ve had to acquire so far in this story line, and yet somehow it's only progressing in the tiniest of steps. I played through the game in sequence and was really annoyed at the end that now, completely out of nowhere, these childern have suddenly outpaced by far all other stories with male involvement except liam (whose story i don't play).

So far, L&P has always managed to deliver content that motivates to wait for the next update. This time I'm just annoyed, also about the fact that I actually donated money for this game in the past.

L&P asked which route people liked the most. Dylan was one of them. It's obvious that L&P will drag that carrot in front of dylan's fans eyes for as long as he can.

 

[hzjujk]

And the 4th task.
And the 2nd side job, day 3...


For a moment I misread and I thought you were proposing they play a daring game during the event.
Then I thought, well why not. It's one of the cliché that have not been used yet.

We know that there will be alcohol involved and maybe they will be start remembering the good old times in college (dunno if Andrew and Cathy were also at the same college) and yada yada yada one memory leads to another, first there are jokes then something a little more daring.
Obviously, I'm just talking about something "light", no sex, no explicit nudity etc etc, but allusive enough to get them in the mood and close as couples again.
Personally, I don't like much the true or dare cliché, but maybe done tastefully as often L&P can do, it could be something that helps to get acquainted to the characters and set the wheels in motion for later.

This invitation came as a surprise because it was not part of L & P's planning for the evening so far. At the moment I assume that this will only be a small event. If only because, when it got big, it would collide with the Sam event. Without new information, the speculations are exhausted for me. Good night.

 

[Lust&Pateron]

That means you lie ppl here also u pretending that you are against him for days now you showed your true face.

And I don't see any DEVELOPER, MODDER or any tag close to your name.
That means you are same liar like L&P
Or maybe you are him.

This is an English forum, please speak English so we can understand what you are trying to say

 

[Bill_Buttlicker]

Seriously, why'd some of you SOFT guys reporting comments ??

I know you are desperate but can ANY of my friend and me write something bad or negative BUT TRUTH bout this liar developer without some of ya apologist cry to admin or gets triggered ??

That's just shows how some ppl are liability and weak charcaters in real life.

I always respect good and bad opinions as long as they are indirect not offensive or insulting (tagged me first) toward me.
But there is no respect to ppl like you.

I dunno what happen to this site it was beautiful when me, my few friends and boyfriend were here at the beginning.
Now its filled with weak personalites who can't stand others ppl opinions GOOD OR BAD.

F95z site/forum turned into bunch of feminist behavior. I am more MAN than some of ya here who report comments.

Respect to others like always.

Just because you think it's the truth doesn't mean it is. If the comments are being reported it's because they most likely go against the rules or are just more of the same repetitive nonsense posted over and over again (liar, milker, small update, game sucks, liar, milker, small update, game sucks, ....etc)

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

I have read the thread since the release of version 0.130.

What did we talk about? Problems of legality, of the presence or not of L&P, of what is bad or not bad. Everyone seems to forget that what they say is based on HIS tastes! I don't blame anyone, I don't judge anyone.
But just say thank you L&P for the quality of this update. The educational work, both in the scene with the children and in Xavier's workshop, is particularly well done. A tribute to teachers, whatever their field.
Thanks for the work on the renders. The light, the details of the paintings made by Xavier's teenagers, the historical details, everything indicates a desire to build a lesson (and it does not matter if "artists of art historians" are discussing on a brushstroke or a date).

Just say thank you ... It's that easy, even though I'm an invisible voice among messages ...

Welcome back - have missed your reasoned and rational contributions.

 

[Alley_Cat]

Wtf? If thats Amber with Nat's tattoo, what does that mean? Is her husband in on this as well?

I think L&P needs to update his game and fix this.

But it's not Amber with Nat's tattoo. It's Nat with Nat's tattoo. Nat even has the event in v.150 for her to have a reason to be there, unlike Amber.

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

You didn’t notice, but I noticed during the passage that Sofia reasoned that she was in an art workshop incogneto. Therefore, when one of the guys calls her by her name, I personally do not understand at all that Sofia had absolutely no reaction! What can you think about it, I can’t even imagine! Perhaps this is a mistake, I will write L&P, I will ask. Because this is a very unclear situation.

Thanks - it would be interesting to find out if it was an inadvertent mistake, (which can happen, especially if got 995 Renders to translate). Or if it was a deliberate slip. a subtle hint of what is to come. I obviously hope it is the latter!

 

[Bill_Buttlicker]

Thanks - it would be interesting to find out if it was an inadvertent mistake, (which can happen, especially if got 995 Renders to translate). Or if it was a deliberate slip. a subtle hint of what is to come. I obviously hope it is the latter!

It's not a mistake. The instructor introduced her to the class by her first name.

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

I once asked L&P that if Sophia will ever get tattoos or piercings and he said maybe in the end and on another route.
So just asking if anyone of you would be interested to see Sophia in tattoos and piercings?
As for me, I would like it to some extent.

Heck No!! Sophia has been finally depicted to all as the Goddess that I have long believed her to truly be.
One does not defile Aphrodite with such tacky adornments!!

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

It's not a mistake. The instructor introduced her to the class by her first name.

Thanks - I had posted my reply to the earlier post when trying to catch up on posts in the thread, before I saw your post with the screenshot.

 

[Alley_Cat]

Heck No!! Sophia has been finally depicted to all as the Goddess that I have long believed her to truly be.
One does not defile Aphrodite with such tacky adornments!!

Not just that, but after the fit she throws at Ellie on day 18 at the pool, you can tell Sophia is against tattoos

 

[dolfe67]

Not just that, but after the fit she throws at Ellie on day 18 at the pool, you can tell Sophia is against tattoos

And for this reason that makes it hotter if she gets one on the corruption path. But that's only dreaming

Or at least wearing a collar saying "Aiden's property"

 

[Deleted member 3325933]

LOL

and you have collected 900 likes within 4 months it tells me that you have 5 profiles here like many,
them burners , and from EVERY burner you put few likes to yourself on every comment you post just to pile up number and popularity

So though I am not a fan of Lusty all he did was make a statement of fact. You then go all nuclear on him and do exactly what YOU complain about. Just a little thin skinned there I see. If you can't take the heat then use the ignore button, leave the forum or get a thicker skin. There,YOU have 3 choices which is more that L&P usually gives.

 

[Deleted member 3325933]

Enlightening. Thank you very much for the history lesson.

History lesson Hmmm: Let's ask 100 people from each of these countries what they think about the time frame 1933- 1945 - China; Korea (Both and start in 1915); Philippines; Thailand; Myanmar; India; Indonesia, Malaya; Taiwan; Vietnam; Singapore; Australia; and New Zealand. Just Sayin'!

Please note this post is not directed at Lusty and actually supporting him against ridiculous statements from Yakusai No Akuma
Edited 23 Jun


Anticipate this will get the hook.

 

[Deleted member 3325933]

Heck No!! Sophia has been finally depicted to all as the Goddess that I have long believed her to truly be.
One does not defile Aphrodite with such tacky adornments!!

NEVER on SOPHIA!!!!!!!!!!

Tattoo: I know people like them and once again that is their choice. However, time will fade it and it AIN'T no Michelangelo, Rembrandt, or Donatello working on you (possible Turtles here). It is Fred (hopefully not Flintstone). Just my Hippie opinion but, people are way better lookin than what Fred can do.

Side note: I have read of a Canadian researcher working on an inexpensive cream that will stimulate the bodies natural rejection of the tattoo. No scars etc... So, especially for the buffooned Tats and the oh he/she was an asshole and need to remove that name NOW. This could be a godsend.

 

[ancienregimele]

While I agree with you and ancienregimele in that the balance is vital for this game, the complicating factor is the self-imposed time limit of 30 days. If the idea is that Sophia will start Day 1 at 0% corruption and will reach 100% corruption by Day 30, that will necessitate some major jumps in her actions. Playable Day 12 will probably be remembered a turning point in the game for this reason as she's done a lot of things this day that she wouldn't have done a day earlier. Putting aside the 2nd side job, her behavior all day has been at the extreme end of what most of us find believable. For some it has been immersion breaking. However, if L&P sticks with a believable progression I don't think he can make the 30 day window (without adjustments like more time jumps). But that could also make for a game paced so painfully slow that few would want to play it.

I've said it before and I'll say it again, one of the lessons learned is that starting a corruption game with a character as innocent as Sophia is really difficult. In the future I would like to see more corruption games start with a character already partially corrupted. I think it would help with issues of pacing.

It would have helped immensely if Sophia had started out with an attitude towards sex comparable to other suburbanites of her time, place & socio-economic group. Early on it was, unfortunately, established that she had an almost puritanical outlook, regarding such everyday issues as getting undressed beside her own sister etc. I don't think many readers bought into this but the story's realism suffered. Sometimes I idly wonder what it would take to rewrite/re-calibrate some of the early scenes. If 6 months between updates does end up being the new norm the Dev could gain great kudos, IMO, if he also managed to adjust some anomalies.

 

[lockerxx]

by the way the game is again in the top 3 passing summertime saga!!!

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

It would have helped immensely if Sophia had started out with an attitude towards sex comparable to other suburbanites of her time, place & socio-economic group. Early on it was, unfortunately, established that she had an almost puritanical outlook, regarding such everyday issues as getting undressed beside her own sister etc. I don't think many readers bought into this but the story's realism suffered. Sometimes I idly wonder what it would take to rewrite/re-calibrate some of the early scenes. If 6 months between updates does end up being the new norm the Dev could gain great kudos, IMO, if he also managed to adjust some anomalies.

I can think of a couple of things I would like him to go back and tweak. But many people would only complain about the EVEN longer gap between updates if L&P went back and redid any part of AWAM, whether Renders or dialogue or exposition.